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1. Introduction to the Course: When you are planning
to write a new story, ordinary to focus
on are two things. First, a story idea which
would love to explore, and secondly, a
cast of characters, your hero or heroine. And how to get them
onto the page. And acting and reacting to the story idea so that you
can watch them fall in love. This course will
take you through everything that
you need to do to plan out the opening sequence of scenes in your romance novel. The focus is always
on the characters. You will learn how to
develop characters who have internal conflicts and
emotional barriers which will drive
the story forward. Once the opening scenes
have been created. The course describes how to
plan out the remainder of your novel using a story
and mapping process. The fourth stage story
structure is explained in detail so that you
will never get lost when you're writing
your Romans ever again. By the end of this course, you will understand how to use emotional story maps to plan out the key story points
in your romance novel.
2. The 6-Step Story Development Process: The emotional story map. I know that when we set
out to write a new story, there was always a mixture
of acceleration and terror. There are so many
things to think about when it comes
to planning and used Roman story that
it can be paralyzing. What can we do to
shortcuts procrastination and use the energy and
enthusiasm of a new story. I believe that we can
leverage the power of the one very special
aspect of romance fiction, which makes it unique. We can use the emotional journey that our hero or heroine will take and how they change as a result of the
romance relationship. How to use a six-step
process to get started, to plan out any new
Roman story and spark your imagination
as quickly as possible. You basically need
to do six things. Step one, develop a simple story idea
or destroy situation, which you can describe
in a few sentences. Step to focus on one main character who
will open a story. Step three, Give that main character one limiting
belief, just one. Step four, give
that main character one reason why they are totally at the end of their
tether when a story opens, step five, create
the ideal hero or heroine who's going to challenge your main character and
fall in love with them. Step six, combined
a story idea with the character idea and get your main character
onto the page. And inside that story
world you've created, then you can
introduce the lover. Once you understand the mindset of your heroin or your hero, you can begin to map out their emotional
story structure of your romance novel by using the internal conflict and character change of
that main character. Why is this so important? What I remember most about any particular book or
story or the characters, something about the hero made me swoon and fall
in love with him. This is the heroine did. What about the heroin? I wanted that guilt. You're my best friend. She was the equal
of the hero and meet him work for her love. There was something about one or more of the characters that connected with me at a
visceral and emotional level. Here's what Romans author
Lynne colony says. Romans isn't about the plot. It's about the characters and how they react in
certain situations. It's about individuals. Absolutely right. Lynn, how do we use a six-step process to develop the opening scenes
for a New Roman story. Let's start at the beginning of that six-step
process is step one, develop a simple story
idea or story situation, which can describe
in a few sentences. Now this is the
truly fun part of any story development process. You are completely
free to choose, Edit, Character,
type, or location, or stories situation
in any romance, sub-genre or timeframe
or storyworld, anywhere, anytime any world. It's also the one area
where writers spend a huge amount of
time worrying about coming up with a new
and fresh Dory idea which will bring their hero
and the heroine together. The truth is you only need
to have a fleeting idea about the story situation or
story idea to get started. There's a reason why
romance story tropes, like the Cinderella story or fake fiance or so successful. They work because
they're shortcuts into your story idea
and your stormy world. The goal is to create a frame around your characters and
the world they inhabit, and then set them free to reveal that deep character within
the confines of that frame, you're creating a
sort of magical stage where your characters
can come alive. This is a sandbox time, brainstorm the story idea. Expand and play with your idea in the
character sketches and situations and develop them into a scenario which you would
love to see more of. You want to explore this, then play the what-if game with those characters and situations. At the end of that process, you can summarize a story
idea in one sentence. That's why the story
idea is going to be as unique as you are and will vary according
to the subgenre of the romance at LMU
ideas for the setting. If you're writing
a historical or paranormal Romans, for example, the location and store
situation might be the very thing that sparks your interest in writing
this particular story. In many cases, the idea might be bubbling away inside
your head bridges, building up in layers and
waiting to be explored. But this point, don't worry
if your story ideas not fully developed
and the conflicts have not been fully worked out, all you need is a ****** of an idea to spark
your imagination. Step to focus on one character. There are going to be two
characteristics in any romance, since both the heroine
and the hero will be transformed as a result of
the Romans relationship. But the planning stage, it pays dividends to
focus on one character and use that profile as the driver for the
staff of the story. I would usually
recommend you spend time developing the character
of the heroin. We want to see the world
through her eyes and step into her shoes and fall in love with a hero at the same
time as she does, you can always switch the
point-of-view character during the self-edit or when you have completed that first
sequence of scenes. But starting with the heroine
means that you will get to the heart of your Roman
story as fast as possible. So dive deep. It's this one character. That you know who she is
and how she's likely to act and react when the heroes
dots journaling during her, ask her some questions
about her life and what she loves to do in
her ordinary world. And what you're
actually like to do instead, look for inspiration, look for photos or addresses
or celebrities who you might Jim would look
like your character and give her a name. Names are powerful. So start asking deep and
searching questions about how your character sees the
world and how it works, and also her place in the world. Step three, give you a heroin. One limiting belief, this
girl would probably have more baggage than
Victoria Beckham launching a new
fashion collection. But you know what?
