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1. Welcome!: So you've written your perfect essay or
assignment introduction. You've composed well structured, flowing body paragraphs that
build on your argument. Now the time has come for you
to write your conclusion. You're probably thinking,
where do I even start? Hello. I'm Wendy. In addition to numerous essays and assignments over the years, I've also written a full
length research report, a master's dissertation,
and a PhD thesis. I've presented numerous
academic writing workshops and have consulted
with thousands of under and post graduate college
and university students seeking assistance with
their academic writing. So whether you're a learner who wants to improve
your grades, a college or university
student who wants to excel in your academic
essays and assignments, a teacher in need
of a refresher or an academic scholar who simply wants to improve the
quality of your writing. This class is for you. This class offers you step by step instructions on how to
write a memorable conclusion. During this class, I'll talk about the importance of writing a memorable conclusion
and what it is that makes a conclusion
truly unforgettable. I'll also cover aspects such as rephrasing your
thesis statement, summarizing key points from
your essay or assignment, and explaining to your reader
why your argument matters. For your class project, you'll be writing your
very own conclusion, using all of the knowledge and skills gained
throughout this class, You'll also have the
opportunity to share your work and to get feedback
from me if you so wish. I'm really looking forward
to sharing with you just how easy it is to write a conclusion
that is unforgettable. What are you waiting
for? Click on that next video and
let's get started.
2. The importance of a memorable conclusion: The last line of your essay
should always explain to the reader why your
argument is important, or why it matters. It helps to reframe this as
an answer to the question. What? Why should I care
or why is this important? If your reader really were
to ask these questions, how would you respond in a final effort to convince
them of your argument? Now, this is what you
need to think about in this part of your conclusion. As mentioned earlier, explaining to your
reader why your argument matters usually occurs in the final sentence of
your essay or assignment. In answering the question, what? It helps to think about the main message
that you're trying to convey or the point
you're trying to drive home. Essentially, if the reader
could only take away one thing from your entire essay or assignment, what would it be? What is your takeaway
message to the reader? Now, in order to do this, it's necessary to take a
step back and to remind the reader of the bigger picture in relation to your topic. Here are some effective ways to end your essay or assignment. You could share a final, important or
powerful observation with regard to your topic. Now here, it's really
important that you take a firm stand when it comes to your position in
relation to the topic, and that you guard against weakening your
argument by calling into question or by showing any uncertainty
or doubt about it. For instance, don't
say something like there's still much debate
surrounding this issue, and then just simply
leave it at that. As that merely shows the reader that you don't
really know where you stand. In which case, you can't actually expect them
to agree with you. Think about the implications
of your message or argument. For example, does it bring about new insights or understanding? Does it raise any
further questions? You could also end with a
definite call to action or a suggestion about how you'd like your
reader to respond. Alternatively, you could
make a recommendation or a prediction or draw attention to specific results
or consequences. You may also point out
something that you'd like your reader to think
about or to reflect on. However, regardless of the
strategy that you choose, remember that your
conclusion should never introduce any new ideas
or new information. One very effective way of ending your conclusion is by looking back at your hook and
thesis statement, both of which appear
in your introduction, and then somehow linking
these to your final sentence. Let's take a look at how
this is done in practice. In Essay example one, my hook stated that
the wearing of school uniforms has been a controversial topic
for hundreds of years. For my final sentence, I have chosen to
start with while it continues to be the subject
of contentious debate, which basically mirrors
what I've said before. I now need to take this one step further by referring back
to my thesis statement, and therefore, my
position on the topic. Here, I've chosen to
continue my sentence with. It's important to recognize
the many ways in which school uniforms stand to benefit rather than
disadvantage learners, and to give these
due consideration when developing school policy. Not only does this confirm
my position on the topic, but it can also be seen as a definite call
to action in that I'm asking my reader to consider the various benefits
of school uniforms. I'm also suggesting
or recommending that these be taken into account when developing
school policies. Let's consider another example taken from essay example two. Here, my thesis
statement focuses on the serious health risks posed by the use of
anabolic steroids. In my conclusion, I need to bear my thesis statement in mind when making my
final statement. After all, the
thesis statement is the golden thread linking all of the various parts of
my essay together. Once again, I have
chosen to conclude my essay by taking
a firm stance with regard to the topic and emphasizing the truly
disastrous consequences of taking anabolic steroids
by highlighting the adverse effects of these on a person's
overall well being, both physically and
psychologically. Again, I point out that not only do these lead
to bad outcomes, but that there is also little chance of ever recovering from the
damage they cause. Thus, I'm leaving my reader
with a very clear message, which is likely to
make them think twice about ever using
these substances. Okay. Now it's your turn to write your final
concluding sentence. Do this by to your reader why
your argument is important and linking it back to your hook and thesis statement.
