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1. Welcome: Hello, My name is Sophia and I'm a writer and
writing instructor. Welcome to the brightest
technique masterclass, a multi-part series where you're really learn how
to hone your style. This module, how to vary
your sentence structure. Part one, we'll discuss the
four types of sentences. Simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex from a
writer's perspective. Now the sentence types
may be familiar to you. In this course,
we're going to go beyond the conventional
grammar lesson, as well as looking at
how to structure and punctuate each sentence
type correctly. We'll explore how you can use specific sentence types to create particular
effects on the reader. Workbook is provided in
the course description. And you've got to
practice not only writing individual sentences, but also whole paragraphs using a particular
sentence structure. This will really help
you get conscious of which sentence
types you're using. And when you can go integrator command if
you're writing style. I know even as an
experienced writer, I got a lot from
doing the exercises. And I hope you'll get
as much out of doing this course as I have
out of writing it.
2. What is a Sentence (Simple Sentences): To have a sentence, we need
to have a subject and a verb. A subject is a person, place, or thing that's doing an
action is often a noun. It can also be a
pronoun or a phrase containing a noun and other
words associated with it. The subject usually
comes before. A verb is an action, a state, or a state of being. And verbs change
tense depending on the time period in which the action or state
of being a cat. The most basic form of a sentence consists
of only two words, for example, than eight here, and it's the subject or the
person doing the action. And eight is the verb, the action that the
subject is doing. However, this
sentence, Ben eight, is not exactly exciting and it doesn't tell you an awful
lot of information. So usually we have
other things in a sentence besides the
subject and the verb. Usually even in a
simple sentence, something follows the verb. This is often a second noun. For example, in the
sentence, Ben ate lunch. The second noun, lunch, which follows the
verb, is the object. In a sentence, the object
is the person, place, or thing that's acted
upon by the subject. In this case, lunches acted
upon by Ben who waited. However, it's not always a noun that follows a verb
in a simple sentence. There's lots of other things
that can follow a verb to. For example, then eight quickly. Here we have the subject and
the verb plus the adverb quickly than eight to survive. In this case, we've got the
subject and verb followed by an infinitive to survive. However, these two
examples are still simple sentences
because they only contain one subject
and one verb. Now these sentences
might be very basic and easy to construct. But when you get to
writing a text with much longer sentences and
more elaborate sentences, short simple sentences
will be really useful to break up the
complexities and draw the reader's attention
to key points. Have a look at how the short
simple sentence works in this paragraph from a job application cover
letter, for example. The paragraph reads, I am
highly experienced having taught English to
children abroad and in the UK for over 20 years, I would bring to the possession a wealth
of teaching strategies. I've taught from all levels, from beginning to advanced. And my cater to a range
of learning styles, visual, auditory,
and kinesthetic. This case, the simple sentence
I'm highly experienced, introduces the main idea of the paragraph in a clear
and concise manner. In the context of a
longer sentences that follow its brevity draws
the reader's attention.
3. Exercise 1: Simple Sentences: Before we look at longer and
more complicated sentences, Let's do an exercise to consolidate what we've
looked at so far. Now's a good time to
look at exercise one. It'll give you
practice identifying the subject and verb
and simple sentences. You've got the
opportunity to write your own simple
sentence. In a second. I'm going to screenshot
the document with you. But a copy of the
document has been provided along with
the course for you to complete.
Let's take a look. In exercise one part a
questions one-to-five. You need to identify the subject and verb of each sentence. Let's do the first one together. The sentence here is
some run on the subject. The person doing
the running is sad. Then the verb, the
action or state of being that's taking
place is run. Then in part a, you've got five more
questions here, which I'll leave to
you to do on your own. Now, in part b, you got to write your
own simple sentence and then identify the
subject and the verb. So a simple sentence, kid bay. I went to the park. The subject would be I, That's the person going. And then went, is the bulb. Now, have a go at creating your own simple sentence with
a single subject and verb. Remember to save your work as
you go because there'll be an opportunity to
share your answers. And some of the extended
writing passages will do later in the course
with a community.
