First Listing for my shop

First Listing for my shop - student project

https://www.etsy.com/listing/706053349/crystal-grid-wall-art-tigers-shade?ref=shop_home_active_3

Hey everyone,

Just getting going on Etsy trying to sell some of my crystal grid art. Any feedback is most welcome, and the area I'm wondering about most is the description. I went into alot of detail with these and am wondering how that will affect their searchability/their reader engagement.

Thanks for the class, definitely going to try some of the marketing tools!

Sean