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1. Introduction: Hello and welcome to
character-driven storytelling, story development for your
novel or for your screenplay. We can use what you
learn in this class. Whether you're writing
prose and a novel form, whether you are just creating stories for a children's
book or for your, for the kids in your family. Or you are trying to
write a screenplay, whether it's a TV
pilot or it's a movie. A lot of cool things we're
going to learn in this class. This class is perfect for you. If you're at the beginning
stages of developing a story, you are trying to figure out who your protagonist is,
your main character. You're trying to figure out what your protagonist's
goals are, what problems that this
person is trying to solve, where they want to end up
at the end of the story. We're also going to talk
about the protagonist allies. Who are these people
who are helping your protagonist along the path of completing these goals. Finally, we'll also talk
about the antagonists. So the antagonistic forces, who are the bad guys, who are standing in
your heroes path? Who are the forces
or rather what are the forces that are trying to keep your protagonist
from reaching his goals? So if you're at the
beginning stages of a story, whether you are a
beginning writer, a beginner, complete
novice writer, or you're a seasoned writer, you are going to be able to use the worksheets that I
provide in this class to flesh out your story by looking at these three
main characters. So your protagonist, who
is your main character? This is the hero of your story. The eye. We'll talk about the term
hero in just a moment. The Allies and this can
be one or more people. And it can also be kind of like forces that are helping
your protagonist as well. Then thirdly, the
antagonist, the bad guys, the pupil getting in the way of your hero getting to his goals. But these can also be
antagonistic forces, and we'll talk about that
when we get to that module. I called your
protagonist the hero. I want to address
this real quick. Your protagonist is the main
character of your story, is the character to whom
the story is happening. Who's going through
this journey? Who's going to be most changed? The journey of the story. This does not mean that your
character has to be heroic. It doesn't mean your characters, superman or a firefighter or somebody who's like
super good event. It can be a kind
of an anti-hero. It can be someone who's doing bad things and hurting people. But if that's the case, we have to understand why. Because we cannot route for a character that we
don't understand. We, as an audience, we will make allowances for a character who's
behaving poorly. If we understand those choices, if we understand the pain
that is underneath it may be or trauma that is
fueling this action. And the goals that
this character is trying to reach by
taking these actions. Maybe this person
is trying to truly save the one person on
the planet that he loves. And maybe that one person on
the planet that he loves is also con artist or as
a murder or whatever. But they have this love and
this bond between them. We have to be able to see that your character does
not have to be heroic. Your main character does
not have to be heroic. But he has to be sympathetic. We have to understand them. We have to feel
sympathy for him, even if we don't
condone his actions. That's why your protagonist,
your main character, is your hero, even though he does not have to be
a heroic character. All right, so with that
disclaimer out of the way, what are you going to
learn in this class? As I mentioned, there's
a lot of worksheets, so every module is
going to take us a little bit deeper
into your story and we're going to use character to dive
into these stories. So the worksheets,
There's a worksheet for every single module that
we're going to cover. And these worksheets are
designed to help you understand who your main
character is, your protagonist. What are your
protagonist's goals? What's this person trying to Achieved throughout
the storyline. We're going to understand who is helping your character
get to these goals. So those are the allies. And again, who are these allies? The more we can understand
the characters in the story, there are individual
motivations. The more fleshed out
the story can become. We're going to understand
your characters, your main character's flaw. Your character has
some kind of a wound, has some kind of a flower going to kind of dive into that. And we will use that
flaw to create conflict. And we will use that flaw
to fuel the antagonists actions against our hero and
his allies or her Allies. Finally, we're going
to use that flaw, that character flaw
to see if we can pull out a special skill
that your character has turned that into a different
way for your character to respond and react to the
world around him or her. And potentially take an
uncharacteristic action that is rooted in the
scale rather than the flaw that can
potentially save the day. So by the end of this workshop, by the end of this class, if we do all of those worksheets that I'm going to share with
you in this class. You are going to have a blueprint of your
story from beginning to add with some of the major
turning points fleshed out. Now, this is going to give you a good starting point to sit
down and write your story without having to look at a blank page because
you're going to have now a roadmap that we are developing with the help
of these worksheets, I'm really excited to dive into your story and see
what it's all about. And obviously, share
your stories with me, share the aha moments with me as you go through this class. Your project at the
end is going to be basically having that blueprints so that when you're
sitting down with someone, you can tell them the story. You can tell who
these characters are, what's going to happen, how he's going to prevail. You know, how your hero is
going to finally prevail at the end and against all odds. And what are all of
those odds that right? So we're going to
flush all of that out. It's very exciting. And when you do share it
down below in the comments, create a little
project for yourself and put in your responses, at the very least, your major aha moments
about your characters. Alright, I am so excited for you and I will see you
in module one.
2. There's A Goal: Ride. Welcome everyone
to Module one. In this module we are going
to talk about your story. Something has to happen
inside your story, otherwise, why are
we watching it? The thing about
your story is that this thing that needs to
happen, needs to happen. And your main character is the person who can
make this happen. So there is a problem
that needs to be solved, and the only person who can solve it is your main character. This is why your main character
is your main character. This is why the protagonist
is the protagonist. Because whatever
needs to happen, whatever problem needs
to be solved for whatever goal needs
to be achieved, can only be achieved
by your protagonist. This is y, this is your
central character. Something needs to happen. Some problem needs to be solved, some goal needs to be achieved. And your protagonist is the
one who needs to do this. It's your protagonist job essentially to go through the journey of the story
and solve that problem, reach that goal, and participate in this event
that needs to take place. Now in your story,
there's also forces, conflicts that are going to keep your character from
reaching that goal. They're going to try to
keep your character, your story from actually
resolving itself entirely. Later in this class we're
going to talk about those forces and
right now we're just catching up on it a little bit. But your story
essentially is you have a main character who
has to do something, take action in order to solve a problem or try to reach
some kind of a goal. He does this against
all sorts of conflicting forces that
are trying to keep him or her from
actually doing that. That's basically the
gist of your story. I want you to start
writing right away. So these modules, they're
gonna be somewhat short. I'm going to do as little
talking as possible. I will give you a couple of
examples so you kinda get a sense of what
we're doing here. But I want you to dive into the worksheets because that's
where the magic happens. You only have a few
minutes to write. That's okay. All of these worksheets, you can do them in
like 1015 minutes. So you can even set
a timer if you want. But there are very short
and sweet and to the point. So let me give you a couple
of examples real quick. Let's say the movie airplane. You've seen airplane,
it's a classic. It's been around forever. If you haven't seen it,
definitely watch it. It's a lot of fun. But in the movie Airplane, an event has taken place, which is there's food
poisoning on this plane. Everyone is sick,
including the pilots. There's no one to fly
this plane down safely. Everyone might die, right? So that is the premise
of this movie. But there is on board Stryker, who is the main character
of this movie it had Stryker is somebody who
could fly this plane down. In the next chapter, we're going to dive a little bit
into his backstory, but for whatever reason, he's not able to. So he's not able to. A lot of the conflict
comes from his PTSD. He has PTSD from being in
the Air Force years before. And in fact, he has not even
been able to get on a plane. And the only reason he's on this plane is because
his girlfriend Elaine, who was a stewardess, as finally leaving him and she has said to him
that I'm not coming back. So he buys a one-way ticket, gets on this plane, and now there's a problem
and he's the only person, he's the only person on
the entire plane who could solve this problem of
landing this plane down. Another example, The
Lion King, light. We all loved the Lion King. What an amazing story. The main problem happens when this is all after the
initial sequences when Simba is tricked into essentially getting
his father killed, his dad tries to save
him and he's tricked by his uncle to be where
he didn't need to be. An almost get pummeled to death, but his dad comes and saves him. And then his dad gets pummeled
to death and symbol fields all this guilt and he goes
into a self-imposed exile. And then years later when he's
a grown lion, Nala comes. He saves his friends from this lion S and then
realizes that he knows her. Nose, her from Pride Rock
where he used to live. And she tells him the problem. The problem is that, oh my gosh, your uncle took over this Pride Rock and he's ruling and he's a
horrible ruler. And there's nothing of
the old beauty that, that fossa had created. You need to come and take back this kingdom AND rule
like you're supposed to. That's the only person
who can do that as obviously symbol because he
is the rightful heir and he's the lion who can go and
challenge his uncle's rule. But is he going to do it? Is he not gonna do it? So those are the
conflicting forces, but there's a problem. Pride Rock has essentially been destroyed under this new
rulership leadership. And he is the only
person who can do it. And he's, there are forces that are trying to keep
him from doing that. In this module,
what we are going to do together is you're
going to download the, the worksheet for
the first module, which is, there is a goal, it's called, there's a goal. You're going to download
that and we're going to find out what the goal
of your story is. What is your story? So in this, you're going to
kind of in broad strokes, know who your main character is. We're going to talk
about the problem that your main character is
tasked with solving. What does your protagonist need in order to
solve this problem? What obstacles stand in the way of your protagonist
doing what he needs to do? Or she, What's at stake? What will happen? What will the protagonist lose if he's not able
to solve this problem? So in the case of Ted
Stryker with airplane, obviously everyone
on board dies. With Simba, what's at stake? He's not gonna be able
to get his kingdom back and his uncle continues to rule and he
is essentially defeated. Once again, what's at stake? So you don't need to
go too much in detail. I really recommend
setting a timer for ten or 15 minutes at the most, 15 at the most. You don't want to give yourself
indefinite amount of time because then you'll sit there
and you'll try to think. The idea here is you
want to pour this stuff out onto the page instead of
15 minute timer, that's it. And then just write
as fast as you can and flesh this out
as quickly as you can. That's going to be the key. Later on, after this class, you can dive back in and you can just kind of massage
all of those details. But for now, 15 minute
timer and right, I will see you in
the next module.
