Childhood memory + Digital painting

Childhood memory + Digital painting - student project

Hi all skillshares!

I really enjoyed this class. I am just starting drawing / painting using a Wacom, and this was great/fun.

In my initial sketch I added some text but I finally choose only images.
I would like to know if the story make senses.

All my childhood I lived in an building/apartment, so this was my main entertainment as a child.

I don't wanted to looks like a troll haha but I I am not sure if I got it.

Initial sketch:

Childhood memory + Digital painting - image 1 - student project

Final comic:

Childhood memory + Digital painting - image 2 - student project