You don't need to know all of this when you're
planning a new novel, those gram-negative will pop up all by themselves as you write. This is how screenwriting coach Michael Hague defines
internal conflict. Internal conflict
is whenever quality within the character
that prevents them from achieving real
self-worth. Self-worth. Those are the two
key words here. One thing however, is crucial to the success of
your Romans fiction. The profile you create
for your characters has to be credible and
understandable. The answers to the
questions will determine the types
of decisions that she will make during the story and how her worldview will shift or arc from the start to the end of the story because of
the Romans with the hero, these internal barriers that the hero and the
heroine have created to having any kind of relationship must be there
from the very start. Then you can add on the extra barriers to her falling in love
with a lovely hero, you are going to
drop into her life. But you have to start with a solid idea of what her
internal conflict is. One main internal conflict, give this girl one major
fear or limiting belief that you can use as her main internal
conflict into the story. How do you do that? Look into her past and choose one event which shaped the way she thinks
about her life today. This is going to be what
screenwriters call her ghost. This is the wound
she's carrying. The UNH healing source
of continuing pain. How does she stop that
pain from happening again? By creating protective barriers. This creates the one
rule she lives by. That event will inform her current controlling and
limiting belief systems, which sets out all the rules about how she lives her life. This limiting belief will also become the major
relationship barrier. So it is crucial to developing the internal conflicts which will keep the hero
and heroine apart. Early on in the
story development. When the story opens, the character will
come on stage with those rules and
limiting belief systems all in place and
protecting her from pain. During the course of the story, these beliefs will be challenged and the damaging or limiting elements overcome with the help of the other Romans character, who was in turn has their own
set of controlling beliefs. In the opening chapters, the reader will only know how the character reacts to the
challenges you hit them with. It is crucial that you know the deep-seated root
cause of these beliefs. Before you get the
character onto the page. In a romance, we're
mainly concerned with the emotional eternal conflict. But there could be
several Leslie's beliefs which will be revealed
at the crisis. Key decision points
in the story. Step four, give her one
reason why she's at the end of the tether wonder
story opens just one. This is usually the one thing
she wants at that moment, but feels frustrated
that you cannot achieve. Link this to the
story idea to bake the character come alive
inside that story situation. The heroin, heroin must have a powerful or consuming
short-term goal. When the story opens, it is easy to understand and
for the reader to relate to. The stakes per reaching
that goal must be set high to make
the reader care too. This is a crucial
element in creating belief will character
motivation? How, by making your character
sympathetic and empathetic, the reader feel sympathy
for the situation and empathizes with their
need to achieve their goal. Because it could happen to us. This creates that gut
emotional appeal, which grabs you as a reader and makes a story feels
very personal. We need that reader
to intensify with your character and care about
the outcome of the story. Step five, create
the ideal hero or heroine Who's good to challenge your main character and
fall in love with them. Link so the character
to the story idea, that relationship is
going to be locked into the story idea
at the same time. The main character is
going to be the person who has the biggest character change over the course of the story. Once you have a powerful
belief, your main character, you can then think about the other character and
his romance, the lover. Going to be very broad characterization
strokes at this stage. And the goal is to have
just enough to get these two characters off
the page into the story, acting and reacting, talking, and challenging one another
about what matters to them. For example, if the hero is the best month
to Cowboy wedding, he has his own reasons
for not wanting to be there and no wedding date, but it does believe in marriage
