Hey, My name is Randi. I have been writing for a while now but I feel like I am stuck and I haven't really grown.

Hope to get some pointers. This is a variation of the haunted house

Ginger

Ain was glad to babysit the Lims’ pet cat Mei and the house while they went out for their once a week date-night. Ain didn’t like cats but that wasn’t going to be a problem if Mei was locked in the storeroom. Ain could hear the cat scratching to get out but Ain ignored it all the way until she can’t ignore it.

“Hey asshole, diam!” She yelled from the sofa. The scratching didn’t stop. “Mei!”

“Meowwww,” Mei purred from next to Ain. She jolted up in fear. The scratching hasn’t stopped. Armed with only her phone, she walked to the storeroom.

“I have a weapon,” She said in hopes to scaring whoever or whatever it was. She opened the door to a silhouette of something indescribable.

“Hello?” She flashed her phone in its direction. Its head turned to her. Its eyes, two read light focused on her.

“Argh!” It growl and Ain felt something warm and moist down her pants. She turned ready to run only to fall face first on the floor.

“Fuck!” She yelled, she had tripped over Mei. Ain grabbed the cat and threw it towards the monster. The monster grabs Mei and gentle places her on the sofa only to focus back to Ain.

Ain knew she was fucked. The monster dragged her back into the store room despite her best efforts.

A few hours later, The Lim’s return happily to an Ain-less house.

“Do you think Ginger liked Ain?” Mrs.Lim asked Mei

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