Neil Tasker

Love Your Letters: Communicate Visually with Words

Ryan, it looks sweet. I like the changes you've made and the textures you've added. It really gives it some nice character. The only thing I feel like bringing up is that the E&amp;N in END need to be kerned a little bit tighter. I love the way the serifed swooshes fall right into place in the word FED. If you could mimic that in the word END even though it's a higher baseline you'd have a SOLID piece. almost there! 

Thanks Letty! I completely agree with your critique. I'll try and see if I can make those adjustments/improvements. 

I would say the have the FED end at the same point as the D and E in the and end, so it has a nice even shape to it, the extrudes and shadows create a nice perspective to the piece and the ornaments as some nice character to the letters.

Thanks Neil. Appreciate the feedback. I'll work on fixing that up. 

<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/65830968" alt="End the Fed - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/65830968 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/65830968 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
I highly doubt anyone will see this since there are so many projects that have already been submitted... But something about the piece is throwing me off, potentially the kerning and/or weight of the letters? Maybe I've been staring at it too long. I'm also considering adding some sort of badge behind the lettering.&nbsp; Any suggestions are greatly appreciated! UDPATE:
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/991239a7" alt="End the Fed - image 2 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/991239a7 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/991239a7 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
UPDATE 2:
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/c6fc9384" alt="End the Fed - image 3 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/c6fc9384 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/2691c06a3527156c7a8f3e4e742b20ef/c6fc9384 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">

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