and takes it seriously. He wants to make sure
his brother's wedding is as perfect as possible. You are heroine is both a wedding planner
and a tilted bright. She's got to struggle
with some serious issues about believing in marriage
and what she's doing, but she is totally broken. The only job she knows
is arranging weddings. These two people
are going to clash, are more things in the
flower arrangements. How do you persuade your
heroin to change her mind? The stronger the
main female lead than the stronger
hero has to be. He has to be a good match
and equal to her in every way with the quality she needs in her
life at that moment. If just being
portrayed in the past, then you have to show that he is loyal and honest and
worthy of their trust. Not just once, but many
times in his opening scenes, he has to come
onto the page abi, totally authentic and
honest from the start, no pretense one lie here on unless it has
powerfully motivated, the heroin will
certainly not trust him. So think of a couple of ways in which a hero would challenge that internal conflict that your main female character
is wearing as her armor. Step six combined the story idea with the main character idea for your hero or heroine and
get that one main character onto the page in their
storyworld as soon as possible. And then you can
introduce a lover. Don't worry about whether
this texts will end up in your final
manuscript or not. This is playtime freewriting
as an experiment to get the feel of whether this
character is someone you like and want to spend time with in the next few
weeks or months. If they are great, stay with them after you have completed the
opening sequence of scenes and use their
emotional conflict to sketch out the
rest of the story. But if you're not interested
in writing this story, because you're interested
in writing this person. Then this is the
time to find out, scratch that idea, and go back to step two and
redevelop your character. The next video we'll
discover how to plan out the crucial
opening scenes or your romance novel using these characters to drive
the transformation. Even though you haven't
written a word of the novel, I'll see you there.
3. The Power of Story Maps: I love maps, don't you? I am lucky enough
to have visited many wonderful locations
around the world. Brandon, no adrenaline junkie. I always took a map so that
I knew where I was going. I'm equally important how
I could find my way back. Most of the time it
was unknown territory. I had no clue what I was going to find around
the next corner or on the other side
of the mountain that I always stick to the map. Of course not blackout confident about wandering off down
the side streets away from the truest areas
because I knew I could find a way back to the
main road at anytime. I knew where I was going, I had a plan on how to get there and how to
wake my way back. What I found was that using a
mouth was not a constraint. In fact, it was the
precise opposite. Having a map gave
me the freedom and the confidence to explores
areas just off the road, which I otherwise
would have missed. If I had to stumble
around looking for signs and asking kind strangers
who did not speak English. How does it get
back on the track? Having a map made each journey and exciting
and interesting adventure. Why didn't know where I was
going to discover next? When it comes to
writing, an outline, frames the world of your
story and gives you a main road which trucks a
story from start to end. It Is Your Story Map. You know who you're traveling
companions are going to be and where they want
to go on this journey. There'll be some
stopping off points and Crossroads marked on the map where you know that
you have to stop and make sure that you can
take the right turning, but you choose the
turning, you take. The story magic happens
when you step off the tarmac and onto
the dirt track, what leads towards
the magic forest. You can still see the road. If you look over one shoulder, that gives you the
confidence and the freedom to explore
as much as you want and learn new things about the characters who are
walking by your side. How will they react when
you see the unicorn? Find a shallow grave with
some fresh flowers on top, I'll come across
their boyfriend from working with their best friend. What do they feel
and say and do? And what path does
that take them down before you rejoin
the main road together? Or do decide there's a better
road for your characters. Time to find out.