3. The Protagonist Has A Backstory: Welcome back. Welcome back. First of all, if you did not do the worksheet for the first
module, there is a goal. I need you to stop this
video right now and go back. Go back and do that worksheets, set yourself a 15 minute
timer and write that out. Write it out because we need that in order to continue on. So every module in this
class builds on itself. You can't come here if you haven't done the
work for the last one. And you can't go to module three if you haven't done the
homework for this one. But I've made it
really easy for you. I've made the worksheets
so simple so that you don't really need a lot
of time to do them. It's only 15 minutes if
you have ten minutes, set a timer for ten minutes, but really you don't need
more than 15 minutes. That's the maximum
amount of time. And the videos are really short. I want these to be so that
if you're doing one a day, literally in 30 minutes, you have watched the video, you have done the
worksheet and you're done, you're done, you have succeeded. And within a week, you have your story fleshed out. And you can just start
writing the details of it. Within a week. You're going to
have a blueprint, I promise you that, but do the homework,
do the worksheets. They're very important. They're very, very powerful. That disclaimer out of the way. Now we know what your
main character has to do. We haven't spent too much time
on who your main character is and what makes your main character the perfect person to
solve this problem. That's what we're going to do in this module because
there's a reason your main character is the absolute perfect person
to solve this problem, to reach the school. And that reason is embedded and your
character's backstory. Now there's these
workshops that get you to write out every little detail of a character's backstory, like what happened when he was two years old and when
he was three years old. And in the end when she
did this and see that, I'm not a believer that
you need any of that. I believe as a writer, that you need to know kind
of the big points that pertain to the problem on hand, to the story that we're
telling right now, there are some major broad
stroke things that happened in your character's past that are relevant to the story that
you're telling right now. And those are the details that you really
should know about. Whether they come out
in your story or not. That's irrelevant. But you should ask the writer, you should know about
those details that, that are informing your
character's actions in this moment of the story. Now let me give you a couple of examples that we've
already given, the examples of airplane
and the Lion King to kinda see what makes those
characters the perfect person. And the example of airplane. Why is that Stryker,
the perfect character, the perfect protagonist to
go through the storyline? Well, because he was
an Air Force pilot, he was a pilot. He absolutely knows how
to fly these planes. But also what makes imperfect is that he's very reluctant to fly. He has some kind
of PTSD from it. In fact, he has so
much PTSD that he has spent all of his time after he came out of being
in the Air Force, trying to avoid
flying and trying to avoid any kind of
responsibility altogether. So he is he's kind of traumatized
by whatever happened. What happened we learned in
the movie is that he made a decision that got his
entire platoon killed. And he has this
incredible guilt that he, that he has never
been able to face. He has guilt, he has PTSD, he got his entire
platoon killed. He feels responsible for that. So as a result, he has not been on
a plane since then. He is avoiding
responsibility at all costs. He's not able to keep a job. And all of that has led to him losing the one-percent that he really loves and
cares about Elaine. His girlfriend of many years, who has basically stuck by him through all of these ups
and downs and mostly downs. And now she has had enough. He's on this plane because
he's trying to win her back. I mean, that's backstory
is really quite wonderful. He's sets it sets him up
to be the perfect person. Because honestly, if he was
the kind of person who flies commercial airliners every
other day and he doesn't have any trauma and he can't just get in there and
fly the thing down. There would be no story, there would be no story. The pilots would be out. And then this new pilot would go in and he would fly
the plane down. And that would be at what makes airplane really interesting
and what builds. While there's other
things that make you think mainly the
millions of jokes in it. But the story of airplane
is so solid because he is a person who has to overcome internal obstacles
in order to succeed. Now let's look at the Lion King. Lion King. Simba,
at the young age is tricked into believing that he's responsible for his
father's death. He too has this
incredible amount of guilt that he is living with. And he's basically
told by his uncle, this person close to
him, whom he trusts. He's told by this
person it would be best if you went away. It would be best
if you went away. This poor little pup is guilt read it and he
goes away because, because he can't face his, his own crime of getting
his father killed. He has so much guilt about it. So he goes away. He goes on the self,
a self-imposed exile. And why is he the
perfect character? Because now he has to
work through that guilt. He has to now also
worked through the guilt of abandoning his family and so forth in order to come back. It's not so easy for someone
who has gone into exile for all these years to come back and try to do
something different. So also he's the
perfect character because he is the
son of mu fossa. He is the rightful heir. He is the only person
who can come and really challenge that rain. And people would be really excited to follow
him and support him. This worksheet, you're
going to download it, it's called the protagonist
has a backstory. We're going to find out
who your protagonist is. More detail. So you're gonna find out what's
your protagonist gender. How old is your protagonist? What is the backstory? And again, you guys, I don't need you to figure
out all of the details, all the different little story beats and that
protagonist's life, just the broad brushstroke, the main points that pertain
to this particular story. Think of it when you're
watching a TV series. And they want to do a recap of what happened
in previous episodes. They only show you the relevant scenes
that pertain to the, to what the story that you're about to see in this episode. They just want to tell you, oh, an episode to this person
said this in episode five, we found out that this person was
backstabbing the other one. And now in episode ten, something about these
two characters, these two events is
going to come to a head. That's, those are the types
of details that we want. Simba was tricked into believing that he was responsible
for his dad's death. Touch striker made a decision that got his entire
platoon killed. So we just need to know why. It is difficult for this character to do the
thing he needs to do. What's your
protagonist backstory? Where were they born? You can get into
that if you want to. I put some stories, some questions here to kind
of trigger your thoughts. But how did they get
to where they are now? And again, you want to be very
specific to the storyline. Just few details
that are irrelevant. We want to also get a sense of your
protagonist temperament. What kind of a person
is this character? What is his or her
personality like? What are they like? What would how would a
close friend describe them? And how would someone who
just met them, describe them? And how does their
enemy describe them? Somebody who really
doesn't like them, it doesn't have to be an enemy. But how does somebody who dislikes this first
described this person? We are trying to
now also get into, is this person like, what would it be like
to kinda hang out with this person if
you're a friend, if you're an acquaintance
or if you're somebody who really don't like that, pull some of those character
traits out and up again. 15 minute time
limit for yourself. Quickly without
thinking just right. You don't need to get
it right right now. You just need to get it
onto the page right now. When you do that, I promise
you things will flow out that you maybe
didn't think of. You unlock the part of your
brain that is thinking more creatively rather
than more critically. Because when you
have too much time, you go into the
critical thinking mode. We don't want that, we want the creative
thinking mode all the way. This is your first draft. This is the first time you're
flushing the story out. So give yourself that
space, 15 minute timer. Download that worksheet
and write right now. And I will see you
in the next module.
