Inner tag for Deadline Crew t shirts

Inner tag for Deadline Crew t shirts - student project

Inner tag for Deadline Crew t shirts - image 1 - student project

I am currently helping the Deadline BMX Crew with their  clothing line which is dropping when the greatly anticipated video they have been working on since I first did work for them in 2010.    This was the sketch I sent them as a hand done option for the inner tags of the t shirts coming out soon.  The D and XXL are place holders for the actual logo and an existing san serif typface.   As of now they are leaning with the simpler option. Inner tag for Deadline Crew t shirts - image 2 - student project

The hand done may be used for the next line, so im still going to work on refining it. 

any feed back on either is welcome and appreciated 

thanks

J. Mike Kuhn