Emulating shape

Emulating shape - student project

Emulating shape - image 1 - student projectI took these photos last time was in Perth and used your suggestion of taking them all the way to edge. I like the Lest we forget in the sky line, but I would be interested in everyone’s comments .. is it too small.

I have tried to emulate the shape of the image with the text, but I am not sure it works. I would appreciate anyone’s feed back. Thank you for this class it was very helpful, I can see me watching it over and over.