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1. Introduction Writing telling your story your way (with collage): Welcome to Writing
your Story Your Way. Hello, my name is Robin. I want to whether
you want to write a poem and put some
illustration to poetry, or you want to illustrate whole
pages for a book or story or video that
you want to share. This class is all about
illustrating through collage. Let me start from the beginning. In 1995, I started writing poetry during a time when I
was home with my children. It was a way for me to
have a creative outlet. I actually loved it. I didn't realize that it was so beneficial to me emotionally. I fell in love with that. Then from there, from poetry, I started writing other things. I was encouraged
because people were buying my poetry
and I was stunned. But it spurred me on
to want to do more. Later on I started
writing plays. We actually performed
a whole play. I'm also excited to share
that I wrote some books. One of the books that I
wrote is a children's book. It is called One Shot A Boy Makes a Shot Against
all Odds in the Game. I love this book. I wrote
the words to this book. I was very excited
about this book. But one thing that happened, it took me a long time to
write this book because I didn't know or feel
confident to illustrate it. The illustrations are awesome, but I didn't illustrate them. I said the next
book that I write, I'm going to figure out
how to illustrate it myself because I'm
very passionate about telling my story my way. One of the things that I did was I was scrolling
through Youtube, I saw someone illustrating
with collage and I thought maybe this is the way
that I can illustrate my book and I took
a leap of faith. That's what I'm going to ask
you to do in this class. Maybe you've never
done it before. We're going to do it together. I'm going to show you the steps. This is going to be
a 32 or 34 page book that is actually about
to be published. But we're not here to
talk about publishing, that's a subject for
a whole other class. But I want to help you
write your story your way. Why don't we get started? The first thing that you want to do when writing a
story is brainstorm. In terms of writing a story. It's a little book that
you want to write, or maybe it's just
for a newsletter. Maybe it's just something you want to share
with your children. Brainstorming is very important. Maybe you know what
you want to write. Maybe it's a story that
you've been thinking about, like me for a long time, but you just don't know
where to go with it. Maybe it's something
that happened when you went for a walk. Maybe it's a story
that you want to tell from your childhood. Here's what I would
ask you to do. If you do not know what story that you
want to write about, you can use this one as an idea. Think about your own childhood and something that happened, maybe one day that stands out and you will
never, ever forget. If you don't know what
you want to write about, choose that as a topic I
want you to just write. Do not worry about
grammar, spelling, You're just writing
anything that comes to your mind about this day. Let's assume it was a day when you got a puppy.
What are we going to do? We're going to
write about the day I got my puppy. So think about the smells. What did the puppy smell like? What about what he looked like? What was the occasion?
Was it a birthday? Was he wagging his tail? Maybe your sister actually wanted a puppy and
she didn't get one. Whatever you can think
about this story, I want you to just
write it down. Take a few minutes
and write it down.
2. Lesson 1 Brainstorm: The first thing that
you want to do when writing a story is brainstorm in terms
of writing a story. Or it's a little book
that you want to write. Or maybe it's just
for a newsletter. Maybe it's just something you want to share
with your children. Maybe you know what
you want to write. Maybe it's a story that
you've been thinking about, like me for a long time, but you just don't know
where to go with it. Maybe it's something
that happened when you went for a walk. Maybe it's a story
that you want to tell from your childhood. Here's what I would
ask you to do. If you do not know what story that you
want to write about, you can use this one as an idea. Think about your own childhood and something that happened, maybe one day that stands out and you will
never, ever forget. If you don't know what
you want to write about, choose that as a topic I
want you to just write. Do not worry about
grammar, spelling, You're just writing
Anything that comes to your mind about this day. Let's assume it was a day when you got a puppy. So
what are we going to do? We're going to write at the day I got my puppy. So think about the smells. What did the puppy smell like? What about what he looked like? What was the occasion?
