Airplane

Airplane - student project

Hello,

I'm Ve, from São Paulo, Brasil.

First of all, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this class!
Renato Palmuti, thank you very much for sharing this with us. I had a lot of fun doing this project and I have so much to learn and improve.
Please, make more classes like this one!

This is my first attempt. I was not so confident that I could have a good result, so I didn't add the final  touches to this first sketch.
I like what I did with the first wash, I love the colors of the floor, but I think I used to much pigment on the background. I didn't finish the airplane with the final touches because the drawing is incomplet.

Airplane - image 1 - student project

This is my second attempt. I added more details in this one and it made me want to finish the painting. I  think that I should use more pigment on the first wash defining the mood and I should be more carefull  doing the background. Since I'm a beginner with watercolors, It's difficult to know how to fix the mistakes.
I like the airplane but maybe I used too much color, because it seems a little opaque and I love the  transparency of the watercolors. I should spend more time drawing the glasses so, I painted it as it was a pair of paper box glasses made by a kid.

Airplane - image 2 - student project

That's all for now. I'll continue trying to achieve a better result because this exercise is really pleasurable. 


Obrigada, Renato!
Assim que possível, tentarei fazer um curso contigo em Sampa.

Abraço,

Ve

Ve Moraes

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