Happy writing.
3. The key aspects of a memorable conclusion: The last line of your essay
should always explain to the reader why your
argument is important, or why it matters. It helps to reframe this as
an answer to the question. What? Why should I care
or why is this important? If your reader really were
to ask these questions, how would you respond in a final effort to convince
them of your argument? Now, this is what you
need to think about in this part of your conclusion. As mentioned earlier, explaining to your
reader why your argument matters usually occurs in the final sentence of
your essay or assignment. In answering the question, what? It helps to think about the main message
that you're trying to convey or the point
you're trying to drive home. Essentially, if the reader
could only take away one thing from your entire essay or assignment, what would it be? What is your takeaway
message to the reader? Now, in order to do this, it's necessary to take a
step back and to remind the reader of the bigger picture in relation to your topic. Here are some effective ways to end your essay or assignment. You could share a final, important or
powerful observation with regard to your topic. Now here, it's really
important that you take a firm stand when it comes to your position in
relation to the topic, and that you guard against weakening your
argument by calling into question or by showing any uncertainty
or doubt about it. For instance, don't
say something like there's still much debate
surrounding this issue, and then just simply
leave it at that. As that merely shows the reader that you don't
really know where you stand. In which case, you can't actually expect them
to agree with you. Think about the implications
of your message or argument. For example, does it bring about new insights or understanding? Does it raise any
further questions? You could also end with a
definite call to action or a suggestion about how you'd like your
reader to respond. Alternatively, you could
make a recommendation or a prediction or draw attention to specific results
or consequences. You may also point out
something that you'd like your reader to think
about or to reflect on. However, regardless of the
strategy that you choose, remember that your
conclusion should never introduce any new ideas
or new information. One very effective way of ending your conclusion is by looking back at your hook and
thesis statement, both of which appear
in your introduction, and then somehow linking
these to your final sentence. Let's take a look at how
this is done in practice. In Essay example one, my hook stated that
the wearing of school uniforms has been a controversial topic
for hundreds of years. For my final sentence, I have chosen to
start with while it continues to be the subject
of contentious debate, which basically mirrors
what I've said before. I now need to take this one step further by referring back
to my thesis statement, and therefore, my
position on the topic. Here, I've chosen to
continue my sentence with. It's important to recognize
the many ways in which school uniforms stand to benefit rather than
disadvantage learners, and to give these
due consideration when developing school policy. Not only does this confirm
my position on the topic, but it can also be seen as a definite call
to action in that I'm asking my reader to consider the various benefits
of school uniforms. I'm also suggesting
or recommending that these be taken into account when developing
school policies. Let's consider another example taken from essay example two. Here, my thesis
statement focuses on the serious health risks posed by the use of
anabolic steroids. In my conclusion, I need to bear my thesis statement in mind when making my
final statement. After all, the
thesis statement is the golden thread linking all of the various parts of
my essay together. Once again, I have
chosen to conclude my essay by taking
a firm stance with regard to the topic and emphasizing the truly
disastrous consequences of taking anabolic steroids
by highlighting the adverse effects of these on a person's
overall well being, both physically and
psychologically. Again, I point out that not only do these lead
to bad outcomes, but that there is also little chance of ever recovering from the
damage they cause. Thus, I'm leaving my reader
with a very clear message, which is likely to
make them think twice about ever using
these substances. Okay. Now it's your turn to write your final
concluding sentence. Do this by to your reader why
your argument is important and linking it back to your hook and thesis statement.
Happy writing.