Was it a birthday? Was he wagging his tail? Maybe your sister actually wanted a puppy and
she didn't get one. Whatever you can think
about this story, I want you to just
write it down. Take a few minutes
and write it down.
3. Lesson 2 Research: I tried to exhaust all the things that I
want to write about. You know why this is important? Because when I was
illustrating this latest book, there was a thought or
something that I wanted to include that I didn't have
in my brainstorm notes. So I had to go back and I had to redo some of the scenes because it was something
very important. In this instance, it
was just a creek. Now, it may sound like
it's unimportant, but it's a pivotal
part of this story. Part of the story that
you want to write. I would encourage you,
this is the point where if you know that you
want to write a certain story, that you would do your research. This is the part
that I would say, take your time, slow down
and do your due diligence. Writing your story is not
just putting it on paper, It's making sure that it's telling the story
that you want to tell. Some of the things that I
do is I go to the library, I'll look at books that help me to write children's story. This is research. I found some books that actually tell you how to write
a good story for children, how to make it interesting,
how to make it engaging, and how to write in a way that's relevant for
that child's age. And one thing that I also
learned was attention span. Children all have a
different attention span. And I'm sure you know
this if you have children of your own or if you've just
been a student in general, I've taught preschool
for years and three, four and five year
olds cannot sit still very long when you're
writing a story for them. You have to keep in mind
how long the book is, because I guarantee you a three year old is
not going to sit still for a 50 page book. It's just not going to happen in your research,
think about that. Who is your target audience?
Who are you writing for? Okay? You say children, is it a nine year old
or a two year old? Two year olds may tend to have hard back
board books, right? And of course, a nine
and ten year old, they might be beginning to read chapter books and so you're
still going to have pictures, but it's just going
to be a little different. What am I saying? I'm saying do your research, figure out all the parts of your story, also get feedback. This is so important. I have been to writers groups. I have used people who were artists to look at the book
and give me their feedback. You might not want
this all the time. But it's very important
because although your story, you're going to tell
your story your way, you want it to be enjoyable. You want it to be readable. You want it to be something that's going to be engaging
for your audience. I would say find
somebody that you trust and will give you some honest feedback about your book. And believe me, it's very
4. Lesson 3 Storyboard: What do you do from there? Now you're saying, I know
I'm ready to write my story. Well, one step that I thought
was very important was, and this is something that
I learned in my research. I didn't start out knowing this. One thing that I learned was the importance of
doing sketches. I will say that I am not a professional artist in
that I have drawing skills, although I've been
drawing all my life, never had any formal training. Although I love
drawing pictures, you say, how important is this? This is very important. What I did was, as I brainstormed about my story that I wanted to write
about, the little bird, I try to remember all the
scenes that were important for the story because
I wanted to tell the whole story.
These are sketches. Under each sketch,
they're notes. It's telling and describing what is happening in the scene. It's for me because when
I draw the picture, or when I tried to illustrate or when I illustrate
the picture, I wanted to capture
what is in the scene. I'm sure you know this,
but I wanted to show you the thumbnail
sketches that I did. Actually, these are big
and I did one of these for every page of my newest
book that's coming out. Okay. So now you don't have to make these
could be stick figures. It's really not
important how the images look as long as you know exactly what is
happening in your scene. But it doesn't
have to be a book. This could be a newsletter. This could be so many
different things. You could want to write a poetry story and you
want to illustrate it. I want you to be encouraged that a thumbnail sketches doesn't have to be done just for a book.