4. The Protagonist Has A Flaw: Welcome back to character-driven
story development. We are starting to
cook now we are starting to get to the
really good sweet spot. So again, if you have not
done the last two worksheets, pause this video right
now and go do them. Don't skip the homework. This is why you're here. You're here because
you want to write and I've made it easy
for you to write. So all you need is
30 minutes a day. That includes watching the video and also doing the worksheet, the worksheet, 1015
minutes at tops. And then you have your story
fleshed out in just a week. So don't skip it, you guys, this is this is for
you. This is for you. Don't try to look ahead. What's next, you're
going to get to it. It's going to be quick,
it's going to be easy. I promise you that
the worksheets are going to lead
you through it. Then when you're done doing this class for just one week
and figured out your story. You have these
worksheets forever. You can always come back to them and you can
always use them to flesh out your story
without watching the videos 15 minutes
a day. That's it. So don't skip it. If you skipped it, go
back to it now and then let's just continue on. We now know what the
goal of the story is, what needs to be
accomplished for the story. We know who your characteristic, we know who you are, we know who your main
character or protagonist is, and we know why your protagonist is the perfect person
to solve this problem, to get us to the final goal, the final destination
of the story. We know why. We also know that the character
has some things within him that are keeping him from
accomplishing this goal. That something is your
character's flaw. It's a flaw, it's a wound. Your main character
needs to have it. Your main character cannot be perfect because
nobody wants to watch a story that is about
somebody who's flawless. None of us as
humans is flawless. We are flawed beings. We, we are creatures
that make mistakes. And so we want to it
see that when we're, when we're listening to stories, when we're watching stories,
when we're reading books, we want to see a
character who struggles the same way that we struggle and we want
to route for them. You want them to persevere, we want them to reach that goal. Despite this flaw, the
flaw has to be there. Your character
might be arrogant. The flaw can be
something like that. It can be defensiveness. It can be the unwillingness
to listen to guidance. It can be listening to all the guidance and doing what everybody
wants you to do. It can be anger, something emotional, fear,
debilitating fear, depression. It can also be diagnosed
or undiagnosed mental condition
that your character, that your main characters
struggles with. Your protagonist might have OCD, he or she might have multiple
personality disorder. There have been some really
great storylines about those. Might be that they have
severe social anxiety or PTSD or bipolar disorder
or anything like that. Or it can be just like
a personality thing. In the last worksheet, the question that said, what has happened in
this person's life that makes it difficult for them to solve the problem or
reached the goal. The flaw could be, doesn't have to be, but somehow could be rooted in that event. Maybe something happened that made your character
kind of like tense up, made your character react in a certain way and shut
down in a certain way. Maybe that's what happened. Or maybe the flaw is rooted within the
personality of your character. Whatever it is, we want
to flush that out because the flaw is such a rich well, for your story beats. Once you know what your
characters struggles with, what your hero struggles with, then we can have so much
fun with your hero. We can make life so
difficult for him or her and therefore make your stories so much
more interesting. Okay, so we've got to flush
that out in this module. Have so much fun with us. You guys. So in our examples, an airplane, the pet striker, his flaw is that he has
PTSD from this experience of going to war and getting his entire platoon killed
because of a decision he made. He has PTSD and he is he's not
able to work through that. He's not able to
push through that. He has never been able
to kinda like look at and forgive himself for that. Then this event
keeps haunting him. In the Lion King. On the other hand, it might seem kind of similar because he also
has a lot of guilt. Simba has a lot of guilt for potentially getting
his dad killed, right, and then
going into exile. But I kind of see his flaw
more as he is too weak. Simba is more willing to listen to other people then to himself. He doesn't have
what mu fossa had, which is this conviction in his own voice and in his
own ability to lead. Symbol does not have that. He's not a leader. He is weak and he's willing
to take the easy way out, which is I'm just
going to go and disappear for awhile or forever. And I'm just gonna like, Lottie daddy dog
go through life. Like I have no worries and
my entire life, right. So he's not willing to
face reality if it's uncomfortable and he's
not willing to look inward to find his own strength. He's willing to listen
to other people. So those are kind of
like the main flaws, the things that
they will have to overcome in order to
solve this problem. But those flaws
get in the way of them doing like Simba
being a weak character, who needs to step
up and be a leader. That's really interesting. So how can this character then overcome that
weakness within himself and become the leader? We're going to get
into those things. I'm getting a little bit ahead, but this is where we're
leading to, right? But we're gonna get into those
things in later modules. But first we have to kind of understand what the
character's flaw is. What you're gonna do
in this exercise. You're going to
define that flow. What is my protagonists flaw? How does this flash show up in the protagonist
relationships? How does it show up
in the storyline? Why is this flaw
something that is keeping your character from reaching the goal of the story, of solving the
problem of the story. I have a couple of
questions here in the exercise that are going to prompt you into
creating more story. Because here's what happens. Your character feels something. Then based on that emotion, your character
reacts, takes action. That emotion fuels the action. Then that action makes other characters feel a certain
way about your character. It also makes your character feel a certain way
about himself, but it also feels
action by other people, by other characters,
ancillary characters. This relationship between the
emotion and the action is something that is always
present in your storyline. In the worksheet, you're going to have opportunity to say, Okay, so how does keeping
this flaw in mind? Something happens in
the character's life. So the example of Simba, keep in mind his
flaw of weakness, his inability to kind of look at himself for his guidance and needing the guidance
from outside of him. The event happens,
which as he's tricked into essentially
getting his dad killed, this event takes place. So keeping in mind his flaw, how does similar respond
emotionally to this event? Emotionally, he responds with o chagrin with guild with shame. Because of that, how does, how do other characters
respond to him while scar, it takes advantage of that. He says, Oh, yeah,
you should feel guilty and in fact you
should go into exile. How does he respond to that? He feels even worse. Emma fields even worse. And then he makes
the worst decision, which has he goes into exile. He abandons his family
at a time when they, when they really need
someone, he abandons them. That essentially
creates the problem that then needs to be solved. So something happens
in your storyline. Keeping the flaw of
your character in mind. How does your character
respond or react emotionally? What are the emotions that are triggered within
your character? Keeping in mind that this flaw is active within your character. Then how does that
make other people react to or respond to
your main character? We're now starting to
use these character, kind of these characteristics, the personality traits
that your characters have, and create actual
story around it. Set your timer for ten minutes, 15 minutes max, somewhere between ten to 15
minutes, whatever you have. And do the worksheet, you're going to download this
worksheet as modules three. Your protagonist has a flaw. That's the worksheet that you
are working on right now. Go do it now. And I will see you
in module four.