4. Writing Sequences of Scenes: Writing the sequence of scenes. If you're writing strict order, then your objective
is to write from one orientation
point to the next, following the two main
characters as they fall in love and experiencing
the ups and downs, conflicts and complications
at the same time as they do. On the other hand, and many
authors, including myself, would prefer to jot down notes and write the scene
as it comes to them, completely out-of-order, which could be
anywhere in the story, any point in the story. This is often a major
turning point scene where conflicts can be exposed
or a secret is revealed, resulting in one
of the characters being much more
vulnerable than before. Because the action in one scene, the reaction in the
following scene. This can be a fast way to get into the story as
soon as possible. For example, if you're heroin or your hero reveals the
reason for that pain, then the other counter will
respond to that revelation. A drive the story forward. Be prepared and give
yourself full permission to write a seriously
rough first draft, a word vomit first draft. Otherwise, there's a real risk that you will lose
all the momentum and the first three chapters and never finished
that first draft. This is crucial. If you don't know
about a detail, then you can highlight
the text in Word or leave a marker or bubble comment
in the text on the side. Such as, what kind of saddled as a cowboy
ride in a rodeo, or would you assessed at really sleep with your boyfriend
just to prove a point, then you can come back when the manuscript
has finished and you've done your research without breaking off
from the story flow. But please don't step
away right now to track down the information or
work on a character point. You know what would happen
if you go onto the Internet. This is another form
of procrastination. Drive on the head, even though it feels
complete and wrong to leave that part of
the story incomplete. Then come back after you reach the end of the story scene and go through the
comments and notes and fix anything that
adds to the story. At that point, you're bound to have new ideas for
scenes as you write, jot them down on the
last page or document if your computer or
on my ideas file, then you can work
those scenes in. When you come back to the draft orders garden with the dome fit, it could be the start
of another story. Let's now look at the detail
of each of the four stages. Stage one. We've covered this in
the previous video. But you know that the opening
scenes have to work very hard to meet all the structural
demands the story needs. So now's a good time to check that all the
basic elements are in place with a sketch of the first sequence in stage
one that you've completed. Stage one, we have
setup the hero and the heroine are too
many characters and have them meet
for the first time. Something is going
to happen to upset their ordinary worlds and
throw them out of balance. As a result, they're going
to be forced to make a decision which will lock
them together in some way. We see the here on the heroin
in their ordinary life with the limiting beliefs they have created to protect
themselves from pain, suddenly there's going
to be challenged. But by the end of the
first sequence of scenes, the reader has to know
what these people are afraid of and what
they've always wants to do in their lives. Also. Why now? Why has this change
happened right now? Stage one of the story idea. What happens in
this first sequence of scenes which provokes a fundamental shift or change in the character
and their situation. How does this major
change kickoff the story? Something has got to happen
to keep us glued into the story and keep us
turning the pages. Then the most important part, how to stage one impact the emotional journey of your
two main characters. At the end of stage one, you should be very clear about
the deep seated conflict, which are going to
prevent your hero and your heroin from
being together. These barriers have to be so
powerful and deep seated. But it does not matter if your two characters
are trapped in a spaceship or worked
in a busy city office, the belief systems would
still be in place, preventing them from harm no matter where they are
and who they're width. These barriers may not
be the ones that you originally his daughter
when he started writing, could be extensions of them are completely
different in every way. Don't worry, this is entirely normal and only to be expected. You want your characters
to takeover and reveal why and what and who. It should be very clear that something happened in the past, which is still causing them
problems in the present, in the form of
self-defeating beliefs and behavior that ghost, remember that term
from screenwriting or wound from the past is
still causing them pain. The emotional story map for the entire rest
of the book stems from these limiting beliefs and thought patterns in
and outline like this. All you want to do is create a very high level plan
of the main points. This is not for detail. This is only very, very sketchy. Draft hand-drawn map
