Vectorized: Overall I'm pleased.

I'm interested in adding some texture and getting better with my line width.

Touched up for Vectorizing:

Rough Sketch: 

I'll be lettering a quote from my favorite author, Kurt Vonnegut.

"Everything was beautiful and nothing hurt", from his book Slaughterhouse Five

I'd like the lettering to appear whimsical. Maybe slightly morbid? Or somewhere in between.