First page of my ongoing manga.

First page of my ongoing manga. - student project

So I had already begun my venture into making manga a few months ago starting in April. This isn't a page created specifically for this class but this was the first page of my manga then so I would like to get some feedback on it now and if you want to see the completed chapter or the series so far you can read it here: Whenever I release my next chapter I will post the first page here to better get feedback now since whatever I create now will probably better represent where I am skill set wise then from something back in April.First page of my ongoing manga. - image 1 - student project

Perry Edwards
A mangaka in the making