of the signposts are where you want to go on the way for the
next three stages. How many rocks, Cagney
throat, these two characters, and how many forests can get lost him before finding
a way out together? Where do they start up
physically and emotionally? And where do they end up
at the end of the road? Think about Jane Eyre. She starts out as the
unwanted child and the great house were
cousins, despise her. She's alone, friendless,
fearful and powerless. She has no control over
what happens to her, has to endure great suffering, physical and psychological. She ends up at the
end of the book as an independently wealthy woman married to the man she loves. And on the terms where she
is completely in control, how she moves from one state to another forms the backbone
of the Jane Eyre story. How did you find the
strength to stand up for yourself and work
towards the truth? What were the crucial
events along the way which made her the woman
she turned out to be, she made a terrible
decision. You remember what? You've walked away
from Rochester? This is the character change or the character arc that readers wanted to
see in a romance. Now you have to plot out how the characters are going to
change through the story. You only need to do this
in very broad strokes. But you're looking for the
major turning points where something can happen
or is revealed, which makes the characters
react and shift and change. So now we can move
on and develop a plan for next three stages. Stage two. This is the falling
in love stage. Show how the hero and
heroine start to see that their lives
can be different if they let go the old beliefs, the C1 other in a new light and recognize their
true natures. The end of stage two there
with some form of commitment. This sequence of
scenes show the hero and heroine falling
in love and acting and reacting to the situation you are all unique
story has placed them in the sequence end
in an obligatory seen. This is the moment of no return, where they make some commitment, which marks the transition
from the falling in love to being in love
with the other person. At this point, there's
no going back. They are locked together now. It could be a first kiss, a declaration, first
real intimacy. But nothing will be
the same ever again. In screenwriting, The
often call this the sex at 60 moment because screenplays up often to a 120 pages
long stage three, commitment to the other person leads to increased
vulnerability. Passion and sex leads
to extra exposure, which reveals that deep
fears and intimate moments. At the end of stage three, something will challenge
them and they have to make a critical decision
of how they wanted to live their lives
and move forward. The stakes are going to
increase in stage three. That's going to be greater
and greater challenges to the internal conflicts and barriers that these
two characters are created to protect themselves. And those barriers
starts to crumble. As they become more intimate. Each of them reveals a
source of their pain and in the process makes themselves a vulnerable and open to be hurt. Again, at the end of
the sequence of scenes, there was one major
obligatory scene where something happens which
makes the two characters feel that they had been betrayed because it hits precisely home
with their greatest fear. This is the black moment, the dark moment where
it looks like all is lost on the romance is over. It can be a sudden revelation or recognition of
a truth or a lie, but it has to be
an explosive seen. It could be one of
the characters, or it could be both
of the characters. But it has to be major. In stage four, they take
a leap of faith and let go of their old ways of self-protection and
face their fears. There's a price to pay for
this new relationship. And it has to be a
concrete decision which pushes them forward into
a new way of living. Now they are ready to embark
on a successful relationship and find real long-term
love with one another. Because the characters
have grown and are stronger as a
result of the romance, they able to confront the
fears are limitations together and decide to let go with the old ways they have
used to protect themselves. This is who they
truly are inside. And this is the person that the other character has
actually fallen in love with. The reward is to find love and the future is that
authentic selves. That final resolution is at the heart of all Romans fiction. And the reason why it is
a literature of hope. Somewhere out there. There's someone who will love
you for who you truly are. This is why we write
romance fiction. And I hope that these
emotional story maps will help you to create your own
powerful romance story which will resonate
with readers. Joy, the writing.
5. Romance Story Structure and Character Arcs: In some commercial fiction, such as crime fiction, the external plot is
crucial to the story. These are known as
plot driven books. Romans fiction, on
the other hand, is fundamentally
character-driven. But that does not mean, but you can neglect the plot. The plot is the sequence
of events that create the strong backbone.
