Boom! Vegan vitamins

Boom! Vegan vitamins - student project

I'm an illustrator trying to learn some graphic design, mainly logos, brand identity, and eventually some packaging. I'd love to work on 2 or 3 more "pretend" projets like this one to build my portfolio until i feel confident enough to offer it professionally ! 

since i've done very few logos, i also added some options that didn't make it into the final, at the very end.

I'd be very grateful for any constructive criticism :) 

I'm french, so sorry in advance for the mistakes that might have slipped into the presentation !

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