5. The Flaw Creates Conflict: Welcome back. Okay, Hey, are you
starting to see your story kind of taking shape? You know what your
stories conflict is. What I mean, I should say
what those stories goal is. What the problem is that your
stories trying to solve, you know who your
main character is, your protagonist, the
hero of your story. You know why? Your protagonist is
the person who's going through the
storyline, you know that, and you also know what flaw is constantly in the
way of your hero, your protagonist,
reaching this goal. So all really great story
beats can be developed out of all of these knowing
all of this stuff. And in fact, in the
last worksheet, we even started to kind of flush out some
of these story beats. We gave your character and event that happens early
on in the storyline. And then keeping your
character's flaw in mind. We had him react
emotionally or her react emotionally and
then take action. And then how does that actually make the other characters feel? And maybe even what do
they do in response, in reaction to that
action, emotion. So that emotion, action, emotion action is going
to keep coming back. We're not gonna be
able to really take full advantage of
that if we don't know who our characters are and what their emotional makeup is
and what triggers them. Those triggers that make us in real life kind of
unpredictable and go crazy. You know, those
are the things we really love in our
characters because it makes our stories more interesting when we
understand what is the thing, what is the thing that's
triggering this character? What is the thing that's making this character react rather than respond in an emotional
way and then those actions, so lots of good stuff already. Now we're going to go even deeper because here's the thing. Your character's flaw creates. Conflict. If you know that your
characters and secure, then you want to put
them in situations that makes them feel insecure. Situations where
he has to kind of like show up with confidence. Otherwise, why are
we watching this? Why are we listening
to the story? We want your character to
overcome those things. With that, we also need to see how your character is not capable of doing certain things. So that when the character
finally does overcome and when that flaw finally is turned into something
productive for him, that then we're
like, Oh my gosh, she asked victory and maybe I2 as the viewer, as
an audience member, maybe i2 can overcome my flaws, my wounds, and he'll take
those courageous actions. We look at stories. I believe, because of
our human condition, are individual human condition. We look at stories
because we want to know that we can
succeed in our lives. The characters, the main
character of a story teaches us, shows us that it is possible so we can kind of feel
inspired with that. Flock creates conflict. You already know what
your character's flaw is. What makes your character
really uncomfortable. You know what triggers your
character, you know what, what sort of actions your character might take
when they feel this way. Now, it's time to push, to push your character, your main character
or protagonist. It's time to push your protagonist to
their breaking point. Because let's face it, we don't actually
want to improve in life unless we have
hit rock bottom. So we want that protagonist
to hit rock bottom. We want there to be
no other way out. We want them to have their back have them
backed up into a corner. Like I have them backed up
to the ledge of other cliff. And the only way
out is for them to jump off that fricking clefts. So we want to get them to that
point because most people, most of us will not
take those actions, will not actually
even face the flaw. We're not going to
heal the wound. We're not going to dig deep into ourselves enough to
be able to pull out the strength through
all of that fog of whatever the flop and our
character two is human, so he's not gonna do it. He or she is not gonna do it. They're not going to just A step-up and heal and
overcome their not. So we have to give them
reason to do that. We have two corner them. This worksheet is
going to be fun. It's gonna be really fun
because you're going to brainstorm all of the ways things can go wrong
for your character. So all of the ways keeping
your character's flaw in mind, what is the worst possible thing that can happen to
your character? So in the case of
airplane, again, wherever we are using
airplane and Lion King as examples here to vary
their friend movies, but interestingly, similar character is
going through them. So in the case of airplane, what's the worst possible
thing that can happen? The plane is going to nose dive. It's going to nose dives. Its, everyone on
board is gonna die. The pilots are sick, they're out, the
autopilot doesn't work. It's not going to
land the plane. There's nobody literally not a single other person on this planet who can
land this plane safely. And even striker may not be
able to land this plane, but he is the final, final hope. My goodness. What's he going to do? What is he going to do? Is he gonna be able to get out of his own way to
land this plane? Or is he going to
just be consumed by his crippling anxiety to the point of not being able to do anything
and everybody dies. Worst thing that can happen. What's the worst thing that
can happen in the Lion King? It's scar takes over
and destroys this, is that his new fossa
symbols dad had built. And he's abusing his mother, is abusing his mother of God. He's just abusing all the, all the subjects or the
people or the animals. But like all of these people that symbol loved and
loved growing up, but he's abusing everyone
and he's just horrible. And he is the only hope, he's the only hope for a
character who is kind of weak, who doesn't know how to lead
and doesn't want to lead. He's even a follower when
he is with his buddies. He's not even a
leader with them. Bugs with them instead of
being, being a leader. So this character
is not a leader, he is not strong, he's nothing. I have the ability
to activate that, that power even loses two Nala little
wrestling match, right? So he's weak. But this character is the one
who has to kinda like find his own source of power
within himself and overcome his own
weakness in order to, in order to win, in
order to win back his, his father's kingdom. The worst thing that can
happen to him is that he is an exile that the people
he loves are being abused. That he's kinda like being
pushed to this place of, well, now you're weak, but now you
are edging toward cowardice. How are you going
to look at yourself if you don't step up? What's going to happen
if you don't break through those insecurities
within yourself. That that question
is always looming. That question is always living. It's looming for strikers
living for symbols. So now it's your turn. You're going to download
the worksheet called the flaw, creates conflict. And set your timer
for 15 minutes, ten to 15 minutes,
that's all you need. Don't put down your pad. Don't say aside, don't think. Just right, just
answered the questions. Remembering your
protagonist's flaw, what is the worst
thing that can happen? What's the worst thing
that can happen? That's going to essentially push effort agonist to the edge. Corner damp, push them to that edge so they
have to jump off. How does this make, how does this event
that happened? How does it make your
protagonists feel? What does your
protagonist want to do? Not? What do they do? What did they want to do? What does he want to do? And you want to know what's the consequence of doing what your protagonist
actually wants to do. So keep the flaw in mind. Then we're gonna
get into what does your protagonist has to do? What does he have to
do in order to solve? At this point, your
protagonist does not have the tools yet in order to
do what needs to be done, what is being asked
of him to do. But what he wants to do, Simba doesn't want to go
back. He just wants to hide. Striker doesn't want
to fly that plane. He actually goes to the back of the plane and he
sits down and says, following in his own misery, He's like, I don't want to do this, I don't
want to do this. What they want to do is very different than what
needs to happen, what they need to do. We want to really,
in this exercise, you want to show the
GOP between what's natural for your character,
for your protagonist. What is the thing that they actually just want to
do in this moment? And what they need to do if they were going to
solve this problem. Now what they need to do, they're not ready to do yet. But this is what is
being asked of them. What is being asked of them to do that they are uncomfortable
with at this point. Set your timer, download
the worksheets, set your timer and go do it. I will see you in the next
module. There you go.
