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1. Intro to Stand Up Comedy: Write and Perform Your First Routine: Hi, my name is Elizabeth. Dave, I'm an award
winning stand up comedian and comedy teacher.
I'm from Australia. You may be able to
tell by the accent, And I've created sell
out shows that have toured around the
country to rave reviews. I started stand up from scratch ten years ago with
absolutely no skills, no training, and no idea. But I learned a lot
through trial and error. And five years later I
won Best Comedy Award for my solo show,
Superwoman Money Program. I've also studied clown
and improv along the way, and I bring those skills
into this class as well. I've been teaching
people stand up since 2017 and I love it. My students have great things
to say about my teaching. And in my experience, anyone can learn the skills to be a great stand up comedian. The only prerequisite
is that you want to do it enough that you
start and here you are. The only other things
you will need for this class are very
simple, just a pen, a notebook, and
for one exercise, it's great if you have
like a bigger bit of paper and some textures. You may also want
to use the notes or voice note function
on your phone to record and listen back. And it can be helpful for
journaling your ideas. As a teacher, my focus is building your
confidence as a comedian. So you're ready to try out your first five
minute open mic spot. During the class, we'll explore
your unique comic voice. Create your material
through writing exercises. And we'll put it all together at the end with
performance techniques. Okay, are you ready?
Let's jump in.
2. Before We Begin: Stand Up Comedy Guidelines: Okay, before we begin, like pirates, I
don't have rules, but I do have guidelines. The first guideline is to
punch up with your jokes. If you don't know
what that means, the targets of your jokes, the people who are
the butt of the joke, who are being made fun of. They're ideally people or structures who have high status. They're above you in the
pecking order, they have power. The opposite, which I don't
recommend is punching down. That means making fun of
people who are marginalized or are victims in the situation
or have less power than you. I'm not saying you
can't punch down, I just think it's really tacky. So I say it's better not to. The second is to only
do your own material. No, no. In stand up comedy. To borrow another
comedians jokes. If you have friends
who don't want to do stand up comedy and they
say lots of funny things, that could be fine to
take what they say. But I'd still ask
them if it's okay. Because ultimately the
audience wants the authentic. We want to see your material, we want to laugh at your jokes. That's what you want to,
which is why you're here. The final guideline is
to be kind to yourself. Comedy is about play. It's about fun. It's
about joy and creativity. Shame and self
doubt are terrible. The stand up comedy,
it's about fun. Try to have fun. Okay, let's go.
3. The Class Project: Okay, the project.
The project for this class is creating your
first stand up routine. So that's a short series of jokes three to 5 minutes long, that you can perform as part of a stand up comedy
open mic night. Oh, we'll speak more about
routines and open mic nights. Later in the class, you'll deliver the project by
submitting a video. Ooh, ten points or a photo
as well would be great. So you can take a video or photo of you performing
at an open mic. Or you can take a photo of your set list which is ready
to go for your first gig. There'll be more about
set lists later as well. I'm so excited to see how you use the skills you
learn during the class. And my biggest hope is
that this gives you the confidence to just
get out there and do it, get up onstage, grab the mic. So share your work in the
project space below the class, and we can all be inspired.
4. Observation & Creativity: Okay, observation is a key
skill in stand up comedy. And to start with, I want you to notice where
you are funny, where you get laughs in
your day to day life. You might notice that when
you're getting laughs, there is something different
that you're doing. Just something that is a
bit out of the ordinary. It's really important to figure out what that something is. So for example, if
you're telling a friend a really embarrassing story about something that happened to you and they start
laughing, why? Try and figure out why did you exaggerate the
humiliation of the story? Did you act it out
playing both parts? Or did you use like a really surprising analogy
they didn't expect? Or did you make up things
that didn't really happen, like to stretch the truth? Or there might be like a spontaneous way of phrasing it that was
like unexpected. A lot of comedy comes from
these moments like these, just sudden associations or the way we speak in that moment. So it's really important
to try and notice those. Take notes when it happens or just after, or if they're
really good friends. You can even just stop the
conversation and ask them. But take note of
that so that you can think about it later. These things are
the beginnings of your comic voice, so
they're already there. We really just need
to pay attention. So we notice the other
thing to look out for, to notice is things that happen every day,
that are funny. Like, did you have a really strange interaction at the cafe? It's like Mm, or did you see a weird sign that
didn't make sense? Or like, did you make
a really big mistake? Or watch an animal
do something stupid? Or like overhear this really wild conversation on the train. Like there is comedy everywhere. There's just moments
happening all the time. And we need to train our eyes and our ears so
that we see them. You can take little notes
in your phone or notepad, as this is a practice
that will serve you in such good stead for your
entire comedy career. Basically, you'll need it.