4. Compound Sentences: When simple sentences I used a form part of a longer
compounds or complex sentence. The often referred to as main clauses are
independent clauses. Even though simple sentences
can be very emphatic, entire text written out two simple sentences
would get booming. So we need other sentence
types to increase the pace, create grammatical variety, and connect ideas to each other. Compound sentences of
one such sentence type. They can consist of two simple
sentences joined together. For example, it was cold, I went home is a pair
of simple sentences. To create a compound sentence, we join them together. It was cold. And I went home. To join the two simple sentences together into a
compound sentence, we need to use the
coordinating conjunction in the example of the
coordinating conjunction is. And. However, there are seven coordinating
conjunctions in English. And you can remember these conjunctions using
women dynamic FANBOYS. Fanboys stands for, for and, nor, but, or yet. So. Let's have a look at how some of these conjunctions
work in sentences. Festival for I went to
the park for it was sunny and I ate rice
and he ate pasta. No, he would not sleep, nor would he breast. But I am hungry, but it is not dinner time yet. Or we could go to the park
or we could go to the pool. That he was tired, yet he could not sleep. He revised so he could get
good marks on the test. Now, you'll notice that a few of these conjunctions for yet, and to an extent nor sounds
a little bit old fashioned, especially when
they used to join two main clauses
together like this. For the purposes of
most modern writing, you want to concentrate
on, but or unsafe. Why as a writer, would you use
compound sentences? Well, we use compound sentences to create longer sentences, increase the pace of attacks and draw connections
between ideas. For example, this text is created entirely from
simple sentences. I wanted to visit the park. It was pouring. I
waited for an hour. This done. The sun started shining. I stroll to the park. Trees towered by the gate. Flowers bloomed in the borders. The beauty amazed me. Now, the way this is
written is really boring. This is partly
because the structure of every sentence is the same. It's also because
full stops tend to indicate to the reader that
they should take a pause. So the fact that every
sentence is short makes the tax sound quite abrupt and slows down the pace
at which you read it. We can create some variety flow and speed by joining
some of the sentences together using coordinating conjunctions to
create compounds, to create compound sentences. For example, I wanted to visit the park,
but it was pouring. I waited for an hour, the sun started shining, so I strove to the park. Tree is towered by the gates and flowers bloomed
and the borders. The beauty amazed me. Now, this version is somewhat more interesting,
chromatically speaking, because there were
fewer full stops in the second example, the pace is somewhat faster. The coordinating
conjunctions also help to show relationships
between ideas. If I was prevented from going to the park because
it was raining. So it tells us that I went to the park because the
sun was shining. However, it's important
to be careful not to use too many coordinating
conjunctions in one sentence. We could, technically speaking, the whole text in one sentence using coordinating conjunctions. I wanted to visit the park, but it was pouring, So I waited for an hour and
the sun started shining. So I strove to the park. Tree is towered by the gate. I'm flowers bloomed
in the borders and the beauty amaze me. I'm out of breath. That's part of the problem
with using Team and the coordinating conjunctions
in one sentence. We don't have anywhere to
pause anywhere to breathe. Side. The sentence is difficult to
follow because it makes you sound quite hurried
when you read it. And there's just too
many ideas here, all in one, all in one breath. So just as a rule of thumb, one or on occasion to coordinating conjunctions is
enough for each sentence. Now, just before we
try an activity, I want to make a few
comments about commas. Some people put a comma before the coordinating conjunction
in a compound sentence. For example, the sun
started shining comma, I stroll to the park. Now, I think whether
you do this or not depends in part on wherever
in the world you come from. I've noticed quite a lot
of grammar texts from the USA tell people to have a comma in the middle
of a compound sentence, at least under some
circumstances. However, in the UK
where I guess you can tell from my accent
is where I'm from. We're generally
not taught to use this comma except where
needed for clarity. For example, in a sentence
that's got multiple clauses. So more than one rule of thumb. Stylistically, as
the comments tend to cause the reader to
take a little pause, lots of applause
then a full stop, but it's still a pause. If you want a sentence
it to read like this, the sun started shining. I strove to the
park, use a comma. But if you want the
sentence to read like this, the sun's
light is shining. So a stroke to the park with
no breath in the middle, then you don't use a comma.