5. Lesson 4 Supplies Needed: Now you say you know the
story that you want to write. Did your brainstorm,
did your research? In fact, you might
already even know what your book or what your story
is and what your outcome, whether it's going to be
poetry just for your children, just for the library
or whatever it is. You know what it is. Now,
how do you get started? What are you going to? This
is what you're going to. You're going to need
some acrylic paint. You're going to need some glue. You can use whatever color you want for your acrylic paint. Now, why am I saying
acrylic paint? You're going to be taking
this acrylic paint and you're going to
need some craft paper. I think this might
be card stock. If this is all I have on hand, I don't want you to go out and buy anything extra special, but it's what you have on hand. Okay, build our collage. So for me, I wanted to try to have as many colors as possible. So all I did was take my
paper and start painting. Okay. This is not
anything fancy. Okay? Okay. Supplies you're
going to need. You're going to
need some scissors. You're going to need paint. And in this case it's acrylic paint and some
glue and some brushes. All these things I already had, I didn't buy any
of this stuff new. Okay, so you will need some other things when you're actually
making the collage. I will show you now. So you'll know you
may not need this, but in my collage I needed it. I made these characters
because that was the best way for
me to illustrate my characters in my story. Drawing them just
wasn't giving me the satisfaction that I
wanted with this character. These are actually
articulated paper dolls. I'm sure you probably
already know what that is. But in this case, the dolls I made, actually their arms move in their body parts move.
Can you see that? So you're saying why
is that important? Well, I found that
to be important because I was able to use the different characters
in different scenes as if I was using a digital device. So I was able to take this and put it on different
scenes in my story. That made it a lot easier for me to use the same characters
throughout the whole story. Okay? And so these are some of the other scenes
that I created in my book. Okay, You at some.
6. Lesson 5 Parts of a Story: Let's talk about the
story structure now. I'm sure you know this and I don't want to assume
anything at all. So we're going to
talk about, briefly, just the six parts of a
story. The background. We're exposition a
conflict rising action, a climax falling action,
and a resolution. With that said, we're going to take three
pieces of paper. Now, since we've already discussed and did
your brainstorm, you know all the pieces you want to be in your story,
you know this area. What you're going to do
is take each part of your story and just to begin to write what goes in
the background. In my story about my little bird was the
boy heard the sound. I'm going to write
the boy a sound. Okay, So you're
going to continue that as you go throughout
your whole story, right? So what else is in
the background? Maybe he had pets. It's just given us some
background about our story. And then next is
conflict in my story. The sound of a loud noise, the beginning of a conflict. It wasn't a full conflict. It was maybe part
of rising action. So you have to figure out where each part of your story goes. And once you have done
that, I want you to, once you've done all
that, now this should be full of your notes
from your brainstorm. Okay, so how is your
story going to end? That's your
resolution. How is it going to be at the
most exciting point of the story?
That's your climax. Okay, so what about the
rising action in my story? The rising action
started with the rain. As the rain came down,
there was thunder, there was lightning, and
the creek started to rise. So it was something that
carried the story along. Give me out, once
you have written all the notes that you think are part of the six
parts of your story, I want you to do sketches. Now, these could be
stick figure sketches. It doesn't matter. I want you to sketch
on each page what you think symbolizes your conflict. What symbolizes your
background information? What symbolizes rising action? You know your story. What
symbolizes your climax? The most exciting point. What symbolizes your
falling action? And what symbolizes
your resolution. Okay, so now, once
you have that, you are ready to begin illustrating your
story. Are you ready?