Definitely start task, take brief notes in
your phone or notepad. And this is a practice
that you'll need later. Waking up your creativity. We need to wake up our
creativity for stand up. As I said before, comedy
is about creativity. It's that nebulous force that generates ideas, Art, magic. It's important to pay attention to what works for you and where, when, and why you feel
creative, playful and free. It'll be different for everyone. So some examples could be like talking about a
story with a friend, going for a walk in nature. Talking aloud alone while you're gardening, while
you're in the shower, maybe you're free
write each morning or maybe you're shooting hoops with a friend. Is that
what you call it? I'm not sporty
juggling in a cafe. I like that one because
you get a cope. So explore and notice the
things that you like. Like it's actually that simple. Like unless you're
telling me that you only feel creative
when you're drinking, taking drugs, or smashing
cars with a cricket bat. In those situations,
you're going to need to rein it in and
find a new outlet. But otherwise, all bets are off. So just do what you want to do. What makes you feel
Creative Task, I recommend doing a few pages
of freewriting each day. It's an exercise created by Julia Cameron in
the Artist's Way, which is an amazing book. Definitely read it.
Freewriting is like doing reps at the gym to tone
your creativity muscles. Julia says to do it first
thing in the morning. But if that doesn't
work for you, doing it is always better
than not doing it. Whenever you can is fine. Don't judge what you write. Don't try to be funny. This is not about being funny. Just get your thoughts out onto the page without taking
your pen off the paper. This exercise is about
unblocking your creative engine. It's not about writing killer material
straight onto the page. Also, if you try free writing and you hate it and it
makes you miserable, you don't have to keep doing it. Try something else, but do something whatever
makes you feel free, playful and creative task. Try a different option each week and see
what works for you.
5. Finding Your Comic Voice: One of the best
ways to learn about comedy is by watching
a lot of comedy. What a surprise.
Obviously seeing comedy live is
comedy at its best. But online comedy can work too. One thing I recommend is
not just watching the pros really try and see some local open mic nights
or fringe festival shows, or video clips of
competitions for new comedians hunt
out the beginners. You want to see
comedians early in their career or who have
only performed a few times. It's useful to see their work
and compare it to the pros. You can start to see
how the sausage is made and you can see how you
go from one to the other. It's also so much less intimidating to watch and
mentally compare yourself to someone who's just starting
out at the pub rather than a comedy legend who's done
ten Netflix specials. I can tell you now I would never have started stand
up if I hadn't seen my old housemate to
a spot at a bar down the road and thought
I could do that. Now that you've
watched some comedy, what kind of comedy
do you like and why? What you like is
a great place to start when you're searching
for your comic voice. Comedy is a very broad church. There are so many
different options. I've created a comedy
styles handout, which I've linked in
the resources below. This lists many common
styles of comedy and it also has examples and short clips of comedians who
work in that style. Which style do you like best? And which comedians
do you like best? Who are your favorites? Do note, this is not an exhaustive
list by any means. And so many comedians work
crosses more than one style. The clips are often
just an example of that particular style or
them working in that style. To give you an idea task, watching comedy is so important, please see the suggestions
in the comedy handout. And just watch it. Just go and watch
it. I can't say, in enough time go
and watch comedy.
6. Joke Writing Structure Part One: Set Ups: In this video, we're
going to cover part one of a joke
writing structure. Part one is a set up. The set up is not the
funny part of the joke, but it is probably the
most important part. There are only two parts, but it's very important. A joke needs to have all
the information that you need to understand the
joke implicit in the set up. It all has to be included. When the surprise of the
punch line is revealed, it all makes sense and
the audience laughs. Anytime in a comedian's act where the audience is
listening and not laughing, that's a set up, but it doesn't mean that
set ups are boring. It's actually really important that set ups are interesting. Because if you can't
get the audience on board at the
beginning of a joke, they're not going to be there at the end of the joke when you're delivering the punchline and you really want them
there so they laugh. How do we make set
up interesting? I'm so glad you asked. The answer is
attitude or emotion. We'll see the theory here set up plus punch line equals joke. When we're looking at
the set up specifically, we've got a specific subject, so something that's very
specific, not too generic. Then we add the attitude, and then we add observations. We'll get to punch lines
later, don't worry. But now it's just set ups. You need to pick a
specific subject, that's a subject that you
want to write a joke about. For example, maybe we're
going to talk about camping. Now you need an attitude
attitude to that topic. Likely you're going to want an extreme attitude a bit bigger than you
have in real life. Maybe you love camping, or you hate camping or camping. Makes you happy, sad,
confused, angry, afraid. We are so much more
interested in how you feel about something
than we are in the topic. We are hard wired as social animals to
respond to emotion. If you're telling us about
something with no emotion, that's just a mind numbing Powerpoint presentation
at the office. And we're all
slowly fall asleep. If you are showing
us a lot of emotion and you're really engaged
and you're really fired up, we are hooked.