6. The Ally Provides Support: Welcome back. We are officially halfway through this lesson, this class. Halfway through you guys. I'm so proud of you
for doing this work. I bet you're excited about
your story at this point. If you've been doing
the worksheets, you must be really
enthralled and really excited about your story
because I bet you, you are seeing it take shape. You're getting to see
your protagonist. You're getting to see what
his or her flaws are, what the conflict is, what the goal is. You're starting to really
flesh all of this out. And how much fun is
that this is such a, such a good time
we're getting into the really fun, cool stuff. The next thing we want to
do is we actually want to give your protagonist a
little bit of support. Because if we just keep
getting the world, hitting us, telling us, hitting us, we don't
have anywhere to go. We keep getting
cornered by the world. And we don't have
the means to look inward and see where to even
look to resolve this flaw, to turn our fly into
skill which is coming, I promise you that is coming in the future and the
future modules. But if we don't get kinda
like support and guidance, there's a chance
your protagonist is just gonna get buried underneath all of this conflict and not actually do that work. Not transcend, not
pushed through, not learn the lesson, not heal the wound, not turn that flaw
into special skill. We want to give your protagonist
a little bit of support. We need to find who your
protagonist allies are. Allies, who are these people? These are the
people who show up. I kind of key moments. Or maybe they've been present
through the entire thing. But some of them show up at
key moments and they provide some insight that helps your protagonist's see the
situation in a different way. Some of these allies are
forces that have been present and providing support
in some way along the way. But there's going to
be one character, one person who is going to tip the thinking of
your protagonist in such a way that
he starts to see the entire situation
through new, new eyes. I'll give you a couple
of examples here. The airplane story
that Stryker PTSD, all this stuff, his flaws
we know the needs to do. We also know that he
doesn't want to do it and he feels inadequate. His allies, who are his allies? Elaine as an ally
because she loves him, even though she's
disappointed in him, even though she's leaving him. She is a supporter of his
because she loves him. The character played
by Robert Stack, who is the captain, they wake up, they bring in
to help him land the plane. He's an ally even though
he doesn't like him. But he realizes that, that strikers the only person who might be able
to land this plane. So I'm going to provide
support for him. But the character who really
flips that switch inside that strikers head is The
Doctor Who speaks to him. The Leslie Nielsen character. When Ted Stryker says, I can't do this and goes
and sits in the back of the plane wallowing
in his own misery. The doctor remark, he comes to him and he says, Hey, listen, I, I, I met with Captain zip, who was the captain
in strikers platoon. We know by now who basically died because of
strikers decision. His entire platoon including
the captain diets. So he says I talked to
zip before he died. And he said basically that Ted striker had made the
absolute right call. So that's a piece of the puzzle that Ted striker did
not have before. And that's a thing that makes him kind of like
see this situation, see his situation differently. So he's been guilt
ridden this entire time, all these years because he thought that he made
the wrong call. He thought he made a mistake. He thought he should
have if he had just acted differently,
all these people. That he cared about
would be still alive. But here is this doctor who saw Captain zip before
his death and says, yeah, Zip said you
made the right call. Big pivotal moment for him. The Lion King. What happens is symbol. Doesn't know if he can. He's like, he doesn't know
if he can kinda go back, doesn't have what it takes. And refi key takes him to
the reflecting pool where Simba is able to see
his father, a spirit. And his father's spirit tells
him to remember who he is. He shows him that move fossa
spirit lives within him. He shows him his own
reflection, first of all, that you are a lion, even though you feel
weak and even though you feel like you're not a
leader, look at yourself. Look at what you are. You are this majestic creature. Then he's able to kind of see and hear his father's
voice telling him, remember who you are,
remember who you are. That's like in that
moment is when Simba starts to see his situation a little
bit differently, he starts to see
himself a little bit differently and maybe, maybe discover that
he's not as weak as he thinks himself to
be or as he shows up. Who are your characters, LI's, how are they supporting your main character
or protagonist? We gotta give him or her a
little bit of support here. It's hard enough to go through this journey with that
flaw, with those emotions. We got to give your character a little bit of support
here. Who are these people? By the way, other allies for
Simba are obviously Nala, it's tomato and Puma, right? So these are other
characters who are there to support him on this journey. But it is really
peaky who creates that moment for him to
change his perspective. You're going to download
this worksheet. It's called the Ally
provides support. I said the ally as in singular, but there can be
more than one if you just have one character providing support, that's okay. But if you have
multiple characters, That's wonderful to see if you can differentiate
between the characters. How are they providing support? What is the support
that they provide? And also see if you can
find that one character. It might just be a wise guy. A garden gnome who just
says one sentence, Sierra character, what, what is, what is that 11 character
who provides kind of an aha moment for your
protagonist that changes, shifts. So what is that
moment of shift that happens inside your
protagonist's mind? And it doesn't have to be
necessarily a positive thing. Maybe a character who thought grew up in some kind
of captivity being raised by this character
learns that she was stolen from her real parents by this character
who raised her. And what does that
knowledge kinda like due to her, like her motivation. What does the knowledge gained in that pivotal
moment due to the, to your main character's
motivations and the way they think of
themselves and think of the situation and
how they show up. Now one quick note about your allies, your
characters allies. If you can find
one character who is the most unlikely person, who would help your character
out, your hero out. That relationship in and of itself could be
really interesting. And think of a show
like Breaking Bad. Walter White is a broke
chemistry teacher and he wants to cook math in order to make it a
little bit of extra money. And who is the most unlikely
ally he might find is Jesse is a student delinquent. They don't even have a good
relationship with each other. But that dynamic can be also
really, really interesting. So we don't have that super worst possible
match kind of a thing, an airplane or in the Lion King. But that dynamic
is so interesting. If you can find an ally who
is a very unlikely match, who's the least likely
person who might help your hero out
and the situation. Then it can kind of like
catapult, you know, that different perspective
for your character as well, because your protagonist looks at the word world in
a very specific way. And this ally who is
very different from your protagonist is
going to look at the world in a completely
different way. So that can also be a way to
kind of start shifting your, your protagonists
perspective about himself and about the world. But by challenging the way he's been doing things
in the world though. And also we then get all of
these other questions of our day going to actually get along and are
they going to kill each other? Are they going to have
this big blowouts? You know, how are
they going to manage the relationship
with each other as they try to work
towards this goal of solving the problem
of the entire story. Your protagonist and
the ally don't have to be very friendly with
each other either. Robert Stack character
and airplane is not very friendly toward striker. He actually doesn't think
he can do it, right. But, but he is willing to
help him because the goal, they unite on the level of trying to solve the problem
of the story together. As you're, as you're
looking at the Allies, definitely ask yourself
that question. Who is the least likely
person who might help? Why would that person
helped them, right? So it's, it's another way to add another
layer of interest, intrigue, drama, attention
to your storyline. Really fun stuff, cool
thing here to do. Kind of a big topic. But still 15 minutes,
that's all you need. Download that worksheet. The Ally provides support, set your timer for 15 minutes, and then get writing. And I will see you
in the next module.