7. Lesson 6 Putting it all together: You have an idea of what you
want to do in your story. So I'm going to show you
how I actually did it. Okay, So now I'm
going to go in here and I need brown because
my trees are brown. Okay, I'm going to
pull out my brown. And this is the part where
it is going to get messy. I hope that you don't have on any fancy clothes because
it will get messy. So I'm going to pull
out some brown. Okay. And you have
your scissors. Now you can. Okay, wait a minute. Now this is where this is the part that's
going to be challenging. Okay? So now you have
your, your sketches. Okay? So I want you to be open to being flexible
as you illustrate. Because you're going to find that when you start
to actually do it, you're going to find
other elements. It's going to come into play. Okay, let's illustrate
our scene now, please. This is where I want you to relax and just feel what
it is that you want to do. It's no, right now I'm
starting my tree now. I want you to have fun with this process because
it's very relaxing. Maybe you could
put on some music and just keep going
because you know what, If you think about a tree, trees look and have so many
different shapes to them. One thing about this
glue is reposition glue. This is good because
when you put your strips of color
down, you can change it. Now, I have my first book that I illustrated that's coming
out next month in March. I'm excited about that. I just want you to see that
I'm beginning my tree. Okay. Okay, so you're going
to be ripping paper, You're going to, oops, ripping paper, finding
different shades of brown. So now I'm going to go
back in and see if I can find any other shades of brown that would
look good in my seen. Okay, so now I found some other. So this is what's
going to happen. You're going to start creating your characters
and your scenes, and you're going to be digging in to your files with
all your different colors, and you're going to be trying to make your scene look the
way you imagined it. And it doesn't have to be
exactly the way you imagine it. I just want you to have fun. This is the whole point of it. Now I'm making my tree. And guess what? There's
no right or wrong. Okay, But I want us to get back to our
story for a minute. I want you to keep your story in the forefront of
your mind all the time. Now I'm thinking about my background scene or the exposition in the
beginning of the book. I imagine that my character is outside of his house
and there's a tree. So that's the reason why I am. Now, maybe you put this in your brainstorm
that there was a tree. That is why it is important to add that to your brainstorm. Because if you don't guess what, you are not going to
have this tree in your scene right now. We're going to keep
making our tree. I don't know that you are trying to get your
work published. That's another conversation that we are not going to have. I do have several
books published and Actually, I wanted to
share some of the ones. I actually have a journal
that I published. I actually have a novella. I have two of these, as I mentioned, a
children's book. And I'm in the process of
publishing another one. But every publisher is going to have a
different requirement. That is the reason why I
can't really talk about that because it's just not
going to be specific. Now that we have the base
of our tree started, how about we get started with
some green, green greenery? Okay. Remember, remember a magazine clippings? This is where they are
going to come into handy. They're going to come in handy. I want you to know this is
going to be a messy process. So hopefully you
don't mind getting glue and paint everywhere because it's going to
be a messy process. What do I want to do? I want to put some green leaves. Now, here's what I would
say you are going to, okay? So remember what I said, You can cut your, you can cut them or you can
rip them and you're going to see that your ripped
collage paper is going to have a
different effect. It's going to have
a different effect than the ones you cut. So now what I want to
do is I'm going to make some branches, okay? Okay, let's do that. Okay? I want you to see that this is the process where you
build your story, okay? Okay. So now what
are we going to do? Okay? All right, one thing that's great
about this reposition of glue is that you can pick
up your work and just, you know, put it back
down and move it around. It's great. Okay, so now I'm making some
branches for our tree. Now see, this is a perfect
opportunity for me to say that I noticed that I don't
have a lot of dark brown. I have mostly tan. Next time you do your painting, do your collage prep work, you might realize that you
might need a different color. Okay, So just be
in tune with that. Now what I'm going to do is I'm going to cut
out some leaves, but this time I'm
going to cut them out. I'm going to cut them out, and I'm going to do it
with scissors, okay? Because I really want
them to look authentic. Okay, so here we go. Mm hmm. I hope you're having fun. Is this should not be stressful. It should be relaxing. It should be relaxing. Now in this class, what you're going to do is
as you develop your story, whatever you want to write, you're going to do that
and you're going to actually incorporate your own, your own illustrations in it. Now I want you to
know that in this, in my book, Jordan
meets Songbird, that, that I used