That's interesting. Really just unleash
your emotions. So we've got the
specific subject, we've got the attitude,
now we need observations. Sometimes observations
are called a premise or an opinion,
or a point of view. Observations are usually
more insightful than funny. We're looking for something that makes the audience
not in agreement, like oh yeah, that thing. A really good premise or a really good
observation is very specific about what
exactly is strange, infuriating, exciting, scary,
or stupid about the topic. Say we've got camping
and we've got the attitude of we love camping. Now we're going to
think about what is kind of strange about
camping like that. We love, but it's strange. So it is kind of weird
when we have a house, but we go into nature
and we build a tiny, less good house. And we sit in that for
a few days, it's weird. And then we, you know, we cook food over a fire or
we don't even cook it at all. And then we have to dig a
hole to go to the toilet. Like it's actually quite weird
when you think about it, but you love that. So I want you to get as
specific as possible. Thinking about all the things that you do while
you're camping. Like imagining how you set up your ten
when you get there. What you do while you're there when you set up to go home. When you drive home,
all the different aspects of it and
think about, yeah, what is weird or strange or scary or stupid about camping, but why do you still love it? So those are the kind of
observations that will create great set ups and
possibilities for jokes. And you add a punch line.
A writing exercise. I want you to write down
ten of the most boring, happy thoughts you can think of. The more generic, the better, The more boring, the better. Imagine the dullest,
good natured person that you know and the things
that they would think. Cake is nice. I love
going for long walks. Just boring, boring, generic. I know I just said to
you that you need to be specific and
really insightful. But for this specific exercise,
this particular exercise, I want you to be generic, boring, dull, Write down ten. Put them away, and we will
come back to them later. Okay, writing
exercise. Another one. I'd like you to choose
a few topics and practice developing a
strong attitude about them. Like we said, think about whatever you actually
feel about the topic. And then turn the
volume up on that. Try to write from that space, that really emotional space. Now, these observations do
not need to be funny yet. And it's important for you
to write for yourself, not for the imaginary audience. You can't try to
second guess what we want you to say or
what we're interested in. Because really what we actually
want is your opinions. Just don't worry
about us for now. Go into the topic and think about what fascinates
or annoys you, what scares you, or
what do you love. Be really specific. Generalities, like in the
other exercise are boring. So that was just
for that exercise. The only time I'll ask you to write something
boring, I promise. We've got here some
questions that can help you to get started with your observations about your topics. So you can pause a
video here or take a screenshot. Do you love it? Do you hate it? Is it
hard or is it easy? Is it important
or really stupid? Are you actually afraid of it? Does it remind you of something else is actually really weird? If you think about it,
what if you looked at it from a different angle
or an opposing viewpoint? I do this, actually we do this. What should I do instead? What should we all do instead? What's the ultimate
end result of it? Those are some questions. Take them to your topic with your attitude and write
some observations.
7. Joke Writing Structure Part Two: Punchlines: In this video, we're
going to cover part two of the joke
writing structure, which is punch lines. A punch line is the
surprise of the joke. It's the unusual conclusion
that we didn't see coming. It's a part that makes
the audience laugh. There's three possible
parts of a punch line. The afterthought, or act out, or analogy equals punch line. The first one, afterthoughts, is a way to think
about punch lines. We also sometimes call
punch lines a tag. An afterthought
is, by definition, an idea occurring later. If the first thought
you had is the set up, then the afterthought
is the punch line. It's a less intimidating
way to think about punch lines that I learned from stand up teacher
Logan Murray. We use afterthoughts or tags all the time anytime
we're following up, qualifying or commenting
on something. We just said An example
from one of my shows, I have a joke where I say my bank wrote to me because
they're worried about me. Which is good because I am too. You can see that the first
part is the thought, the bank writing because
they're worried. And then the second
part, that is the comment after
thought that I'm making an afterthought continues
the initial thought and then it takes it in
an unexpected direction, but it doesn't completely just 180 and contradict
it like an improv. We talk about yes and rather
than no, which cuts it off. So as an example, if I said I got a rescue cat recently, Actually,
no, I didn't. That's not a joke. But if I said I got a rescue
cat recently. Oh, wait, no, sorry.