5. Exercise 2: Compound Sentences: Now we've looked a little
at compound sentences. It's a good time to
dive into exercise. In this exercise, you'll
get a chance to join some simple sentences together using coordinating conjunctions. You'll get to write
a short tax to using simple and compound sentences
to look at exercise. Let's go through the
first example together. Now the instruction
hair as to join parts of sentences together using coordinating conjunctions. And the coordinating conjunctions
we're going to use and, but, or and. So. If we look at the first example, my sister and I could
go to the beach, we could go to the pool. We've got two simple sentences. Hair. What I can do is copy
and paste this here. My sister, an ICU go to
the beach and then I add a coordinating conjunction. And in this sense, in this
case, all make sense. So I add, or we could
go to the pool. That's a few more
examples here for you to do in your own time. Now, part b. In part b, it using again the coordinating
conjunctions and, but, or and psi. To write full sentences. Remember you use
these conjunctions between two simple sentences. Say that's a half a guy. If we're going to use rads, some tea vein. Now we've got, we've
got a simple sentence. Hey, I read a book, Thoughts a sentence in its
own right, with a subject I. And if Brad, and
then some watch TV likewise has a subject
and a verb watch. They're both sentences, simple sentences joined them together with the conjunction. And then for T 34, you'd look at the
other conjunctions, say sentence with box, a, sentence with all in a
sentence with psi, and so on. In Part C, You've got the
opportunity to unity in six or seven sentences to describe a time when you
went for a day trip. So I, this is your
first little bit of extended writing is probably going to be about
two paragraphs loan. You're asked to
restrict yourself to only simple and compound
sentence structures. You might find that this makes your writing style
seem quite basic. But honestly, when I write the model for the US
and you can, if you need to, you can refer back to
that paragraph I wrote about going out to the park. I put it in the previous video. I've really learned
a lot just by restricting my style and writing
a paragraph in that way. Sorry, I think you'll
find that useful. Remember to save
your work as you go. Take photos if you're working on paper because they're
being offered changes to shovel your answers and your extended piece of
writing with the community.
7. Exercise 3: How to Simplify Compound Sentences: In this exercise, you've
got the chance to get rid of some of the repetitive
words from compound sentences. Sorry to look at the
first example together, we've got Jerry likes apples, but Joe does not like there's
no eat oranges rather. We have a problem. Potentially had Joe as repeated. You've got it By before the coordinating conjunction
and immediately after. Usually when you've
got that repetition and the t halts at the sentence, you can get rid of
the second appearance of the word or words. Likes apples, but we got rid of the second die.
Eat our interests. You've got some more to do here. But one of them, you
can't remove any words from the two halves of the
sentence, the T different. Say here you've got
a little space to write the trick
question number is, for example, tea or
wherever you think it is.
