Updated Dec, 9th 2012
This is late but I hope I still get some feedback. I blame Girls, and I don't mean I've been doing well at the bar this weekend. I mean I've watch 10 episodes of HBO in the last two days.
This is the story I’ve been mulling over.
Asian girls named Sam
This is a story from college and my growth as a dude. It has three parts:
11:15pm I think that I should call Sam Wong to come over, but I dunno. She'll take like 20 minutes to get here. Feeling meh about it for some reason...
11:30pm Decided I'm going to just watch some porn and jack off and go to sleep instead. That'll be awesome...and way easier.
12:30am... What the hell is up with me? I’ve been on Facebook for an hour. Am I really procrastinating from jacking off, which itself was procrastinating from having Sex over... wow
My biggest problem with this story is that it feels more like a bro-story than a good humor essay. I'm trying to show my progression or growth or something.
Questions for feedback:
Form: Story? My Journal? Her Journal? My Journal and her Journal?
Scope: Should I use just one part and write that, or should I try to tie them together?