Rescue boyfriend. Rescue boyfriend and boyfriend. So you can see there, I've
taken a different direction. I haven't just said,
no, I didn't get a cat. Also, sometimes the punch
line can be wordless. So it is just an expression, or showing the opposite emotion to the one that's conveyed
in what we're saying. So for an example, you know, my friend showed me her new hot pink
haircut and I'm like, oh, I love it. You know, so that
the punchline could be or also, oh, I love it. Said like that if your after thought tag punch
line isn't funny, you probably need to up the
emotion or be more specific. The more specific you can be in your thoughts and observations, the easier it is to
find surprising. After thoughts,
tags, punch lines. Your punchline can
also come from you misunderstanding
or being too literal, you being weird or stupid, like most people would
logically conclude this thing. But you, oh my
sweet summer child, you conclude something else
that we did not see coming. Like I have another
example with my bank. When they wrote to me
because they were worried, they sent me some
tips to save money. And one of them was
buying cheaper makeup. But don't they know nothing is cheaper than something you find on the floor of the bus. That's an example of
that. The other thing is, do not stop at one punch
lines are like pringles. Once you pop, you cannot stop. There is always room
for another punch line. Now we have analogies. An analogy is a way to expand
on your observations in a funny way By juxtaposing two
dissimilar subjects that don't usually go together. You're playing
with possibilities and creating surprising
connections. For example, I have a joke about intergenerational
wealth and economics. And in the joke I compare
baby boomers to the kind of housemate who puts
the milk back in the fridge with just a line
of bit left in the carton. So I'm juxtaposing two
things that aren't the same to find the comedy act out. The third option in an act out, the comic acts out the
situation of a joke, instead of just talking about
it or someone or something. You perform it, you become it. You turn into the people or the thing that
you mentioned in the set up and actually
say what they said. For example, in the joke
I mentioned before about where I use the analogy of the baby boomers
and the housemates, instead of talking about that situation and
the housemates, I'll become the housemate. This theory that
the baby boomers are like that ****** housemate. Everyone's had one, that
****** housemate that puts the milk back in the fridge with just a tiny bit
left in the cup. And they justify not
replacing it by saying, oh, there's still plenty left, you could make a cup
of tea all the while. They're holding a big old
milkshake in each hand. And you say, this housemate, I actually didn't
want a cup of tea. I wanted a milkshake as well. And they say, oh my God,
you're so entitled. So you can see, I can
play both characters. And it could be, you could retail an anecdote like
that. All kinds of things. Like it's really engaging to become the thing rather than
just telling us about it. Finally, I want to talk
about rule of three. Rule of three is an
important rule in comedy because there is just a
super satisfying rhythm to three things together. In English, there's so many famous examples
like the good, the bad, the ugly, mad bad. Dangerous to know, or
bacon, lettuce, and tomato. The rule of three can also be
used to build a crescendo, so you're getting more
and more ridiculous. Or high stakes like
man, President God. And it can even be used as an actual structure for a joke
by introducing something, reinforcing it, and
then subverting it. For example, I went
to Costco yesterday, I got 20 liters of milk, a 40 kilogram bag of oranges, and a crushing sense of
existential despair. Here's only 495, it's so cheap. So you see there I introduce one something, I
keep going with it, and then subvert the logic that you're expecting
writing exercise, I want you to take out
your list from before. Remember those ten
incredibly boring thoughts? Excellent. Grab those and
have a look at it again. And try and add a negative, dark or twisted punch
line that takes the original observation
in a different direction. No one is going to read these, except you don't
censor yourself. Just write whatever you want to for the purpose
of the exercise. Get it out on the page,
see where you go. For example, in the
previous video, one of my observations was, I love taking long walks. Now I might write, I love taking long walks. It allows me peaceful time in nature to think about all the terrible mistakes
I've made in my life. Or maybe I say, I love
taking long walks in nature. It allows me peaceful
time in nature to scope out places
to bury the bodies. So you can see
with even the most boring and crappy observations, you can still write jokes. That's the point
of this exercise. You take something
that is exactly what I told you not to do, generic boring, et cetera, and you twist it if you can come up with
a joke for those, if you can come up
with a punch line, you can do it for your
own observations. Which is next writing exercise. Write some punch lines
for your observations. Remember, you can always
have more than one. Keep popping those pringles. Write a short draft
piece of material. Now, putting your set up and
your punch line together. You've got your topic,
you've got your attitude, you've got your observations. Then punch line time. Remember, for the
punch lines to work, we need all the information in the set up so
that we can make the connection and get the joke that has to be there for
the audience to understand. Take some potential punch lines with afterthoughts,
analogies, act outs. You can have more
than one option. In fact, I really encourage it. Now, if you did
want to work with a story as a piece of material, think about how
you'll tell the story out loud when you're
going to reveal key pieces of
information and how the story will finish,
which is the punch line.