But you're wonderful. Romance is built on. Now that you've worked
on the character arcs for your hero and heroine, you can start editing your draft for the
turning points of your novel that will create the page turning read that
your readers will adore. Character is plot. They are completely
intertwined in commercial romance fiction,
which is character-driven. This has to be reflected in the draft or your
novel, your manuscript. Work together so that
character is revealed by the actions and reactions
are decisions that character takes in response
to the challenges. You've gotta throw
at them through the external plots situation. In turn, the plot is driven
by those reactions and decisions in a series of scenes and sequels
to those scenes. That in one scene, the character makes a decision
at the end of the scene, which leads automatically to
the start of the next scene. That way, the scene
and SQL links to the character and the plot
to create a unified whole. The plot is built up by the actions of the characters
take under pressure. You've already
started working on the character arc for your
hero and your heroin. You know, and have a strong sense of who
your main characters are. The external plot
is the dilemma, challenge or conflict situation
which you put them in. Their responses, actions and decisions will
generate your plot. Then you can start shaping those reactions
into the best form possible for your story. This is story structure, and that's what you're
going to talk about next. Story magic. Story structure, magic, how a
story is really structured. How can you work out the right
structure for your story? Well, the good news is, that's already been done. Frameworks have been
created for you to use. I spent years studying
the best drawing telling teachers like
Joseph Campbell, Robert McKee, John Truby, Blake Snyder and
Christopher Vogler. Plus the published
full-time Roman source there with mills and
boon and Harper Collins. I worked with several
terrific waters, terrific editors who
have shared with me in-depth information
about story structure, counter development, and how to write compelling
Romans fiction. When I started out,
this was gold. It allows me to combine story structure from
screenwriting and novelists with the romance
story development I needed. I learned how to combine
story craft with Roman specific story structure to create award-winning
romance fiction. Imagine that you are
building a house. You start at the bottom
with the foundations, the groundwork for floor layout and the underpinnings
of the building. Then the brick work starts. You can build an office block, a residential home,
or a retail store, or wherever you're
architects blend dictates, but Sundays are
exactly the same. Story structure is
the foundations which underpins
all of your work. On top of those foundations, you can build any kind of
fresh and new store you like of any length and
an, any Roman sub-genre. The foundations of the
story or the same. That's crucial fact. The store you build on those foundations is
your creative genius. But you need a story structure
to support your work. Does that makes
sense? I hope so. Story structure is
a solid foundation underpinning for your romance. The story idea and
the characters may sound great as an idea, but without structure, you'll end up sliding down the
side of the mountain. As this bond was just about to do recent holiday in
Switzerland pre-COVID-19. How can we use stories, craft techniques
from screenwriting? The good news at the
same stores have to take news used by screenwriters
can be applied to fiction. And especially. Commercial genre fiction
such as romance. Why? Because the growth goal
of a screenwriter, the objectivist screenwriter, is precisely the
same as a novelist. Master great, a
compelling emotional journey for the audience,
Narcos readers. And there can be no better
journey than the ups and down roller coaster
ride of Romans fiction. Their job is to choreograph
and control the emotions of the audience who are watching the movie in every single scene. I think it was Joseph
Campbell who said that movie is made up of 60
two-minute great scenes. It is a scene by scene
analysis of the emotions. Don't have to do
that with our work. But you can see the
fundamental similarity. Properly constructed
movie or any story. The story consists of six
basic stages to defined and broken up by five key
turning points in this plot. Not only are these turning
points always the same, do the same function, the occupy the same
positions in the story. More or less. Not wonders writers who says it has to
be exactly this percentage, but it's more or less the
same position in the story. Wonderful screenwriter,
Michael Hagen, who was, has wonderful story classes, has a diagram below which describes classical
story structure. What he's describing
is a structure made up sequences of
scenes which combine into act. You're
right, your scene. You write a number of scenes, clip them together
to make a sequence. Then those sequences
combined to react. Doing writers combine to act 23 in many cases,
but not always. In most fiction, that
would be four acts. If you're writing a long novel, it could be three or four
sequences of scenes per act was a short story
or short novel. We only have one sequence
broken up into small chapters. But the fact is true in
classical story structure, scenes are collected into
sequences of scenes. Was a start, a middle, and an end to each
collection of scenes. Each sequence ends up at the turning point that hooks onto the next scene sequence. Don't worry, I'll explain
that in much more detail in a moment about
turning points here. I think that these drawing
turning points as tent poles, if you've ever gone
camping and have a tent, or been to a circus where
there's a big tent. You need to hold up
