All the World is a Stagedive

All the World is a Stagedive - student project

I would love feedback. This is my first time doing any sort of lettering, and can use all the suggestions I can get! 

I think the two words are competing for emphasis. I wanted the "Stagedive" to sort of leap of the edge, as if stagediving - but I think it doesn't go far enough. Was also thinking about drawing some simple hands underneath it.

It helps to see it here vs on the page, for some reason... perhaps because I'm used to looking at design that way?

All the World is a Stagedive - image 1 - student project

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3/29/13

New sketch, will bring it into Illustrator tomorrow for tracing.

All the World is a Stagedive - image 2 - student project

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4/1/2013

It's amazing how much more comfortable I am in Illustrator than with a pencil. Sad, but true. Final submission below. I'm not 100% happy, but I'm glad that I saw it through!

All the World is a Stagedive - image 3 - student project

Amanda Luker
Front End Developer