Hi Ruth,

Attaching a few versions of my Ad copy that I created after watching this course. I created these Ads for my "Goal Planner" product. I would really appreciate some feedback about these Ads. Which version looks better?

I am targeting to publish it on Facebook/Instagram.

 

Using Emotional Language:

Version 1:

Constantly Procrastinating? Want To Change For The Better?

Get your Ultimate Goal Planning Journal Today and reshape the way you live your everyday life!

This planner helps you break big goals down into smaller, more manageable steps, and create action plans to help you achieve your dreams. It also helps you track your progress and make adjustments along the way so that you stay on track. Ultimately you turn your dreams into reality. Grab it now at learningexpressway.com and get started right away. 

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Version 2:

Want to finally follow through with your new year goals? Why don’t you let the Ultimate Goal Planner hold you accountable for your future?

This planner helps you break big goals down into smaller, more manageable steps, and create action plans to help you achieve your dreams. It also helps you track your progress and make adjustments along the way so that you stay on track. By tracking your progress, you can stay motivated to keep going even when things get tough. Ultimately you turn your dreams into reality. Get your Ultimate Goal Planning Journal Today at learningexpressway.com and Start Seeing Results!

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Version 3:

Constantly Procrastinating? Want To Change For The Better?

Get your Ultimate Goal Planning Journal Today and Start Seeing Results!

This planner helps you break big goals down into smaller, more manageable steps, and create action plans to help you achieve your dreams. It also helps you track your progress and make adjustments along the way so that you stay on track. By tracking your progress, you can stay motivated to keep going even when things get tough. Ultimately you turn your dreams into reality. Take the first step today and get it now at learningexpressway.com

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Harnessing curiosity:

Version 4: 

What type of individuals can ascend to great heights?

Anyone who is organized and motivated every step of the way. This planner helps you break big goals down into smaller, more manageable steps, and create action plans to help you achieve your dreams. It also helps you track your progress and make adjustments along the way so that you stay on track. By tracking your progress, you can stay motivated to keep going even when things get tough.

Don't wait another day to take control of your dreams - take the first step today and get it now at learningexpressway.com