the tent with poles. These temples hold up the rest of the story as
the conflict increases. If the ten ports are all in
one side of the tent and the whole thing is completely unbalanced and it will collapse. We've all read
Romans drawings were the setup and ordinary world
seems to take forever. Then suddenly the love story and the dark moment and the resolution is
crammed into the end. No, don't do that. Use these techniques, use these TurningPoint
techniques to set milestones on the journey
that the characters are taking and it's balanced out. Across your eight sequences. Your story will meet
the expectations of your readers who want to see the characters battle
against the odds and make the wrong choices before
they can come together. The greater the battle, the sweeter, the end result. Let's think about that. If you're here on heroin, gets together on one, fall in love, get
married and happy after. Thank you very much to the end. There's no emotional conflict
there, there's no story. Not what readers want to see. They want to see
these characters, their love, their Romans. Here's a great demonstration
of those pegs. Temples from story fix. The major turning points
and the plot shifts. The greater the battle, the sweeter. The end result. Here is the process I use. And I would recommend it to you. Let's say it's a 60 thousand
word romance novel. We have four acts. In those acts, there are
eight sequences of scenes. This is a very simple story, a plan, but it works well. I would recommend it to you. While I just say that
I've just hit you a lot information about four act structure
and 18 structure. But basically it's
about conflict. Emotional conflict
drives any romance. In act one, the hero or heroine, or leaving the ordinary
lives than they meet, something happens and
inciting incident, which completely
throws them off guard. Turns out to their
ordinary life. The point of the plot
that begins a storyline. They're locked together
in some way enact to fall in love. The conflict increases
as the stakes increase. The turning point is where they have to decide and
make a commitment to love or revert back to the old way of living and
the old belief systems. And then that for the
falling action phase, it's the events that
lead to the ending. It's all about conflict. And the four Act eight
sequence structure builds that conflict and gives
you the strength you need. I've talked about. The journey begins in the
opening few chapters, your Romans, stage one. The first act. We introduced an
established our hero or heroine in the ordinary
world that ordinary life. We hook the reader with
interesting characters. Usually we start with one character and makes
sure the reader understands this
is the character that going to be
most engaged with. Usually it's the heroin, uh, but it may not be in many
books I used the hero. We then build sympathy and empathy fat character
by showing they're lacking something that come onto the stage with
their own needs, their own once and
expectations for the future. By the end of this first
collection of scenes, the reader should know
the external conflict or both characters and
their internal conflict. What is missing in the life? I'm a psychology of
the protagonists with the other
person will fulfill. This is the start of
that character arc. This first sequence
ends with a plot point or turning point called
the inciting incident. From screenwriting. Something unusual happens in this ordinary world
which completely turns the life around. Has to be something
completely out of the blue. This usually happens
about ten to 15% for the way
through the book. That's sequence, one. Sequence to our hero and heroine are usually
together at this point, we've introduced them both. They have to react to
this new situation, this startling new event,
this inciting incident. But they don't want to change. They're going to resist moving out of their established lives. So something has to
push them to commit, to train, to change, and try something new. This is linked to
their motivation and needs at this point
where the story begins. But one thing is very
clear from now on, their lives are going
to be different. They're going on a journey,
but at this point, they have a very new
specific objective to achieve and
decided to go for it. This is the external plot that brings a hero
and heroine together. The story situation, what it does is forces them to
stay locked together. The romance then truly
begins from this point. This is turning point too, about twenty-five cents
the way through the book, quarterly book, the
rest of your story builds out from
your turning point. At quarter way through the book. Actually was a falling in
love stage of the book. This is the fun
part of the book. This is why readers come to us. The first sequence,
sequence three, is, I call connection
and communication. In end of act one, we've locked them
together in some sort of project or initiative or some way where they're forced to communicate and interact
with one another. At this point, they're
still relying on their old self
protection mechanisms. But in this sequence three, they started to see
another side of the person as they
are forced to work, to weather and communicate. The sort of get attracted
to one another. The start to notice more
things about the other person. How they talk, the
tone they use, the words they use, and how they act. Sequence three ends in a small turning point
called a pinch point, where something changes
in their relationship, which locks them even
closer together. Usually around the
40% part in the book. Again, not being prescriptive. The second part of
back to sequence for is recognition
and communication. They recognize the value
in the other person. And it started communicate
like human beings. Connection and their dialogue