collage clippings, But I had to also use a
little bit of digital art. Because the reason I
had to use digital art, which it turned out
to be pretty good, is because there was
an element that I did not think about when
I did my brainstorm. That is the reason why it is important for you to try to think of everything
that's in your story. Now it's okay because you won't be able to
think of everything. It's just the way
it is. But just so you know, if you can. Try your best think of everything that you
wanted having there. You won't have to go
back and redo it. I had to actually
go back and redo a scene because I hadn't put it down in
my brainstorming notes. Okay. So now, okay, now we're getting our
leaves on the tree, and then you have to think
about what time of year is it? Is it summer, spring,
winter, fall? Right. Okay. So okay. All right. Mm. Just be prepared
for some messy fun, okay? Okay. All right. Okay. All right. All right. So now we're going to put
a few more leaves on here. Mm. Our tree is coming along. It's coming along nicely. You don't have to be so precise. Okay. And depending on what
it is that you're going for, perhaps you want to
illustrate some shapes. Maybe this is for
young children and you could make your leaves
in different shapes. It's your story,
your way, remember. That's what this is all about. Okay? All right, so now
our tree is coming along. Now it might be a good
idea if, you know, you're going to be
doing trees and leaves to cut out the little
leaves ahead of time, Okay? So now here we are. I just wanted you to see
where we were with our tree. We go a little further and we put some grass down at
the bottom of our tree. How about that? Let's try that and then we'll be done with
this illustration for now. Okay? All right, so one thing about this, I
want you to have fun. Okay? And to be confident
to know that you can do it because it's fun. There's a lot of detail
work and I hope that you don't mind detail
work because I do. It makes your story
look engaged in. And remember your audience. Who is your audience? What are they going to think
about the illustration? That's really important. I mean, it's so important. So important. Okay, so now I'm just
taking the green strips, I'm just putting them down here. It's going to be at
the bottom of my tree. And like I said, this these
little magazine cutouts, they are super for collage. I mean they're thin, they go on. It's like a dream. I just wanted you to see where we were and how
it is shaping up. I'm going to put
some more leaves on here and I'm going
to put some flowers. But I wanted to give
you a little tip. I have scrapbooking paper with all kinds of designs already on them and many
of them have flowers. With the illustration that
I did here with my book. I don't know if you can see that these were from the
scrap booking paper. They already have flowers in design, so I cut
out some of them. I thought that would make
our story so interesting. And it does look at that. These are from that. This is from a magazine that is from our scrapbooking paper. Your collage is going to have so many different
elements in it, it's just going to make your
story more interesting. Okay, so let's see where
we are with our tree. Let's put a little bit more now. This is your collage, your way, so you can stop and make it
as detailed as you want. That is the key.
It's your collage. Okay, so. Okay, so let's see what
else we have, okay? Now, this might be an area where you want to rip your paper down here
with the grass. If you're doing
grass, you may not need to snip it with scissors. It all depends on
what you're going to. I'm going to stop right here. And one thing that I can
say that I am really, I'm really, really
enjoying collide so much that I really don't want to stop, but I have to stop. Okay. Okay. Okay, here we go. Okay. Okay. So now this is one
thing about collage. You have to remember,
it's changeable. You can lift it up,
you can change it. It's not etched in stone. You can reposition things. Just have fun with it. Just have fun in this situation. What I did was I used text boxes to incorporate inside of this and I will show you
that in a minute. Can you see that?
Because I know where each part of my story is supposed to line up
from my brainstorm. I know where to add it. My I added here in text boxes. It's just something for
me to frame my story. It is not ready yet, but this is my practice book. This is practicing
to see how I can make my story line up
with my collage work. I'm quite proud of
what I'm doing. So I just wanted you
to be encouraged to know that you can also
do the same thing. Like I said, this is a
practice book for me. But I wanted you to see how
the illustrations can be I'm added to text or text can be added to illustration to
tell your story your way. In this class, you're
going to do just that. At the end of our course, you're going to
have an assignment. And it could be
whatever you want. It doesn't have to be a
little children's book. It could be a poem that
you want to illustrate. The poem will go inside of your book or inside of the card. Okay. And it could
be a newsletter. I want you to know it doesn't matter what it is
that you're writing. You can use collage art to illustrate your
story your way. Thank you for being a
part of this course and I look forward to seeing what
it is that you have created.