I opted to change it up a bit, just for fun. This is my first draft. Again, the drawings aren't the best, but I was trying to focus more on the storytelling then the art. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!
Now that you've read it, the idea I was trying to get across is that the minotaur got the girl...who promptly turned his man(minotaur) cave into a girly room. The minotaur was more then happy to get rid of the girl.
For this class I am purposfully trying to keep the art simple. I'm not that good of a artist and if I spend all my time working on the artwork, I fear I'll miss out on the storytelling aspect. Besides, if I get the storytelling right, the art style is irrelevant, right? :)