and their actions built acceptance and trust with one another as the joy beam
with the other person. The key thing you might
sequence for is that it ends with a major shift in the external plot and
the relationship which locks the hero and heroine together in a very powerful way. This could be a sexual
moment, a close moment, intimate or personal moment, but has to be a
fundamental shift or changes the entire
direction of the story. This is slammed bank in
the middle of your book. It's known as the mid
point of no return. Turning 0.3 is halfway
through the book. They come up, go back
from this point. Everything else that
follows pivots on this midpoint seen right in
the middle of your book. That's how important it is. And also make sure there's
no sagging middle. Something seriously happens
in the middle of your book. Which moves us on to
Act three. Enact three. The Archytas have to react to what's happened at that
scene in the midpoint. The stakes increase
at several levels. The relationship starts to
grow and is threatened, but they go against that threat. Limiting beliefs and fears are overcome by deep connection. This step outside
their comfort zone and start to disclose and share their life with
the other person. Usually there's intimacy
and passion for another, leaving to a strong
trusting bond between them, linking them even
closer together. What are the other the characters
is trusting enough and vulnerable enough to share
that background story. And the cause of inner conflict. In screenwriting terms is called the ghost because
it's something that happened in the past which
still haunts that character. Let's say it's the heroine
telling the hero about her tilted wedding
and the fact that her sister betrayed her with her boyfriend and her fiance arbitrary TO with his sister. He has to respond. Tensor leads the revelation with warmth and understanding, showing that she was right. It's okay to trust his person. It's okay to be vulnerable
both this person. This leads us and see a bonding
intimacy and sensitive, deep possibly even protection. This sequence five,
ends in a pinch point, a small turning point
when something changes in the relationship about the sixty-five percent
point on the book, it could be a great disclose
explosion of emotion. It could be a revelation. It could be the fact that they share this story,
this backstory. But is it a major event
in the relationship? We'll then move on to
the second part of Act Three, sequence six. The relationship starts
to have problems. The stakes ramp up. The problems ramp up. As external and internal
conflict increases, as their passion for
another develops, they grow and
mutually dependent on one another and really
unnatural bond between them. They really have fallen
in love at this point. They both moved away from the limiting beliefs
and grown as people into a trusting
relationship and a trusting state. The other person will share
their source of paint and internal conflict in a
major revelation scene. But then something happens. Something major threatens
their relationship. It's usually through
the external conflict, but it directly challenges the internal conflict and
fears of one of them. It could be linked to
a revelation about the character's backstory
or betrayal of trust. Or they think it's
betrayal of trust, or a real attack on the
person's self-worth. For example, the find out the other person who
has been keeping a great secret from them or not telling
them the whole truth. But it's a major setback. It threatens a relationship, it destroys some elements
of the trust there. One of them steps back from
the relationship and retreats back into the old
self-protective mode because of this event. Sequence six ends
with TurningPoint for the major setback at about
75% through the book. This is known as
the dark night of the soul or the black moment, and it's a compulsory
plot point in any Romans, it's a big threat to
the relationship. It deserves to have its moment. We then move into act for for everything they gained in the story and relationships
so far seems at risk. They're under attack. All their fields, fears and deep concerns about being vulnerable
are back in place. They tried to go
forward and grow. And it's welcome
back In bit them. If you're miserable again now, the old belief systems threatened to destroy
their relationship. Now at the chance, they have to regroup and workout where they wanted to do something to save
that relationship. What they do now is in
the final push, the US, the new strengths
and lessons they have learned in their
character growth, but not the same person there
were where the story began. There have changed. Which means they have to
take everything they have learned and take
a remarkable leap of faith in the other person. Sequence seven ends
in the turning 0.5. The climax decision. This is do or die. At this point, they commit the compromise
or the walk-away. Simple as that. Usually this happens at 90% in the book as the action
ramps up towards the end. Sequence eight is
the final scene. Sequence is the aftermath
and resolution. After the climatic decision, the hero and heroine commit
to one another and find the life to work
together in some way. They have resolved what happened at the end of
the previous scene. The hero or heroine or both. And it's much better
if it's both. Have a self-revelation,
a new discovery, which drives them to become the person who represents
their true self. They have to show
how they have grown, overcome their obstacles, and
conquered the old beliefs. They have earned their
happy ever after. And this is it. This is the end of
the book, harass. Now you know how classical
story structure works. You can get started
on building out a powerful emotional experience for your reader in your story. And that's what we're
going to do next.