Neil Tasker

Love Your Letters: Communicate Visually with Words

LOVE this! What I like the most about it are its imperfections and deliberate inconsistencies. I have two thoughts. First being can you change the downstroke of the D? The straight line feels awkward when the rest of the word has more whimsical line work. I also feel that the bottom part of the first E feels a bit heavy on the left hand side of the letter. (I'm sorry that I cant verbalize that any clearer.) But overall, I love the loops and shapes that you are creating. very very cool! :)

thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it

If you stumble across my project, I'd love feedback!

This is my first time lettering. I wanted to choose a short word to focus on. Desire came to my head, and then something like the image below I envisioned in my mind.
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/703abbc2" alt="Desire - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/703abbc2 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/703abbc2 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
Initial Sketch
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/3ee5669b" alt="Desire - image 2 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/3ee5669b 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/3ee5669b 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
 Draft
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/98e899c9" alt="Desire - image 3 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/98e899c9 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/98e899c9 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
Final
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/d9124ed9" alt="Desire - image 4 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/d9124ed9 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/4f7bf9db293194d7b670be5cb310ad4a/d9124ed9 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">

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