8. Complex Sentences: Like a simple sentence, complex sentences have
a single main clause. However, in addition to this, they have a subordinate clause. Subordinate clauses always start with a subordinating
conjunction. There were lots of
subordinating conjunctions in English more than we could
possibly go through here. But they do divide and
seven main categories. Let's take a look. The
common categories, subordinating
conjunctions are time, for example, after a CNS. Now that conjunctions or
place, where or wherever, for example,
conjunctions of manner, how, as f, as though comparison. Whereas rather than
whatever reason. Because sense as condition if in case unless
concession. Though. Although, even though now
a lot of the reasons why we might use subordinate
clauses in a piece of writing are implied by these categories of subordinating conjunction. Subordinate clauses can add extra information to a sentence. For example, where, when or how something
has taken place. They also help to add logic
to a description or argument. For example, by giving
reasons for a point made in the main clause or by drawing comparison with something
mentioned in the main clause. Let's take a look
at some examples of the subordinate clauses and
conjunctions and action. Here's a compound sentence
with a subordinate clause. I'll get changed as
soon as I get home. Now, notice here that the subordinate fluids is
at the end of the sentence. The subordinating
conjunction is as seen us, and the subordinate clause, which like all
subordinate clauses, starts with a conjunction, is as soon as I get home. The subordinate clause is
informative and tells us. That. Tells us when
you'll get changed. Because that's
extra information. However, it's important
to note that it is indeed extra information that the subordinate clause by clause subordinate clauses
cannot function as an independent sentence. If we look at the two halves of the sentence, I'll get changed. The main clause. And
as soon as I get home, the subordinate clause, you can see that I will get changed. The main clause can
actually function as a simple sentence
in its own right. However, the subordinate clause, as soon as I get home, cannot function as a
sentence in his own right. It just doesn't make
any sense on its own. Let's look at another example
of a complex sentence. Although studied
late into the night, she failed the test. Now, in this case the
subordinating conjunction, although the subordinate clause, although Emma studied late into the night or at the
start of a sentence, it can be useful to put subordinate clauses at
the start of a sentence because due to the
fact that they start with a conjunction
rather than a subject, they can help very fast. Passages of writing web, most sentences start with a
subject plus verb pairing. Notice that when a
subordinate fluids comes at the start
of the sentence, it's separated from the
main clause by a comma. However, black in
the first example, it can also move the
subordinate clause, the end of the sentence, MFA failed the task, although she started
late into the night. Notice that when the
subordinate clause comes at the end
of the sentence, you did not need to separate it from the main
clause with a comma. Now, you might also pick
up, for an example, I kept the proper noun Emma, near the start of the sentence, rather than moving it to the end of the
subordinate clause. You do not always need
to change the nouns to pronouns and pronouns
to announce like this. But sometimes as in this case, the changes needed for clarity.
9. Exercise 4: Complex Sentences: In part a, you have
the opportunity to identify the
subordinating conjunction and the subordinate fluids
and a series of sentences. If we look at the
first one together, because it was raining, the match was canceled. We've got the subordinate
clause here at the beginning. Sorry the conjunction because
I will write because here, the subordinate clause,
because it was raining. We put that here. There's a few more
to do on your own. In part. You got to
rewrite the sentences. Say that a subordinate
clause is at the end. In part b, you got to
rewrite the sentence says, Well, that's a subordinate
clause at the beginning. And you have to
move it to the end. Just to remind you, you
need to drop the come up when you move the
subordinate clause to the end. So in this example, if
you eat too many sweets, There's our subordinate clause. Teeth will decay.
That's our main clause. We're gonna swap them
around, say, your teeth. Well, decay now is fast. We drop the comma
and then we write f. Eat too many sweets. There's a couple more sentences for you to complete
on your own time. Now part C is the opposite. So we've got the subordinate
clauses, for example, because my alarm
did not go off at the end of the sentence and the main clauses
at the beginning. And we're going to
swap them over. Because it did not. Then we put a comma
because they're subordinate clauses at the
beginning of the sentence. I am late as all main
fluids, and so on. Now, in Part D, you're gonna write your
own subordinate clause as I want you to try experimenting with
three different subordinating conjunctions. There's a list of a few
here on the worksheets. Equally, you can also use any of the ones in the course or
any others that you know. We're going to write a sentence
with each coordinating, with each subordinating
conjunction. Try and experiment to at
least one of the sentence says pit the subordinate
clause at the start. At least one put it at the end. So if I just pick
the, the conjunction, often, put this at
the beginning. Sorry. I went cheap at
subordinate clause. Then we put a comma,
I fall asleep. That's all main
fluids at the end. Now just to vary up a
bit and to experiment, I'm going to choose indifferent subordinating
conjunction. And I'm going to pit the
