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1. Introduction: Whether or not you're
a newbie writer, you're probably curious how
you can improve your writing. This video, we discussed 11 tips for how to
improve your writing. Coming up. Hey, you both nerves. I made Latour. I'm a writer of science fiction and
fantasy and romance, and my debut novel is
coming out in fall of 2020. I also formerly worked at a literary agency on this
episode of iron readily, we're going to be
talking about 11 tips for how to improve your writing. Writing a novel is
really difficult. Often it takes many
writers years to complete their first novel and then many more years after that too, write a good novel. So that means that your first novels usually
aren't very good. Especially this
early drafts are not the best that we will ever
write in our writing careers. And that's because as
new untested authors, we don't know how to
write a good book yet. I've heard that writers
worry about four books prior to getting
a literary agent, whether or not that's true, most race have to write several books before they
really get the hang of things. If you're watching
this video, you're probably wondering
how you can shorten your learning curve and write
better books more quickly. Let's talk about the
11 ways that you can improve your writing
skills today.
2. Acknowledge there is always room to grow & do your homeworks: Number one acknowledged
that you don't know everything and that you're
writing isn't perfect. One surefire sign of
a newbie writer is to think that your
writing is perfect. Nothing but anyone can say against your
story if applicable, because if they do
have a critique, that just means they all get your story and not That's
your story needs improving. Certainly not that I
was their friends. Once upon a time,
newbie writer Meg thought that her first draft, first book ever was going to be a New York Times
bestselling book. It was not first drafts are not final drafts according
to Terry project, the first draft is just you
telling yourself the story. Therefore, be open-minded to the fact that while
you might have a great concept here are
really cool characters. You might have to
polish that book many, many times and go through many, many drafts in order to
prepare it for the eyes of the reader number to research
how to write a good book. As newbie writers, we
cannot hope to figure out how to write
books on our own, or at least most of us can't. Therefore, you will want to
do some research on your own about how to
write a good book. For example, some topics you might want to research and learn more about include plot
structure, character arcs, how to give a character
unique voice, pacing, as you might be inferring
from this list, reading a good book is
about more than grammar. Here are a few resources
that you could check out. Non-fiction books about
how to write a novel, which could be checked
out from the library. So you do not immediately
have to purchase anything. Free articles and blogs,
online, YouTube videos. I writerly, for example, is part of a niche on
YouTube called author tube, where writers and creators make videos about how to write books. You can check out
online courses. There's always the option of a formal education at a
college or university. A separate dropdown
item to this one, like online courses taught
by professors but aren't necessarily part of a
degree program of sorts. Reading books by grace in
your genre is probably one of the best ways that you
can learn how to write, say the books that you
love, and analyze. What do those authors do that
makes such a great story? And why are you drawn to
those particular stories? And of course, there's
many more options. These are just a few of
the ways that you can research how to
write a good book. Now, keep in mind there are many free resources to learn more about how to
write a good book. I had referenced a
few in this list, such as free articles and
blogs, YouTube videos. Right now you're watching
I write really it's free. There's a lot of
stuff that maybe if you have a local library, you can get books
from a local library. So don't be pulling out
your wallet right away. I talked about this a little
bit in my previous video. Who should give writing advice? But if you're gonna be
paying for anything, an online course or a
book or whatever it is. Make sure that the
person teaching that subject is an expert. Ideally, they should be doing the things that you
yourself aspire to do. I will leave a link in the
description below to my video. Who should give writing advice if you want to learn
a little bit more about my thoughts on how to
pick good paid programs.