7. Conflict Fuels The Antagonist: Welcome back. By now, you know what the
problem of your story is. What needs to happen for
this problem to be solved. Your main character is what
your main character is like. What your main
character's flaw is. You know, some of
the major conflicts that stand in the way of your main character and
probably some really fun stuff if he did that
exercise and brainstorms. And you also gave your main
character one or more allies to help him or her get through this story and
move to the resolution. Like get him to do the
things that need to be done in order to solve the
problem of your story. Alright, so now let's talk
about antagonistic forces. Site from the
character's own flaw. There are other
forces outside of your character who are trying to outside of your
main character. I keep saying character. I mean your main character, outside of your main character, they keep trying to
stop that person, stop your protagonist from
getting to the conclusion, from solving the problem. Okay, So these are what I
call the antagonistic forces. Now the antagonistic forces
can be an antagonist. It can be an individual or a organization or a group
of individuals that, that for whom the solving of the problem with
actually be a problem. They don't want this
problem that our hero has to be solved because that would be a
problem for that, right? So they, they are trying
to get in the way of the problem of the
story from getting solved. This can be an individual, it would be an antagonist. Now, the antagonist
force can also be a force of nature, an airplane. The antagonist stick force is
that the plane is crashing. The antagonistic force is
the food poisoning that has, that has incapacitated
the pilots and a lot of the passengers. It's time. The antagonistic force is time as well because it's
very time-sensitive. These people need to be taken to the hospital or
else they're going to die if the crash
doesn't kill them. There's all of these
forces that are outside of the
character himself. But it's not a person. It's not a bad guy who poisoned
everybody on the plane. That's not the
case. And airplane. The antagonistic forests can be the flaw of the character. So it's that PTSD
that had striker has his panic panic attacks, has an ability to actually
sit and fly the plane down. That's also an
antagonistic force. And Lion King, the antagonist sick
forests as an individual, it's scar, It's the ankle. It's the person
who's schemed to get mu fossa and also his son out of the way so he can be the ruler, so he can rule this land. That, that is a
case when we have a very clear antagonist that
we are working against. Really important thing
to kind of internalize. One of my biggest pet peeves
is when I read a story. And the antagonist is just
absolutely two-dimensional. It's like why is this person
doing what they're doing? Just to get in the way of
the protagonists like that, I think makes for
a very shallow, two-dimensional,
uninteresting story. A character who's just pure evil is not an interesting character. Now, if you can find out why the antagonist is
doing what he's doing. Now, the antagonist
becomes relatable. We don't need to it agree with what the
antagonist is doing, but we need to
kind of understand why he's doing what he's doing. And if we can do that, if we can have at the very least sympathy
for the antagonist, then I think it makes the story
so much more interesting. The story of dune. There's nobody more unlikable
than the heart kinins. These are, these are just
really horrible people who just kill at will and one to take over
planets and destroy. They destroy our
favorite characters. They kill the good guys, but these are really evil guys. But I love the writing of Dune. I love how much we kinda get
into the mindset of them. These are people
who are bred and raised in this kind of
environment of fear. And ultimately, what they want is not very different
than what anybody else wants. But they value manipulation. They value power. They want to be on the throne. They want to a kind of
get wealth and so forth. But their moral compass
is so skewed over generations of being raised in a way that I think one
of the characters, by the time he's 17 years old, he has already killed hundreds slave
gladiators and battle. And the way the
battles work is that the slave gladiators
are literally drugs. So they become
kinda easy target. And it's all about this bravado of showing off and
doing this, this kill. I mean, what does
that do to a person? The time there's 17, their entire value structure
has been based on, can you kill these other
beings have no value. There is this
dehumanization that happens systematically
within their culture. So just understanding
these things about them makes them a lot
more interesting. You you don't condone it. You don't think they are
good guys by any weeds. But he kinda understand why somebody would become
that vicious and brutal. They literally have the
humanity bred out of them. And that's, that makes such a more interesting
villain than somebody who is just evil
for the sake of being evil. Understand their motivations. This exercise conflict
fuels antagonist. The antagonist. I've split the questions up between the antagonist
as a person, the antagonist as the flaw within the character as
an antagonistic force, and then the environment
as an antagonistic force. So you'll answer questions about each one of those things. And if you can combine two or more of
these three elements, it'll make your story
even more interesting. If the character, like
in Simba in Lion King, he's faced with the
antagonistic force. I'm sorry, the antagonist
like forests of his own internal flaw plus
the antagonist of scar. That makes a very
interesting combination. In airplane. There's the antagonist stick
force of the environment, things outside of his control, plus the antagonistic force of his own flaw makes it a
lot more interesting. Now if you can combine
two or more of these things, you'll, you'll, you'll have a lot more fuel or really raw material for creating interesting
conflict for your, for your main
character to overcome. Download the worksheet. It's called Conflict
fuels and tap antagonist. The antagonist section. We want to know who
your antagonist is. What's your antagonist goal? Here's the other thing. Your antagonists has a goal. Your antagonist is the
hero of his own story. We're telling a different story. If we were telling
the story in which your antagonist is the hero, we would be in their
story and then your current protagonist
would be their antagonist. So you got to understand
what the story is that your antagonist is it
for the heart commands. And Dune, this story that
they are in is they want control over a
racket so they can control, control the spice. The story again
that the emperor is and is that the treaties
are getting too much power. So the Emperor and Dune, I don't know if you've
read this book. It's fascinating. But the emperor and Dune
once to kind of it's in his benefit if they're
treaties kind of fall because they're gaining
too much popularity with the other great houses. So the two goals of the two different
antagonists come together. By the emperor giving dune to the heart can
add to the treaties as the symbol and then
giving the heart convince his support to
go kill the treaties. This new planet. I mean, really
interesting, right? So each one of those antagonists has a different goal,
different reason. But there, if the story
of dune was about the, about their goals, their combined goal would be
the fall of the treaties. They would be allies
of each other. You could tell that story
with the emperor as the hero or with the
Hopkins as the hero. And then the treaties would
be their combined enemy. They would be the
antagonist for them. But the story is about Paula treaties who survives those attacks,
blah-blah-blah. And brings Iraq his back. Tries to bring basically
joined the frame and together to avenge his dad and
take Iraqis back. But then he becomes the hero. They become the antagonists. But by understanding
their motivations, the story becomes so
much more detailed, so much more interesting. And we just want to know more about what they're gonna do because they
become real people, they become real forces. What is your antagonist
school really understand, get into your antagonist. Said, if this movie was
about them as heroes, what would be their goal? Why is it important to them to stop the protagonist
of your story? What is at stake for them? The same way that
there is something at stake for your protagonist. If he or she fails, there's something
at stake for them. If they fail, if your
protagonist succeeds, what's your antagonist willing to do to stop your protagonist? Now again, depending
on who they are, who they're gonna be
doing different things. In dune, the heart canons
are willing to do anything. They're willing to suppress the planet that they are ruling, they're willing to kill, they're willing to cheat, they're willing to do
all sorts of stuff. The emperor is not willing to do those things
because he doesn't want to get his hands dirty. But he was willing to help the heart cannons kind of
overthrow the treaties, provide their killing forces to fight alongside
the heart and hands. But he was willing to do
it secretly and secret. As long as it didn't get out, he was willing to do that. So what, what is each, what are they willing to do? What is width in their
individual kind of moral, within their individual
morality and what they think is okay for them to do that
very important question. Now if the antagonist
stick force is the flaw, how does your protagonist's
flaw work against him or her? What does your protagonist
do to make matters worse? There's always something
video to make matters worse. If you can make things
really bad, then, then it becomes even
more interesting when the protagonist finally
solve, solves the problem. Then the environment. As an antagonistic force. How does nature or the environment work
against the protagonist? We talked about the
airplane scenario, the food poisoning
of that stuff. What happens? That seems outside of your
protagonist's control that makes matters worse. So go answer these questions. Set your timer for 15 minutes, that's all you need and keep writing until your
timer goes off. Then I will see you
in the next module. We only have a few laughed, so let's make these, Let's make these count. I'm looking forward to hearing your stories do by the way. All right, I'll see you
in the next module. Bye.