8. Creativity Hacks: A note on writer's block. I have personally struggled
a lot with creative block, writer's block, whatever
you want to call it. I've collected some strategies over the years that I
wanted to share with you. If like me, you are regularly banging your head against
this particular wall. Firstly, something that's
super important to remember, There is no wasted work. I've been in a three hour
devising session for a show, and it was a disaster. I felt like I accomplished
nothing except paying for a venue to have a breakdown in and a director to
watch me do it. But out of that awful rehearsal sprang an idea that completely fix another part of the show. A big part of
creative work is just showing up and not being
afraid of the results. We learn a lot so much
from our mistakes. Don't be afraid to make them. Creativity is like nature. It's a perfect ecosystem. Nothing goes to waste. Today's ideas are composted to make fuel for
tomorrow's breakthrough. Things I found that helped
when I'm feeling really stuck, are taking some
time to step away. Go for a dance, walk, stretch, anything you enjoy. Something physical is
great here to lift your mood and release the
mental feeling of stuckness. Do something else creative, that's unrelated to stand up. Work on something that
has no real meaning, where you don't have pressure. Use a Pomadorotimer, Google it. Cut out distractions. Put your phone on airplane mode. Cue a specific album or type
of music to your work time. Your brain
automatically loads up the work time attitude
on the jukebox. You can also do this
with locations like where you work or
rituals before you work, like making a cup of tea. Mind map with textures, use a whiteboard pen and paper, especially if you normally type. Okay, so mind mapping, what you do is you
write down the subject, that specific subject
that you wish to explore in the middle of
a large piece of paper. And then you can use
arrows, subheadings, or even diagrams
to start writing down everything you can think of that relates
to that subject. No matter how
tangential or strange, this is your piece of paper. It's just an exploration. Here's one that I made earlier. For example, we were
talking about camping. I've written that in
the center of the page. And then brainstormed a
bunch of things that, when I think about camping, stuff like creepy wildlife
noises, mosquitoes, gale force winds, weird food, no showers, trying to
get a fire started. All right. This
is the first step then once you have a decent
amount of associations, you can start scribbling down associations to the first
set of associations. So you keep branching out, making strange connections
until the paper is full. Here's one I prepared earlier. So we already had
the camping one. We had our first set
of associations. So now I've gone and added
my associations to those. So, for example, with
digging a hole to go to the toilet and trying
to get a fire started, they both reminded me
of the Apocalypse. And also roasting
rats around the fire. While we tell stories of the
old days, setting up a tent. I can't believe how
hard this is, like, how did I get a degree
when I can't do this with weird food? I have IBS and also
the Apocalypse. With Gale force winds, I have being on the
news because I'm dead. Or no showers,
average Wednesday, but also the Apocalypse. Misery and rare and
cold feet with rain. And then finally,
creepy wildlife noises. I've got Manji and
the Apocalypse. You can see there's
actually a theme with a lot of things reminding
me of the Apocalypse. Maybe the part of my
set is that I love camping because I'm preparing
for the apocalypse. You can start to
see those things, they'll start to come through. You'll get these themes, it'll
come up in your mind map. Feel free to play with different attitudes and emotions too. They may come up organically, like we saw, the themes
came up organically. Or you can literally just
try them on for size. You can think about
if I loved camping, what would I associate with it? What if I hated it?
What's the furthest away, weirdest connection you made? Are there any strange
analogies that you can see? These will help you to create
surprise in your jokes. Just that little extra bit of difference,
Don't go too far. But that weirdness,
strangeness will create the surprise even if you don't find a punch line
in this activity. Although my bet
is that you will. This can be great to just exercise those
creative muscles. Get you thinking outside
the box task mind map about one of your topics. I also recommend the
following resources. It's in a little pedia at
the bottom of the course. These resources include some
thoughts from Ira Glass, links to Seth Godin,
the Artists Way. Stephen Presfield is
also a great theorist.
9. Editing Your Material: Now you have your
draft material, it's time to edit it and
tighten it up a bit. The key thing to remember with editing is that if
it doesn't add it, distracts also show, don't tell. First off, we won't be laughing
at your punch lines if we're busy trying to follow
you on a convoluted tangent. Or if we've been distracted by something unrelated
that you mentioned. Like if you have a
joke about cars, but at the beginning you
mentioned hairdressers. We'll be waiting to see how hairdresseres are
related to it all. Also a mistake I often used to make when I first started
is to deliver a punchline. And I'm going to keep
going for a bit without any more jokes or follow a
really strong punch line. With the weaker one, the best punch line
is the full stop. Another thing to remember
with editing is, are you writing how you talk? We usually don't. We have
a different voice when we write and we use longer words or more complicated phrases, we have a different
rhythm. We sound written. Try saying your material out loud without looking
at your notes. You can do this alone or
with a trusted friend. You'll automatically start trimming to make
it easier to say, you'll just notice
yourself doing that. You can record yourself doing this and listen back
as well if you need. My English teacher in
nine always used to say, show us, don't tell us. Instead of just
describing a situation, get into it, inhabit it, make it immediate and personal. If you can act out dialogue rather than
just describing it, it's so much more engaging like we were talking
about before. Emotions mattered, so don't
be afraid to show yours. We are way more
interested in how you feel about the story than
we are in the story. We've used exercises
like the mind map to look for strange analogies
and weird connections. These are great, but
you can get too weird. There needs to be a logic to it, otherwise the audience
will be too confused to laugh the structure of a
joke. Say it's like this. We have a set up and a punch line. There's
a bit of a gap. That gap is where the
audience leaps to meet us. The leap is a surprise. It's the audience
clicking and getting it, and it's where the laugh is. If the joke is too explicit,
there's no surprise. And it's just like this,
so we just walk across. Or if there's too much
information missing or the connection doesn't
have enough logic, the gap is too big and the
audience can't make it. We can't understand you.
