"You have three wishes, said the fairy." image without alteration (planning on using line and rhythm/repetition)

Hello everyone! Thank you Christine for the great lesson.

I am illustrating a book and its my first big project (75 pics) and I am having so much trouble with composition. I went for the "line" and "repetition" technique in hope that the image can have more "flow" and it feels a boy is standing and a fairy comes to talk to him and is "dancing/flying" around while delivering the message. Please let me know if you have comments to improve this image even more, but just with the change I made I feel its so much better. Thank you!


Here is the original image where I was compleetly lost:



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