subordinate clause at the end. Let's use where. All conjunction. I went to the park. I could say lots of books. Again, may influence subordinate clause
in the second half. Now, part e is where the magic
is really going to happen. Your task here is in six
or seven sentences to write about a time when you were looking forward
to an event, but it got canceled. And at least two
of your sentences, she talks subordinate clauses. And the other sentences. You can use, simple sentences
and compound sentences. Sorry, we got three sentence
types that you can use. But before you
actually try this, Let's dive in and have a little look at a model
and how this will work. These paragraphs
actually stem literally from my own experience at
the start of the pandemic. I had planned to attend some facilitating
workshops in order to learn more about nature
and climate change. It was February 2020. The workshop leaders had asthma, so they canceled the workshop. Well, there I felt
disappointed I found the new direction during those early days
of the pandemic. I cycled out with the
city every day at witnessed the blossoming of spring in the unseasonably warm, much sunlight nature
we're showing me about her wonders onto
our impending destruction. Fast hand. Sorry to highlight a few features of
the extract for reference. There are two complex sentences as subordinate clauses here. The first subordinate clause, in order to learn more about
nature and climate change, change comes at the end
of a complex sentence. The second subordinate
clause is, although I felt disappointed. And this comes at the start
of a complex sentence, this position at the
start is particularly effective because it
helps to create variety. Aside from this sentence, every sentence starts
with a subject plus verb. So having the conjunction
at the startup, one of the sentences
add some interest. Aside from these
complex sentences, there are a couple of
compounds sentences. For example, the workshop
leaders had asked Mr, they canceled the workshop. Here the two hearts with
the sentence are joined by the coordinating
conjunction psi. Overall with a predominance of complex and compound
sentence structure as many of the sentences
are moderately long. However, in the first paragraph
or short simple sentence, it was February 2020 is used. It is used for contrast and dramatic effect
to suddenly alert the reader to the fact
that this narrative took place in the
shadow of the pandemic. Remember to save
your work as you go. Take photos if you're
working on paper. Because there'll be
an opportunity to share your answers and your extended piece of
writing with the community.
10. Compound-Complex Sentences: As the name suggests, compounds, complex sentences
combine the features of a compound sentence with the features of a
complex sentence. More specifically, they contain at least two main clauses and at least one
subordinate clause. For example, when I was
jogging, it started raining, but I can't read on
the subordinate clause here is when I was joking, the subordinating
conjunction being one. The two main clauses are it started raining
and I carried on. In this case, the
coordinating conjunction joins the two main
clauses together. However, we can write compound, complex sentences with the
clauses in different orders. The subordinate
clause can come at the beginning, middle, or end. Let us look at some
examples of how that works. In the first example here. Because it was called SAM war his jumper and bobbed onto hat. The subordinate
clause because it was cold comes at the
beginning of the sentence. Before the pair of main clauses, somewhere, his jumper
and Bob bought the hat. The second example, the customer complaint until
he was blue in the face, but the manager wouldn't lesson the subordinate clause until
he was blue in the face, comes between the
two main clauses, the customer complaint, but
the manager wouldn't listen. In the third example, the baby cried so her parents wake up even though
they were exhausted. The subordinate clause
comes at the end. It's there, they were
exhausted and it comes off to the team
may include this. The baby cried to
her parents woke up. Notice also the
punctuation pattern here. Punctuation in compound
complex sentences can be a little bit more subtle than
in other sentence types. And it depends a
little bit on what your style is and the meanings
that you wish to convey. However, in general,
put commas after the subordinate clause unless
it appears at the end of a sentence in which
you use a full stop. Otherwise you don't necessarily need commas in other places, but you come at
them for stylistic fact remembering of course, that comments tend to
make the reader to take a pause and therefore might
help to separate ideas. Now, as you can see from the examples we've
worked through so far, compound complex
sentences are great for showing connections
between multiple factors. For this reason that
particularly useful for writing good explores
complex topics and ideas. However, because they show relationships between
different factors, it's important to get the
orders of the clauses right? If you're meaning,
sometimes you can be if the subordinate clause
and the sentence still maintains close to
its original meaning. And it can be
helpful to do this. To me, the subordinate clause, just to help with the
flow of your paragraph. Let's take an example of why we take a look at an example
of where we can do this. Because it was cold some war his jumper and
bobbed on the hat. Now we've got the
subordinate clause at the beginning here
because it was cold. However, we could equally
write some war his jumping because it was
cold and bobbed onto hats. Subordinate clause
in the middle. Or we could also write somewhere his jumper and bob down to half because it was cold with a
subordinate clause at the end. Now, all three of these
