Before and after

Here is a quote I did about a year ago. I chose it because it was a good example of what was bothering me about my script style. It was definitely off in many ways, but I had a hard time figuring out just how on my own.
Here it it is after the class. The lessons on spacing, connections, and not squashing the letters really helped me see what needed improving.
Still not perfect, that “what” definitely needs some realigning for one thing, but it’s mugh improved! This was such an informative and clear class. Thank you!