We can't make the leap. We won't Laugh And as ever, back to Pringles, there is always room in front
of the punch line. Don't cut those bits. It's fine to put a stronger
one rather than a weaker one, but you can usually
fit quite a few in. Don't be stingy with
the punch lines. Another way of editing is
editing with a friend. This is working with
a writing partner, someone you know
to help you edit. However, I have a very
important word of caution. You need to choose your
writing partner carefully. Some people are wonderful
friends, partners, and family members, but they are not good writing and
editing partners. As Mary Bamford says, jokes are like a baby bird that we're pushing
out of the nest. They are fresh and
wonky and we want someone who will be gentle with them while they
find their wings. It is very easy
to lose faith and discard a potentially
awesome piece of material because it got a shabby response from a
poorly chosen editing partner. On the flip side, you do want someone with some
critical faculties. Like someone who just loves
everything you do and never thinks you
do anything ever wrong is probably not
going to work either. Like you want somewhere a
nice safe middle ground. You've chosen a ride or die
legend as your partner. Now I have some questions
that you can prime them with so you can get some
super constructive feedback. The goal is to get positive
construct objective feedback about what is working
and what isn't working. Rather than subjective feedback which is like whether
they like it or not, because again,
they're not everyone. There might be lots of people who like jokes that they don't. If they do like your material
though, that's awesome. What you can do is ask them
to give you the answers to these questions as a way of soliciting that
objective feedback. The first one is ask them
if they understood it. Secondly, if they were distracted by anything that
didn't make sense to them. Thirdly, were they
expecting something that didn't happen or not expecting
something that did happen? That can be really good to know. Finally, ask them if the
material seemed immediate, if it seemed fresh
and important to you. Okay, now you just pick a piece of material that you
think needs editing. Perform it for your partner
and see what they say. The final place to
edit is onstage. This is a bit more advanced
for after this course, but I wanted to tell you
about it eventually. It's where you will be editing. As you do more and more gigs, you can record your sets and listen back if you
can handle that. I know it's a really
icky feeling, just I hate listening to myself. But the other option is you can see if you can get a friend to come along and give you
feedback from the audience. What you want to figure
out is what really lands, which is when we say
it gets a laugh, lands gets a laugh and what
doesn't, doesn't get a laugh. Trying to figure out why or why it does or doesn't work
is really important. And the questions from
before can help here too, to ask yourself cask
is edit your material, Pick the stuff you really
enjoyed from your observations, from your draft material and tighten it up a
bit. See, here you go.
10. How to Structure and Remember Your Routine: Now you are structuring
your routine. Basically, you're
going to start with your best stuff and finish
with your best stuff, or start with your
second best stuff and finish with your
very best stuff. So you can kind of let the
middle take care of itself. Not that you should
be lazy about it, but it's really important to get that strong thing
out of the gate. So that's your opener,
your first joke. And what I want you
to think about is how does it feel to
do that first joke? Do you feel good? Does
it make you excited? That's the kind of
opener you want. Also, what does it tell
the audience about you? If you sound like a bit of
a **** in your first joke, then maybe you want
to let them get to know you first and
pull that joke later. They've built up some
affection for you. And how does your opener
set up your other material? That's another
question to ask when you're choosing that first joke. Now the middle, we've
got our amazing opener. What do we do after that? First off, do your jokes relate? Could you get another joke in the segue from
one joke to another? Or could you include a
callback? What's a callback? You say, wow, it's a joke that references something
that happened earlier, either in your set
or in the night. In general, like
the comedy night, you might see an opportunity
to use a callback. Maybe you've watched the night and someone you saw
something like, oh, that relates to my joke. Or you can see
within your own set, like something relates
to something else. And you can call
back and mention it later if you can
see an opportunity. Audiences love it,
but don't force it. It's okay. You
don't have to have one and now we're at the end. All right, so you are using a great punchy joke to
end on your favorite. Remember, open our second
favorite, this one favorite. Make sure you are
so confident in your final punch
line and finish it. Don't let it just trail off. Now you have your routine
and we're going to create a list of keywords to
remind you of your jokes. This is your set list. I would aim for about ten
words for a five minute spot. It's basically what you
can fit on the back of your hand or on a really
small piece of paper. I don't recommend reading off your phone or reading at all. It really breaks the connection and it takes you
out of the moment. Something really short and
quick that you can glance at so that you remember the
order. That's all you want. Finally, I want you to time your routine at
home to check that you are under the time limit of whatever open mic
night you go to. Some of them are 3
minutes, 5 minutes around. That is usual, but double check. It really sucks to get
played off before you finish getting played off
is when they play music to shut you up and
get you off the stage. It sucks. So make sure that
you've got enough time, you're just under
the time limit, and you have time to
say thanks and get off. Once you've done a
few spots and you start having new jokes that you'd like to include
in your routine, You can start by swapping them out in the
middle of your set. When you've got something
you're not sure about it, don't put it as the opener
or the closer put it in the middle where after
you've used an open, you know, works and knowing that it's going to
be followed by a closer that you know works task. Okay, it's time to
write your set list so you have all your material, figure out the order
you want to put it in, structure your routine, and then write down your key words. Remember, only
ten, not too many. Now you're ready, you've
got your set list, and you're ready for
your first open night.