make perfect sense. And in this case, moving the subordinate clause
works because the reason for by some light bulbs
actions, the code weapon. We can put the
subordinate clause, which explains that the ease of the main clause about some
older man clothes about bulb, and it's still clear
that both of them were affected by
the cold weather. However, if we can't always move the subordinate
clause like this, it really depends on the
meaning of the sentence. In this example,
the baby crying. So her parents woke up even
though they were exhausted. The subordinate clause, even
though they're exhausted, relates only to the permanent. Therefore, we can't move it to near the clause
about the baby. Even though they were exhausted, the baby cried so
her parents wake up. Now this doesn't make sense. It makes the baby
sounds like it's more than one person and
that it's exhausted. Similarly, the baby cried even though they were exhausted, so her parents wake up. Again, just does
not make any sense. The rule of thumb
here is to keep the subordinate clause near the main clause, which
it relates to you.
11. Exercise 5: Compound-Complex Sentences: In part a, you get to identify the subordinate clause and the two main clauses in a series of compounds,
complex sentences. So if we look at the
first example, the gaba, because the king was a tyrant, the jail was filthy and
the prisoners were hungry. We've got a subordinate clause here because the king
was at its high rents. And my encloses has
a jail was filthy. And then the second
main clause is here, the prisoners for hungry. There's a few more
questions here for you to do in your own time. Now, we've got five sentences that have no commas in them. You need to add the comments n. Now, remember, you
generally put the comma off to the subordinate
clause if it comes at the start or in the
middle of the sentence. And otherwise you use comma where needed if you
want the pores. Let's take a look at the first example so
that they could get fat Zara jokes every weekday
and Zach swam every weekend. Well, as subordinate clauses, hair that he could get fit. So I will put a comma in there because the subordinate clause is not at the end
of the sentence. And then we've got
our two main clauses and we don't particularly
need a comma. You could put 1.5. It's not some requirements. Then there's a few
more huffy today. Then we've got some
tricky sentences. Three sentences, hair turf them. Don't really make sense because the clauses are in
the wrong order. And you've got to identify
the two sentences that are wrong with the clauses in
the correct order here. If we take a look at
the first example, in order to stay dry, it looks like it
was going to rain, so I bought an umbrella. It doesn't make sense.
Or does it stay dry? Needs to go at the
end of the sentence. So we'd move it to the end of the sentence and write it here. In Part D, you're going
to write three compound, complex sentences of your own. And the first tried to put the subordinate clause at
the start of sentence. In the second, put
it in the middle and then the thoughts but at
the end of the sentence. So just to give you an idea, I'll start with the
first example site with a subordinate clause at
the start of the sentence, we're gonna guys, it was winter. The sun was shining and
the sky was bright. That we have it. And then you'd write
sentences with a subordinate clause in
the middle at the end. Now, pot a as well, the real magic of
this course happens. You got to put everything
you've learned so far together and you're gonna
write a couple of paragraphs, six or seven sentences. When she describe
a time when you had to make a
difficult decision. Within the six or
seven sentences, you need to encode
two compounds, complex sentences, as well
as of a sentence types such as compound,
simple, complex. And so before you do that, I'm gonna show you an example
of how this might work. Let's take a look. I could not decide
whether to leave my job. Well, there I wanted the
freedom of self-employment. I'd recently both a flat and
I needed financial security. I was caught in a cycle of
indecision as a result, I hated my boring job at the office and along
to pursue my passions, not abandoned my
regular paycheck. I finally took the plunge
during virus quarantine when Sydney senior
decision-making brought this situation to a hat, the majority of my company
was finite, but I was not. So I bought the brands
of everyone's black. It was time to leave. A few useful grammatical points to note
from this example, our compound complex sentences helped to highlight
the competing, competing needs that
led to the dilemma. Security and a regular
paycheck on the one hand, and the freedom to pursue
passions on the other. Here's the examples. Well, there I wanted the freedom
of self-employment. I'd recently bought a flat and I needed to financial security. I hated my boring job at the office and lumped
per team my passions, my dad not abandon
my regular paycheck. Other sentence types are used, for example, a complex sentence. I finally took the plunge, cheering virus quarantine
when seeing IT decision-making vote
the situation to a hat. This type of sentence
structure shows that it was a single reason the actions of senior management that led
to the final decision. Compound sentence with three rather than the more
common two clauses. It is in the majority of
my company was finite, but I was not, sorry, bore
the brunt of everyone's work. This builds energy towards
the final resolution. It's followed by a short simple sentence which is emphatic because of its brevity and highlights the conclusion
if the dilemma, it was time to leave. Now it's over to
you to write about your own dynamic using compound, complex sentences and
other sentence types. And everyone's really looking forward to seeing what
you come up with.