4. Rephrasing the thesis statement: The last line of your essay
should always explain to the reader why your
argument is important, or why it matters. It helps to reframe this as
an answer to the question. What? Why should I care
or why is this important? If your reader really were
to ask these questions, how would you respond in a final effort to convince
them of your argument? Now, this is what you
need to think about in this part of your conclusion. As mentioned earlier, explaining to your
reader why your argument matters usually occurs in the final sentence of
your essay or assignment. In answering the question, what? It helps to think about the main message
that you're trying to convey or the point
you're trying to drive home. Essentially, if the reader
could only take away one thing from your entire essay or assignment, what would it be? What is your takeaway
message to the reader? Now, in order to do this, it's necessary to take a
step back and to remind the reader of the bigger picture in relation to your topic. Here are some effective ways to end your essay or assignment. You could share a final, important or
powerful observation with regard to your topic. Now here, it's really
important that you take a firm stand when it comes to your position in
relation to the topic, and that you guard against weakening your
argument by calling into question or by showing any uncertainty
or doubt about it. For instance, don't
say something like there's still much debate
surrounding this issue, and then just simply
leave it at that. As that merely shows the reader that you don't
really know where you stand. In which case, you can't actually expect them
to agree with you. Think about the implications
of your message or argument. For example, does it bring about new insights or understanding? Does it raise any
further questions? You could also end with a
definite call to action or a suggestion about how you'd like your
reader to respond. Alternatively, you could
make a recommendation or a prediction or draw attention to specific results
or consequences. You may also point out
something that you'd like your reader to think
about or to reflect on. However, regardless of the
strategy that you choose, remember that your
conclusion should never introduce any new ideas
or new information. One very effective way of ending your conclusion is by looking back at your hook and
thesis statement, both of which appear
in your introduction, and then somehow linking
these to your final sentence. Let's take a look at how
this is done in practice. In Essay example one, my hook stated that
the wearing of school uniforms has been a controversial topic
for hundreds of years. For my final sentence, I have chosen to
start with while it continues to be the subject
of contentious debate, which basically mirrors
what I've said before. I now need to take this one step further by referring back
to my thesis statement, and therefore, my
position on the topic. Here, I've chosen to
continue my sentence with. It's important to recognize
the many ways in which school uniforms stand to benefit rather than
disadvantage learners, and to give these
due consideration when developing school policy. Not only does this confirm
my position on the topic, but it can also be seen as a definite call
to action in that I'm asking my reader to consider the various benefits
of school uniforms. I'm also suggesting
or recommending that these be taken into account when developing
school policies. Let's consider another example taken from essay example two. Here, my thesis
statement focuses on the serious health risks posed by the use of
anabolic steroids. In my conclusion, I need to bear my thesis statement in mind when making my
final statement. After all, the
thesis statement is the golden thread linking all of the various parts of
my essay together. Once again, I have
chosen to conclude my essay by taking
a firm stance with regard to the topic and emphasizing the truly
disastrous consequences of taking anabolic steroids
by highlighting the adverse effects of these on a person's
overall well being, both physically and
psychologically. Again, I point out that not only do these lead
to bad outcomes, but that there is also little chance of ever recovering from the
damage they cause. Thus, I'm leaving my reader
with a very clear message, which is likely to
make them think twice about ever using
these substances. Okay. Now it's your turn to write your final
concluding sentence. Do this by to your reader why
your argument is important and linking it back to your hook and thesis statement.
Happy writing.
5. Summarising the key points: The last line of your essay
should always explain to the reader why your
argument is important, or why it matters. It helps to reframe this as
an answer to the question. What? Why should I care
or why is this important? If your reader really were
to ask these questions, how would you respond in a final effort to convince
them of your argument? Now, this is what you
need to think about in this part of your conclusion. As mentioned earlier, explaining to your
reader why your argument matters usually occurs in the final sentence of
your essay or assignment. In answering the question, what? It helps to think about the main message
that you're trying to convey or the point
you're trying to drive home. Essentially, if the reader
could only take away one thing from your entire essay or assignment, what would it be? What is your takeaway
message to the reader? Now, in order to do this, it's necessary to take a
step back and to remind the reader of the bigger picture in relation to your topic. Here are some effective ways to end your essay or assignment. You could share a final, important or
powerful observation with regard to your topic. Now here, it's really
important that you take a firm stand when it comes to your position in
relation to the topic, and that you guard against weakening your
argument by calling into question or by showing any uncertainty
or doubt about it. For instance, don't
say something like there's still much debate
surrounding this issue, and then just simply
leave it at that. As that merely shows the reader that you don't
really know where you stand. In which case, you can't actually expect them
to agree with you. Think about the implications
of your message or argument. For example, does it bring about new insights or understanding? Does it raise any
further questions? You could also end with a
definite call to action or a suggestion about how you'd like your
reader to respond. Alternatively, you could
make a recommendation or a prediction or draw attention to specific results
or consequences. You may also point out
something that you'd like your reader to think
about or to reflect on. However, regardless of the
strategy that you choose, remember that your
conclusion should never introduce any new ideas
or new information. One very effective way of ending your conclusion is by looking back at your hook and
thesis statement, both of which appear
in your introduction, and then somehow linking
these to your final sentence. Let's take a look at how
this is done in practice. In Essay example one, my hook stated that
the wearing of school uniforms has been a controversial topic
for hundreds of years. For my final sentence, I have chosen to
start with while it continues to be the subject
of contentious debate, which basically mirrors
what I've said before. I now need to take this one step further by referring back
to my thesis statement, and therefore, my
position on the topic. Here, I've chosen to
continue my sentence with. It's important to recognize
the many ways in which school uniforms stand to benefit rather than
disadvantage learners, and to give these
due consideration when developing school policy. Not only does this confirm
my position on the topic, but it can also be seen as a definite call
to action in that I'm asking my reader to consider the various benefits
of school uniforms. I'm also suggesting
or recommending that these be taken into account when developing
school policies. Let's consider another example taken from essay example two. Here, my thesis
statement focuses on the serious health risks posed by the use of
anabolic steroids. In my conclusion, I need to bear my thesis statement in mind when making my
final statement. After all, the
thesis statement is the golden thread linking all of the various parts of
my essay together. Once again, I have
chosen to conclude my essay by taking
a firm stance with regard to the topic and emphasizing the truly
disastrous consequences of taking anabolic steroids
by highlighting the adverse effects of these on a person's
overall well being, both physically and
psychologically. Again, I point out that not only do these lead
to bad outcomes, but that there is also little chance of ever recovering from the
damage they cause. Thus, I'm leaving my reader
with a very clear message, which is likely to
make them think twice about ever using
these substances. Okay. Now it's your turn to write your final
concluding sentence. Do this by to your reader why
your argument is important and linking it back to your hook and thesis statement.