11. Before Your Gig: Okay. Before the gig. So you have your routine, you have your set list, you are ready to go. So now you need to find
an open mic night. What is an open mic night? Okay, So an open mic night
is a show at a pub or club made up of lots of different comedians doing
short routines or sets. There's usually an MC who opens a show and transitions
between the acts. Usually with an open mic, it's in the name open. You turn up before
the show to sign up or sometimes your book pond. In advance nights run a bit
differently, so double check. Ideally, you'll have
already gone to see this local open mic to
watch some live comedy. Remember, you already know where you're going to
go for your first spot. If not, have a look around
pubs and bars in your area. Check out local comedy, Facebook groups and ask friends if they've ever seen live comedy anywhere around you. Once you've found a night
you'd like to perform at, if you're unsure how
to get involved, go along and check it out
first. I really recommend this. It's great to see the space and understand where it is
when it is who runs it. So while you're
there, you can ask the MC or the organizer, which is whoever seems to be in charge how you get a spot. So what you need
to do in order to perform at this night,
Remember, be polite. Really just be polite. You should be polite anyway. But definitely do it here
because you want something. Okay, Task, book a
spot, That's it. Go book a spot. How to warm up. All right, So you've
got your spot now. Okay, first you need to warm up. Stand up is a
performance art form. It's not just about writing. It's literally called standing
up, being on your feet. So we'll be getting out
of our chairs to learn these techniques,
vocal warm ups. When we're nervous,
our throat and our neck can get quite tight
and this affects our voice. We can do vocal warm ups before the gig to make
sure we're ready to go. One of the first ways
is to have a good yawn. The idea here is to open your throat and
smile as you yawn. Really good yawn like that
stretches the soft palette at the back of your mouth and it releases tension
in the throat, creating more space
for the voice. The next one is to hum gently. You feel the breath come
in and then let it out on a gentle hum so you can hum through your
range up and down, or hum a favorite tune. It's like a massage
for your vocal folds, and it's a great
way to start or to soothe a sore and
tired voice as well. When you hum, try and feel
the bones in your face. Feel that vibration in
the bones of your face. Mm. I'm a comedian, not a singer. Mm. The next one is lip trills. These look really silly, so find somewhere where
you're alone to do them. First off, you're going to
place your lips loosely together and release air
steadily to create a trill. Something like a so like this. If you're having
trouble and get, then you need to push your lips out more to like
more of a duck face, like Once you've
got a steady sound, you can try going up
and down your range. So wow. Oh, this exercise
helps to release tension of the lips
and the vocal folds and helps to connect breathing
and speaking together. The next one is to
practice tongue twisters. Everyone's favorite
from when we were kids, you can try any tongue twister. Really, I've got a couple here. But just making an effort to
try and clearly pronounce the recurring sounds you can over articulate for the
purpose of the exercise, even though you wouldn't
actually do that onstage, just helps to warm
up all the muscles. Peter Piper picked a
peck of pickled peppers. Giddy Goddesses gathered
in garrulous groups. Belly button bought a
bunch beautiful bananas. Worldwide web, worldwide web, worldwide web free throws. Three free throws, unique, unique, unique
diaphormatic breathing. This is a breathing technique to calm down your
nervous system. It's great when you're nervous. Basically you put your hand
on your stomach so you can feel the breath
move in and out. Try to imagine the
breath going down to your hand and then
coming back from your hand. You want to breathe
in for three and out for three, all right? Physically bend, stretch and swing your arms like it sounds. Bend over. Swing your arms around. When we're nervous, we get tense and this makes
us more nervous. It's like a feedback loop
of your body being tense, telling your brain you
should be tense and your brain feeling tense and telling your body
you should be tense. It all just makes
us more nervous. Gentle movement helps to unlock this grid lock and it helps to discharge some
of our stress response. It also gives you something to focus on other than your nerves. The final tip is getting
present or into a play state. To do that, we're
going to be looking at the space around us. It's not internal,
it's external. We're looking around
in the space to see what is there here
that intrigues me. You're like a toddler
walking into a new room. What do I want to play with? What's interesting? You can also imagine a mild electric current that is running down
your arms and legs. Not so they're tense
but they're energized. They're not floppy.
You're going to be in that physical state
of that energy and looking around for what's interesting, what do
I want to play with?
12. At Your Gig: Okay, at the gig, you'll
arrive beforehand. Definitely get there with a bit of time.
