DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - student project

 

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 1 - student project

 

I tried the two i felt worked better  (please don't mind the incorrect title on the images lol good thing they are not final version)

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 2 - student projectDO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 3 - student project

 

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 4 - student project

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 5 - student project

I'm not loving it so far Imight start over with another of the ideas. 

 

I've been working this image a little more, to add more sadness to it: 

 

 

 

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 6 - student projectDO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT - image 7 - student project

 

This is my work so far! any input is greatly appreciated