Neil Tasker

Love Your Letters: Communicate Visually with Words

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Great to see the progress sketches! It is looking nice. Some pointers are that in Don't, the D is spaces too closely and the stem on the n is little thick as well. and for the r in afraid, the bar on the r that is slanting down from the f connection is a little odd I think the bar should be horizontal or even a little arched in, but the connection can stay the same if that makes sense! otherwise this is looking good@

<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/4c4157c5" alt="Don't be afraid to care - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/4c4157c5 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/4c4157c5 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">Song lyric: Pink Floyd
I haven't decided whether or not to leave this as a thin line, or to add weight to it.&nbsp;
Thoughts?<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/b7c1a61b" alt="Don't be afraid to care - image 2 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/b7c1a61b 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/477a840e0bfee99beb15e4af47d4dbe4/b7c1a61b 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">

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