Don't be in a rush. Maybe you'll sit with the
audience or in the green room. It depends on the
gig in the venue. Check the running order with the room runner or organizer. So you know when you're on and how you need to get
on and off stage. You don't want to be scrambling, trying to figure that
out at the last second, once the person before you
goes up onto the stage, maybe you move to the back of the room or a spot
where you can wait. And while you're
there, you can do some breathing exercises or even a little bit of movement
if you're out of eyes shot. If you can't move, breathe, and look around the
room, stay present, and stay in that
activated play state, You'll be called up. It's your turn, oh go onstage. Shake the MC's hand
if they offer it. And then take the mice, take a deep breath. Say hello to the audience. It's time to deliver your
material mic technique. This is a basic mic
similar to what they'll probably have
in most comedy clubs. The stands and the
clips can vary a bit. If you're not sure
how it all works and you haven't had a chance
to check or play with it, it's okay to leave
the mic in the stand. Just make sure it's
at a good height for you to adjust the height. The spot is usually
halfway down the stand. There's some lever or twist
and you can bring it up. You want it about here
in front of the face. If you do take the
mic out of its stand, you just pop it out and
make sure you move. Stand out of the way. Don't leave it in front of you. You look silly. Okay,
that's out of the way. Don't fiddle with the mic
if there's buttons on it. Don't fiddle with
those. And don't pull on the cord, or
file with the cord. You could cut your sound.
That's really terrible. Once you've got the mic,
if you're using it in front of you or you're
using it in your hand, you want to make
sure I'll turn to the side so you can see
you're about this far away. You don't want to
be too far away because then people won't
be able to hear you. You don't want to be too close because then
it's going to be really intense and the sound
is going to be too loud. And they're going to hear
P. This is a good distance. And also make sure
that you have it. You stay with your face facing the mic. So
stay like this. Don't turn and deliver a
punch line off the mic. It is such a shame when
you do this. All right? So if you have a chance to play with the mice before
the gig, that's awesome. Just so you can
get an idea of how you hold it and stand with it. And also how you get it in and out of the stand once
you're on stage. Here are some performance tips. Firstly, most
importantly, breathe. I can't stress this enough. If you don't breathe, you'll die figuratively and literally. The difference between fear
and excitement is breath. Always take a moment and
make sure you're breathing. Be aware of your body language. Try not to have a really
defensive posture like arms crossed or
really closed in, or be really stiff and not moving very much
because that's a bit unnatural and
makes us stressed. And if you're a fidgeter
and you move too much, like you're always
moving around, try and find a fixed point, which is a point where you
stop and don't not move, but make your movements
more deliberate. It's not just an
uncontained explosion of movement that
will distract us. Take your time. When we're nervous, we often speed up because we
just want to be over. You'll destroy your
comic timing If you're just trying
to get through jacks as fast as possible, what you want to do is breathe. Continue at a normal pace. Try to look at the audience, make eye contact and see them as individual people.
Listen to them. Treat them like someone
you're on a first date with or an old friend that
you're catching up with. You're trying to be
charming and you're trying to connect as the audience. We want to feel that you're
speaking to us, not at us. You're allowed to be scared. Every performer I know
is including myself. It's nerve racking
getting onstage, and if you're not nervous, if you're not scared, maybe you shouldn't be doing it because
you don't really care. We get so nervous because
we care and we want to do a good job. It's
getting over that. That's a trick because if it was easy, everyone would do it. And they don't, because
stand up takes guts.
13. After Your Gig: After the gig. So
you did the gig. Oh my God, It's done. Congratulations if it
goes well, hooray. Yes. Well done. Now, inson, repeat, my friend,
do another gig. In the meantime, you can
reflect on what went well and what you could
improve after a gig. You can see if you're able to video it or a friend could
come to give feedback. And you can watch that
or hear what they say. But don't do it the second
after you get on stage. Let yourself really bask
in that post gig glow. And let your nervous system
settle down before you get any notes if it didn't
go quite as you hoped. Okay, remember the
second guideline I had at the beginning?
Be kind to yourself. Comedy is about creativity, play and joy shame, self doubt. Recriminations are
terrible for comedy, so do not beat yourself up after a gig that
didn't go that well. Every comedian I know,
including, and especially me, has had bad gigs when
they're really bad. We call them dying, dying on stage, because
that's what it feels like. Oh, the horror. The horror. It's horrible. But guess what? It doesn't
actually kill you. How cool is that? You're still
around to die another day. As I said earlier, we learned
a lot from our mistakes. It's actually good if
you're making mistakes, nothing goes to waste. Today's gig is compost to make fuel for
tomorrow's great one. If you have a bad gig, shake it off, learn what you can and get back on the horse.
14. You Made It!: Okay, you made it to
the end. That's it. It's time to jump off the
cliff and do your first gig. I believe in you and I am so excited to see your photos and videos and hear how you go. I'd like to thank all
the amazing artists and comedy theorists
who I've learned from all my comedian friends, my teachers, also, Logan Murray, Judy Carter, Julia Cameron, and Seth Godin for
their wonderful books. Definitely check those
out. Thanks also to Lucas for helping me to
film this course today. If there's one thing I hope
you take from this class, it's finding the humor and fun that already exists
around us every day. I love stand up
comedy for the way it trains you to see every
mistake or misfortune, or **** up as a
golden opportunity to make some killer material. What a way to look at life. Thanks so much for taking
the time to learn with me. I hope you enjoyed the class. Please recommend it to a friend. If you think you know
someone who'd like it, I'd love it to
reach more people. And you can follow
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review below. Thanks.