Happy writing.
6. Explaining why your argument is important: The last line of your essay
should always explain to the reader why your
argument is important, or why it matters. It helps to reframe this as
an answer to the question. What? Why should I care
or why is this important? If your reader really were
to ask these questions, how would you respond in a final effort to convince
them of your argument? Now, this is what you
need to think about in this part of your conclusion. As mentioned earlier, explaining to your
reader why your argument matters usually occurs in the final sentence of
your essay or assignment. In answering the question, what? It helps to think about the main message
that you're trying to convey or the point
you're trying to drive home. Essentially, if the reader
could only take away one thing from your entire essay or assignment, what would it be? What is your takeaway
message to the reader? Now, in order to do this, it's necessary to take a
step back and to remind the reader of the bigger picture in relation to your topic. Here are some effective ways to end your essay or assignment. You could share a final, important or
powerful observation with regard to your topic. Now here, it's really
important that you take a firm stand when it comes to your position in
relation to the topic, and that you guard against weakening your
argument by calling into question or by showing any uncertainty
or doubt about it. For instance, don't
say something like there's still much debate
surrounding this issue, and then just simply
leave it at that. As that merely shows the reader that you don't
really know where you stand. In which case, you can't actually expect them
to agree with you. Think about the implications
of your message or argument. For example, does it bring about new insights or understanding? Does it raise any
further questions? You could also end with a
definite call to action or a suggestion about how you'd like your
reader to respond. Alternatively, you could
make a recommendation or a prediction or draw attention to specific results
or consequences. You may also point out
something that you'd like your reader to think
about or to reflect on. However, regardless of the
strategy that you choose, remember that your
conclusion should never introduce any new ideas
or new information. One very effective way of ending your conclusion is by looking back at your hook and
thesis statement, both of which appear
in your introduction, and then somehow linking
these to your final sentence. Let's take a look at how
this is done in practice. In Essay example one, my hook stated that
the wearing of school uniforms has been a controversial topic
for hundreds of years. For my final sentence, I have chosen to
start with while it continues to be the subject
of contentious debate, which basically mirrors
what I've said before. I now need to take this one step further by referring back
to my thesis statement, and therefore, my
position on the topic. Here, I've chosen to
continue my sentence with. It's important to recognize
the many ways in which school uniforms stand to benefit rather than
disadvantage learners, and to give these
due consideration when developing school policy. Not only does this confirm
my position on the topic, but it can also be seen as a definite call
to action in that I'm asking my reader to consider the various benefits
of school uniforms. I'm also suggesting
or recommending that these be taken into account when developing
school policies. Let's consider another example taken from essay example two. Here, my thesis
statement focuses on the serious health risks posed by the use of
anabolic steroids. In my conclusion, I need to bear my thesis statement in mind when making my
final statement. After all, the
thesis statement is the golden thread linking all of the various parts of
my essay together. Once again, I have
chosen to conclude my essay by taking
a firm stance with regard to the topic and emphasizing the truly
disastrous consequences of taking anabolic steroids
by highlighting the adverse effects of these on a person's
overall well being, both physically and
psychologically. Again, I point out that not only do these lead
to bad outcomes, but that there is also little chance of ever recovering from the
damage they cause. Thus, I'm leaving my reader
with a very clear message, which is likely to
make them think twice about ever using
these substances. Okay. Now it's your turn to write your final
concluding sentence. Do this by to your reader why
your argument is important and linking it back to your hook and thesis statement.
Happy writing.