Ken Uehara

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First Date: a chance of a lifetime

This message is a draft for online dating. It's similar to a cold-call, given that the reader won't know who I am. Names and specific details were changed to protect the blah-blah and so forth. I'd appreciate the feedback. Length? Too strong of a call for action? Memorability?

Hey HeartPetals54,

You must get bombarded by hundreds of boring messages - let's change that.

Your description for the street art platform really got to me (are all the photographed pieces your work?). There's a couple of great pieces that my group is working on, and I'd love to share some ideas on both our projects. If anything, I think we could at least be good friends from this.

At the risk of seeming too forward, here's what I'm thinking:

  • coffee
  • air hockey
  • sky diving 

Well, maybe we can save skydiving as a back-up plan. For now, maybe some coffee and lively conversation. What do you think?

~Ken

P.S. Are you any good at breakdancing? That's what came to mind when you wrote "old school dance" as a skill.

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