Adventure is out there

Adventure is out there - student project

Hello! This is really my first official hand lettering class that I've taken. In the past, I usually just doodle letters for the fun of it and didn't know that there are particular structures to it. 

Here is my first try with the phrase "Adventure is out there"

I used a regular ball point pen to trace over my pencil marks. Need to invest in a micron or something much thinner to get better lines.

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!