There are MANY ways to improve the same presentation, and here’s my take on the title slide!

Sample Project - image 1 - student project

First — I took away “Welcome!”

Sample Project - image 2 - student project I asked myself “are you sure we need everything here?”

The “Welcome!” was way too prominent and stole attention away from the information that's actually important, like the resort name, so I took it away.

Second — I changed the emphasis to the brand colour and resort photo.

Sample Project - image 3 - student project Since this is our title slide, I wanted it to stand out without adding unnecessary elements.

By I wanted my audience to feel immersed in our brand, so I emphasized the slide with colour.

Third — I put more focus on the logo and tagline.

Sample Project - image 4 - student project Now that we’ve created more space, we can bring more attention to the tagline and logo, which are the information I want my audiences to recognize.

Again, there’s no right or wrong ways to improve these slides!

Let me know what works for you, and I can’t wait to see all of your ideas!

Vickie @ D Story

Design & Storytelling Consultant

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