4. Online prior to writing & get outside feedback: Number Three, consider outlining your book before you write it. If you haven't yet heard
of plotters and Panzers or gardeners and architects
allow me to enlighten you. A plotter, also
called an architect, is a person who plans out their story prior to writing it. A Panther, which is
someone who flies by the seat of their pants and
also called a gardener, is someone who doesn't plan the story before
they write it. A lot of times these are
our discovery writers. They're going to write
things and discover things about the
story along the way. They don't outline or do lots
of preparation in advance. The reason I also call it gardeners and architects
is because there's a famous quote by the
author Georgia or Martin, who wrote The Song of
Ice and Fire series of better known as Game of Thrones, that talks about the plotter
versus pants or discussion, but he calls them gardeners
versus architects. I had heard that first before appearing, plotters
and Panthers. But in other tooth, that's what most
people refer to it as. So just figured out through
both terms out there in case you guys have also
heard that quote as well. Now, there is no right or
wrong way to go about writing. However, a panzer has a
lot more work to do in the editing phase because meno plan out the
work in advance. Therefore, consider
checking things out like beat sheets or researching the plot and
structure of a novel. Before you write your novel, you don't have to
write your novel out in advance if
you're just like. And that's totally cool. But consider
checking out some of these things prior to writing. Just so you have
a general idea of what plot beats should
be in what sections, because all stories
have structure. It's just a matter of where those things
happen in the book, maybe happens at 15% in this
book and this other one. Big plot B happens at 10%. You still have to
have those beats, but they don't have to be
in the exact same places, Save the Cat writes a novel, for example, has a lot
of beat sheets and that is a popular resource
here on offer to you, but definitely consider
checking that out. I think I should
add here that if you're writing your
very first novel, you probably have no idea if
you're a plotter or panzer, or a gardener or an architect, you've never written
a book before, so you don't know
what your process is. So I recommend
experimenting with both avenues to see which
works best for you. For me, I was painting my first
couple of drafts and then after writing my first couple
of books is like licensing. And then I flipped the
exact opposite side. So now I plot my books
out in advance and I don't just plot the
general events. I plot chapter by
chapter outlines. So wherever you fall
on the spectrum, if you're a new writer, experiment to see what
works best for you. Number four, or work with critique partners
and beta readers. Critique partners and
beta readers both provide feedback on
unpublished manuscripts, but they are a little
bit different. Critique partners are
writers who provide feedback on your work,
usually by requests. So maybe you swap chapters
or full manuscripts. Beta readers are usually
not writers and they read your manuscript and
provide a general feedback. It's not gonna be
quite as in depth as feedback from a writer, but I'm going to
stop reading here. And that is, so you are getting
literally beta readers, people to read your
novel as readers and tell you what is
or isn't working. I think there are a lot of people in the writing community that also use writers
as beta readers. I know I certainly do for some of the groups
that I get together. So generally speaking, beta readers do not
have to be writers. Critique partners
are writers and usually you're
swapping manuscripts, as you probably know, without outside feedback
on our stories, we cannot improve our writing. This is due to writers, our own blindness
to the flaws in our story because we
are so close to it. If we see the story
in our heads, we can see it so
perfectly that we don't, we're blind to those
faults when we put idea in our heads, idea on a paper, we don't see where things
are missing the Rida, we don't describe a character enough or show how
they're feeling, or maybe we're telling
more than showing. But this idea is like this perfection in our head and it's so wonderful
and beautiful. And sometimes there's
an error in translation of that idea in our
head to ID on the page. And it is the job ID, a good critique partner and
a good beta reader to help us find where there's errors
in translation to say, during this time,
this religion work, what if you do this? And so we really just need
outside feedback on our work as writers in order to help us make the best story possible.