12. Creating Your Own Sentence Structures: I hate through what
we've covered so far, you've gained some
insight into how to use different sentence types
and what to use them for. But just before I
conclude the module, I really want to emphasize that now you understand
the basic concepts, it's time to take the
sentence structures and make them your own. Adapt them to your own
style, content, and purpose. Well, grandma is a discipline and can seem quite mechanical, enormous scientific at times, writing is an art school. I just wanted to leave you
with a few final examples, an exercise which reflects this. Here are a few examples. Mother could not decide where
we would have our die out. And I wanted to go to the park because she liked exercising. But Adam wanted to go to the
library because he liked reading and baby aid and cried whenever he
left the house. We've got a very long compound, complex sentence here is
essentially a list with three main clauses each
followed by subordinate clause. Now it's important
to be careful to use these types of
long sentences with CAM in your own writing so it doesn't become
overly wordy. But in this case, the sentence structure
is quite effective, is it helps to convey
the complexity of the children's
competing needs and the difficulty of
reaching a consensus. Let's take a look
at another example. Because his grandfather
was sleeping bop tip toe around the house
so as not to disturb him. This case, we have a
compound sentence, but with two rather than the usual one
subordinate clause. The main idea in the main clause is the bulb tip paint
around the house. The T subordinate clauses
enabled the writer to convey the tube
related reasons for the action that bulbs
grandfather was sleeping and the bulb
didn't want to disturb him. Those are ways
that you can embed a subordinate fluids in parenthesis within
the main clause. For example, Ben, that he was only 11, seemed
to precocious. Hey, the subordinate clause,
though he was only 11, is inserted between the
subject and the verb was. It's not at the start
of the sentence normally at the end. This type of embedded
clause can be really useful for formal styles. But getting extra information
into a sentence and for breaking up a sentence by
pauses caused by the commas. However, because
there were lots of other types of phrase
and close that can be embedded in a sentence to leave a detailed exploration
of this type of structure to a future module.
13. Exercise 6: Creating Your Own: To wrap up, I'm going
to leave you with a final exercise that will help you really make the
information you've learned. In this exercise, we've got the opportunity
to experiment with a few sentences a little bit different to what
we've looked at so far. Say for example, number one, write about a day when you
were really busy using a compound sentence with more
than three main clauses. Essentially be a less like first I did this and
then I did this. I did this, but this happens, sorry, this happened, and so on. And it can make you
sound really breathless, like you're so busy
and you can't have you don't have a chance to
breathe and take a full stop. And then we've got
a few others say right about the time
he left the house using a complex sentence with more than one
subordinate clause. About a time when you're
in a group of people and everyone wanted to do
something different. And the old lend itself well to a compound,
complex sentences, especially if you
give the reasons why each person will think
that they were doing. Then there's a chance at
the end to experiment with a subordinate clause embedded
within a main clause. Say, thank you for listening. I hope you'll share
your work and enjoy writing and see you in
the next module scene.