Daniel Gonzales

ATA: The Art of Visual Storytelling

I like it! Like the expression on the werewolfs face, but maybe you can make him look a bit more dangerous?

Nice idea, this is a really playful and funny piece :) I love the expression that the werewolf is making, you've really captured that emotion, using only a couple lines too. I agree that you should push the angles a bit more, the girl leaning in and the wolf leaning back. Another thing that struck me is the angle - we are looking at them from slightly to the side right? For some reason I feel like the shot should either be squarely in front, or much more to the side, but I'm not sure why so take it with a grain of salt. Great work!

I have to admit that when I started this drawing, I wanted it to be a straight-on shot but my drawing skills somehow twisted the angle a bit. I'm going to take a second pass at this and see if I can tighten it up a bit. Thanks so much for the help! 

I think this is a great start! Definitely try different sizes and post them.  I think his height is pretty good maybe he can fill up the car with his width.  You could also try making the girl smaller or shorter.   

I wish the image was bigger, but I can already say that I like the figure popping against the negative space. Watch the tangency of that branch lining up right with the top of the character's head.

Sorry, I jumped the gun. I just uploaded a new image that I created just for this assignment.

Oh gotcha, totally different image, disregard previous comment, haha. So this is a cool concept for sure. As far as angle, for some reason I had the thought of positioning the camera on the girl's side, so she would be bigger on the picture plane than the wolf. But, if the purpose of your image is to stress the size difference, I'd roll with the concept that you have right now. Check this image out, large creature being scared of a smaller creature. http://tv-facts.net/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Sulley-and-Boo-monsters-inc-wallpaper.jpg 

<p><img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/98277cef31fca6819339bd6cd9bfbbad/267390e9" alt="First Assignment (coming soon!) - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/98277cef31fca6819339bd6cd9bfbbad/267390e9 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/98277cef31fca6819339bd6cd9bfbbad/267390e9 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy"></p>
<p>Alright classmates, I found this play called "Creatures" about a girl and her boyfriend at a drive-in movie. The girl discovers that her boyfriend is a werewolf and confronts him. I thought the dynamic of a big wolf being yelled at by a smaller girl would be interesting. This is my first pass. &nbsp;Should I make the wolf even bigger? Should the girl lean in further? Is there a better angle? Other thoughts? Thanks!</p>


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