8. The Flaw Becomes A Special Skill: Welcome back. We only have two more
educational modules left, so let's make these work. So far we have done so much and I'm so excited
to hear your story, to share them with me, create a project,
share your story, sharing your aha moments here, the parts that you're
really proud of and share the parts where you
have questions about. Let everybody know, let me know and everyone else who is
participating in this class, let us know how these worksheets have helped you flesh
out your story. I'm so excited to read more
about what you're doing. Having said all of that, we are really fun territory now. We have your character
of your storyline. You know what problem needs
to be solved in your story. Your protagonist, why your protagonist
is the right person? What is also keeping your protagonist from
solving this problem? All of those internal, external forces that are keeping your protagonist
from solving the problem. Also, all of that fun, fine conflict that
is, in the way, all of the things that the
antagonistic forces are doing to get in the way of
this problem being solved. All that fun stuff creates really cool story beats for you. Now, let's talk about the flaw. Let's talk about the flop
a little more deeply. The flaw that your character has is the thing that your character has been struggling with. But what if the flaw is actually tied to your
characters superpower? What if the thing that your character feels
the most amount of shame around the thing
that makes your characters suffer the most is
also the very thing. That is your
character salvation. And isn't that how it works
in real life? Absolutely. We teach what we need to learn. We, the thing that makes
us suffer the most is the thing that holds the key to our own
personal power. That's how it works individually for us as
we go through life. And it's also how it works for your character as
your character, as your main character or protagonist goes through
his or her life. And more specifically, tries
to solve this problem. For the story that
you are telling. The flaw becomes
a special skill, it becomes a superpower of
sorts. What does that mean? That means, for example, in Breaking Bad, the flaw of Walter White
is his selfishness. Selfishness throughout the
show becomes a superpower. His ability to survive, his ability to just find
new ways to survive. Now I have to say, as we're watching shows, as we're watching movies, it's really powerful when your
character faces the flaw. And the skill, the special skill that comes out of that
flaw is something positive. And that helps your
character to heal that wound and transcend through that flaw and
become a better person. That's really a
wonderful story to tell. We want to route for
characters who grow in some way and become better people by the
end of the story. It doesn't have to be that way. By the way is your
character's arc. You start somewhere
with the flaw. And you would be, your character would
be taking certain, certain actions
because of this flaw. And then by the
end of the story, your character has
gone through all of this turmoil and the
conflicts and this, and that, and then with the
help of the Allies, has become a different person who sees himself or herself
in a different way, in a different light and understands their flaw and
a wound in a different way, and therefore can respond to the world around them
in a different way, in a new way, the flaw
transforms into a special skill. I was just saying about the
positive and the negative. So if your character
becomes worse, like someone like Walter White. In Breaking Bad, he same
thing happened to him. He started with a
flaw of selfishness. And then that flaw in every
episode was played out as the special skill of his
ability to save himself, his survival instincts,
his ability to kind of find new cunning
ways to get on top. So he's kind of like
failing up word even though he's becoming a worse and worse human being along the way, his morality becomes
more and more muddied. He lets Jesse's girlfriend die because she was
inconvenient to him. I mean, that's a huge, huge kind of character
TurningPoint. It's where his
selfishness becomes this superpower for survival and for his own gain to the
point of letting someone die, letting somebody who pretty, pretty, pretty crappy thing. It becomes worse and worse. But we continue to
watch Breaking Bad. We can't stop watching
Breaking Bad. Why? Because we understand
this character. Remember I said, if you're gonna have your hero be an anti-hero, if you're gonna have him
be somebody who does bad the things with
bad consequences. If you're gonna have that,
that's fine, you can do that. But we have to understand why your character is
doing that, right? So he, Walter White,
he genuinely, genuinely believes he's
doing the right thing and he is doing the
right thing for him. He's not doing the right
thing for anybody else, but he's doing the
right thing for him. And we have to understand this character and know
his motivations and know what is important to
him at so that we can have sympathy for him even though we hate
what he's doing. We have to feel like, Oh my gosh, I understand
why he's doing this. Even though we hate it, even though we're like, I
can't believe he did that. I can't believe you let that poor girl die because
she was inconvenient. That's a horrible thing. But we understand
why he does it. Very important. A lot more satisfying, a lot more satisfying
for the viewer. When your character actually
becomes your main character, your protagonist's actually
becomes a better person. Along the way. Let's take the example
of the Lion King. Simba is a weak character.
He's a weak link. He's listening to other people. You can't make up
his own decisions. He's a follower. And how does that weakness
turn into his special skill? Because once he realizes that he is a lion and he
has to do this thing, he has to go back and, and confront his
uncle and go back and face the family and the
people that he has abandoned. His weakness turns into his ability to have
compassion, to have empathy. Even when he pounds his
on scar and he's angry, he can't get himself to
actually kill his uncle, he believes and the
goodness that is somewhere underneath as
uncle, uncles facade, he believes in the goodness
of people and we realize that he symbol has this
ability to freak, not like forgive and forget, but to see the goodness and people to have
empathy for other beings. And what an incredible
kind of characteristic is that for a leader who's also strong and is
willing to stand up his, he stands up to his uncle. He wants his rooting for
scar, to reform himself, to come out of his evil ways, and to kind of show himself
as somebody worthy of saving. What does scar do? He just basically goats him
or angers him even more. So the point that symbol throws him into the hyenas and
the hyenas finish him off. Because, why? Because scar is going
to do what scar does. He's going to throw the
hyenas, his allies, under the bus, trying
to save his own neck. Characters acting within
character for themselves, and Simba acting within
character for himself. His weakness turns
into the ability to lead with compassion
and lead with the kind of the desire to help people overcome their
own, their own militia. Now, it's your turn. You can download the
worksheet that is called the flaw becomes
a special skill. You are going to find the strength in the flaw
that your character has. The exercise, you're going
to answer some questions. How can your protagonist's flaw turn into a special skill? Some examples of that are things like character who's really
impulsive or really fiery. That impulsiveness can turn into the ability to think quickly
and sticky situations. A character who's
really paranoid might have really good
attention to detail. And then that attention to
detail might help them solve, solvers situation or get out of tight corners
really well. And we've talked
about selfishness can translate into that
survival instinct. We saw that in Breaking Bad. So how does your
character's flaw turn into a special skill? Give an example of a time
when your protagonist uses this special skill
to solve a problem. Now we're getting into a
little more writing with it. How does your protagonist
feel after this event? Now, the other thing
we want to do in this exercise is identify
your character's arcs. I have that for the three
characters that we're covering in this class, for your protagonist, where
does your protagonist start? Who is your protagonist's
at the beginning? As the story is progressing? You know, what? There's your protagonist. Learn along the way that is changing your protagonist
from the inside, making him become a
different person. And at the end, who is your
protagonist at the end, what kind of a person is your protagonist
at the very end? And you're gonna do
that same exercise for your antagonist
and for your ally. Now here's the thing. You don't need all of your
characters to change. Your hero, your
protagonist has to change across the journey. Otherwise, it's
not a good story. Otherwise, if you're a
hero does not change, It's not an interesting story. These rules sometimes are
broken and sometimes it works, but I'm telling you, don't break this rule. Don't break this rule. Have your character
learn something and change for the
positive or the negative. In Breaking Bad, Walter
White changes a lot, but for the negative,
and that's okay. Have them change
for the negative. Positive gives us a
more satisfaction. But do what you need to do. But have that character change, have them become a different
person by the end the story. If you can do that for your
protagonist, fantastic. If you can do that
for your protagonist, for your antagonist,
for your ally, you will have a story that is
really, really compelling. That's in airplane, an airplane. The ally, Elaine, she
actually changes, you know, she, she
learns to realize this. You remembers how
much she actually loves striker by the
end of the story. But in the Lion King, scar does not change, stays the same person. Now, if that works, that's fine. But if you can have
each character become different by the end of it for better or for worse. It makes this so as a
result of the story, it makes this story so
much more compelling. Download that worksheet, set
your timer for 15 minutes, do the writing exercise, and I will see you
in the next module.
