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An unearthly glow

I have been trying to think of a story, and I can't seem to get one thought out...i'm slowly building it, I need a few more days as i have a lot of other school work due over the next few days :S ...Until then I will try  and get a sketch up and work out what's happening at the end, to know what's going to be properly happening in the begining.  

Once upon a time...

There was a young boy called Jack, with hair as dark and rough as dirt and eyes as green as grass. Jack’s story began when his parents moved into a new home on Brown Hill, far out into the outskirts of the deserted outback, a farm in a small town. Jack had never had any real friends to hang out with as, he was very quiet, but loved adventure.

And Every day...

Jack would gear up in his hand made cardboard plane and race out into the field exploring the the new land he now called home

Until One day...

Just before his bedtime, a distant orange glow caught Jack’s eye through his bedroom window.

And because of that...

Jack went against his parents rules about leaving the house at night. His curiosity got the better of him and so he snuck out after all the lights were out.

And because of that:

Jack bravely got into his cardboard airplane, put on his pilot badge given by his dad, and went out into the night until he got closer to the glow. Once Jack got close enough, he was finally able to get a glimpse at what what causing it....

And because of that...

Until finally...

And since that day...

The moral of the story is...

 I've thought of aliens, ghosts, lost boys and other weird stuff that could take place in the middle of the story, but still trying to think of something that fits, trying to lean away from a sad or mystery ending.  

 

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