7. Determine your weak spots & be open to the feedbacks: Number five, be open to critique or feedback on your work. It's not just about
getting feedback from critique partners
and beta readers. If you are not open to making
changes to your story than this exercise of getting
feedback is pointless. Do your best to
look at your story objectively and listen to what the critique partners
and beta readers are saying. Number six, look closely
at your weakest points. Did your critique partners
and beta readers have a consensus about what parts of the story really needed
some work that is most likely your weak
spot as a writer. For me, I've always
struggled with info dumps. And most recently on my adult space opera that's
coming out in fall of 2021. Thing I've been working
really hard on is not having too much
internalization from my protagonist and spending
too much time on her head versus actually out in
scenes doing things. Simply knowing those
things is really helpful so that when
you are self editing, you can look for those
things as you're editing, maybe even before you
get your manuscript to critique partners and beta
readers, or maybe afterwards, It's really important to be
able to identify where you just struggle as a writer and we all have something
that we struggle with. So listen to what the
consensus is for feedback. If a lot of your critique
partners and beta readers are saying this thing
needs to be improved. You probably really
want to focus on that. But there's always
an outliner that one person that
is like this big. I really didn't like this inside while everyone
else is like. So there's always
gonna be one outlier. But I would say be
attentive to what everybody is saying and look for common themes or threads. If there's a common theme, more than likely you are
going to want to address it. Number seven, edit the book
on your own many times. As I mentioned earlier, the first draft is
not the final draft. Most authors edit the
book dozens of times before you see the final copy
that's on the bookshelves? When I say dozens of times, they sometimes
that they ended it on their own by
themselves and then sometimes with an editor or
beta readers or whatever. Personally, I edit
my own manuscripts two to five times on my own, front-to-back
beginning to end of the manuscript before
I will ship it off to my first round of critique partners
or alpha readers. After that, I worked with critique partners
and beta readers, Send them my manuscript
and work through many, many drafts and then
self-edit in-between. Consider working with more critique partners
and beta readers. And it could be
the same person or different people after you've maybe worked with
them once and then you've implemented
your own feedback. Consider working
with them again. Ideally, you want to work
with critique partners and or beta readers through several
drafts of your book. The exact number of
times you work with critique partners and
beta readers is going to be up to you and up to them and everyone's
availabilities. But I recommend at least two, at the very least to, but I think maybe even three to four times is a
good number before maybe you send it off
to a literary agent or to an editor if
you're self-publishing.
9. Final tips: Number eight, brush
up on grammar. Wow, good grammar doesn't
make a good story. Bad grammar can pull
you out of one. Let me say that again. Well, good grammar
doesn't make good story. Bad grammar can pull
you out of one eye. Such you will want to be able to identify proper punctuation, sentence structure and so on. I readily, we are
affiliates with Grammarly. I personally use them
and I don't know if I've ever actually say this
to you guys on this channel, but I'm not the best speller. I swear all the words
that sound the same. I mixed them up all the
time like course CoA, RSC, and then of course, C-O-L-O-U-R SE, I'm mixing things up all the time and
so things like grandma, start really using
the wrong thing. Number nine, read books by
grades within your genre. I mentioned this a little
bit earlier in this video, but dissect the
books that you love. Try to determine what you
enjoy and these books, as well as what the
author excels at. In addition, maybe think
about the ways that you can emulate some
of the things or incorporate certain aspects
of what they do into your own writing
without plagiarizing or feeling like you're regurgitating their
style of writing. You don't want to be like mimicking them to me,
that's like icky, but it's good to be
like, Oh my gosh, this is how this person portrays a unique
voice for a character. We think about how I can
do that in my own writing. Number ten, right? Often to sharpen your skills, according to Malcolm Gladwell, it takes 10 thousand hours, which is approximately
ten years of doing something to
become an expert. While you don't need to write
books for ten years before you're deemed ready to put
your books into the world, you do need to be
putting time into honing your skill and
craft as a writer. Number 11, write the next book, going along with
our previous point, the best way to be
a better author is to write many books. That is because the
more books you right, the better you get at it. From my experience,
writing a book isn't something
that you can teach. Sure, you can learn
the principles for how to write a good book from other authors or
teachers or industry experts. But you must learn
how you as an author, operate through the process
of writing your own books. How you write is
going to be different from how somebody else writes. Therefore, the only way to
glean that knowledge of how you work as an author is
to actually write a book. I feel like there's a
lot of people that I speak to you in the
comments that are like, Hey, I've been working on
this book for ten years. And while there's absolutely authors at work on
books for many, many years, just be careful that you're not hanging on that
first book for too long. Because I think there's a lot of things that can be learned by even temporarily
shelving a book. So putting it to the
side, that deleting it, just putting it to the side
and working on a new project. You learned so much by
working on a new project. And then you maybe learned
about story structure or character arcs
and plot arcs and all these different
things that you can't necessarily learn from reading the same book over
and over and over. So just a word of caution. I'm not saying to stop reading your book because you've been
running it for too long. You do you, however, best way to become
a better author is to write more books. Thank you for tuning
in to this episode of writerly all about how
to improve your writing. That's it for today. As always, keep writing.