9. The Special Skill Creates Transformed Action: Welcome back. Okay, We have one more lesson, one more worksheet, and then we're going to
have a wrap-up video, which is going to
be quite short. But this is your last
lesson, you guys, I hope that your story
is fleshing out, that all of these
character-driven beats that we are adding, these kind of character details that you are coming up with. I hope they are inspiring you to actually start
writing the story. By the end of this, we're going to have
that blueprint. We have one more module of
instruction, and that's this. Now your character has
been on his journey. The problem, we know he's
trying to solve this problem. And yet there's a
lot of conflict. There's a lot of
antagonistic forces trying to keep your
character down, including your
character's flaw and your character along the
way of kind of facing these antagonistic forces with the help of the allies
is transforming. It's changing. So that's your character arc that we talked about
in the last module. Again, you guys, I don't
need to save this anymore, but if you have not
done the worksheets, stop this right now, go to the worksheets, come back. Come back when you have
finished the worksheets. Alright, so this first
time going through it, do the worksheets
so you understand what we're actually talking about as we're doing this
fork together right? Now. The flaw has transformed
into special skill. If you're writing
an episodic thing. So you're writing a TV series or series of short
stories about, about the same characters
that kind of like a Sherlock Holmes
type of a thing. Then you want this tension
between the flaw in the skill, the special skill kind of
played out in every episode. In every episode,
the flog gets in the way the special
skill comes surfaces. And so there's this dance
that your character does. And by the end of the series
or by the end of the season, there's a big leap that has been created as a result of that
constant back-and-forth, back-and-forth that the
character experiences. If you're writing a book, that back-and-forth is going to happen in the middle
section of your book. And then by the end of it, the special skill is
going to save the day. And how is it going
to save the day? There's gonna be a
climactic event. There's gonna be something that your character will have to do that is born out of the special skill which
was rooted than the flaw. And your character doesn't. And it's going to save the day. It's going to, it's going to deem the
transformation complete. And that action is the
transformed action. It's something that your
character would never have done if it was at the
beginning of the story, at the beginning of the story, your character, your
main character, your protagonist, would
never have done this thing. But because your protagonist has been pushed to his
limits, to his edge. And because he has, he or she has been learning, because that flaw has now been transformed into
this special skill that we can now recognize. Now, your protagonist is
able to take this action that this transformed action that they would never
have done in the past. Airplane, for example, striker goes back into the cockpit and flies
down that plane. He would never have done it at the beginning of that movie. Otherwise, we wouldn't
have had a movie. The Lion King, Simba actually
returns to Pride Rock. He confronts his uncle. He would never have done that if it was at the beginning
of the movie. Otherwise, he would
have done it already. He had to go through his own internal stuff
with the help of his allies in order to feel
ready to feel like he could, he could have done
taken that action. So that's the
transformed action. Download the worksheet
that's called the special skill
creates transformed. Action and you're going
to answer the questions. So toward the end of
this event is going to happen toward the
end of your story. Remember this is like the, kinda like the climax
of your story. It's toward the end of your
story, has your antagonist. What does your antagonists do to stop the protagonist
from solving this problem? So, what has your
antagonist done until now to stop your protagonist? And this is again, the antagonistic forces can
be all of these things. The antagonist himself,
the internal flaw, and also the external
environment. How does your protagonist
feel about this? By the way, that first question, you can, you can answer. We can actually kinda dive into a little
bit of a writing, fleshing out that
climactic scene. You don't have to stick to it when you're actually
writing this story. But it's kind of nice
to know where you're, what you're working toward, what you're moving toward. So towards the end of
your story, right, about an action where the
stakes are really high. So what has the antagonist
done to stop your protagonist? This is like when there's
this do or die moment, what has led up to
that do or die moment? How does your protagonist
feel about this? Remember, we talked
about the emotion and the action kind
of relationships. So we need to know how
does the protagonist feel about the situation
that he or she is in? Having learned the
lessons of the story. What is the least likely thing that your protagonist might do that he or she would not have done at the beginning
of the story. What action? Striker would never have
flown that plane down. That is the least likely
action he would've taken. Simba would never have
confronted his uncle. That's the least likely
action he would've taken. So what is the
least likely action that your protagonist
might take? Something that he or she would not have done at the
beginning of the story. How does the antagonist, now, after this action, how does the antagonist react to this new transformed action? Okay, so what does
the antagonists do? How does the
protagonist feel about this reaction from
the antagonist? What further transformed
action might he take? We are really fleshing out
this end sequence event. Then does this solve
his or her problem? If not, what more is needed? If so, what does successful? What does success
finally look like? We are, we are really
trying to flesh out this end sequence so that you know where you are
going within your story. Really a lot of fun. This is the last
thing you'll do. By the end of this, you'll
have a little blueprint. I'm gonna let you go do this
short little video here. Download the worksheet, set
your timer for 15 minutes, and I will see you
in the wrap-up.
10. Final Words: Hello and welcome back. You are done. You did it. Oh my goodness. I hope you did all
of the worksheets. I hope you enjoyed doing
all of the worksheets. You can always come back
to these worksheets, print a set of them out for yourself and keep
them with you anytime you have a new story
inside of you or a new little flicker of a story of a
character inside of you. And you want to see if
there's a story here. This is what you want to do. You want to go through
these eight worksheets in order and flesh out
the main storylines. The problem that
needs to be solved. Find out who your
main character is. Widest character is
the perfect character to go through this storyline. Why he is the hero of the story? Remember, it doesn't have to be heroic even though he is
the hero of this story. Then find out what
the flaw is used, that flaw that your
main character has to flesh out some
of the conflict. Find out who the
antagonistic forces are. What's getting in the way
of solving this problem. Find out who the Allies are, who are helping
your main character get to this, to this goal. They don't have to like
your main character. They just have to be on the
same boat as your character. They need to have the same
goal as your character. Actually, it's better
if the ally and your main character have
some conflict between them that makes it even more
interesting for the storytelling. And then finally, transforming
how does that kind of flawed at your main
character has how does that transform into a special skill, the superpower of
your main character? And how does that translate
into some action, some transformed action that your main character
takes to at the end, at the climax of your story, to save the day, to save himself or herself,
to save his story, to finally get to
that finish line and solve the problem of the
story in a positive way, in a negative way. However, however you
want to develop, that doesn't matter, but your
character has to change. That story arc, has to be there. Again to reiterate. If your main character changes, if these three main
characters change, your protagonist, your
antagonist, and your ally. If all three of them change
as a result of this story, the story becomes even more. It becomes even more satisfying. An example of a story where all three of these
main characters change is the Marvel Shanxi. We have our main
character who changes. He was very avoidant
at the beginning. He didn't want to
step into his power, but then by the end he
actually steps into it, is Ally, his best friend. She changes, like she stops
being a follower and she starts being in her own
way, becoming a warrior. Then the antagonist, the dad character changes
across the entire story. And when we learn to
have sympathy for him. And in fact, at the end of it, I'm not going to give it away in case you haven't seen it. But at the end of it, we're sad with what happens to him even though we want him
to fall the entire time. Really good example of how all three of these
characters change, that all of their arcs
kind of very distinct. And the story as a result
is very satisfying. We want to watch it and
we like all of them, and we kinda like for all of
them as a result of that. If you can make that happen, if you can write a
story that changes all three of these main
characters in your story. You're gonna have a really compelling piece on your hands. So I'm really excited for that. If you wanted to connect with
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you and that you will continue to use them for your
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