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1. Introduction: Hello and welcome to Character
Development for Beginners. My name is Nia Hogan and I'm a multi published fiction
author and educator. Character Development is one of my favorite things
about storytelling. I love creating characters
that I can connect to and who have rich pass an
unforgettable personalities. Characters drive our stories. So an underdeveloped
character will likely result in an
underdeveloped plot. I created this course to help new writers develop
characters for their own stories that
will withstand the test of time and resonate
with your audience. I created this course for
writers who struggle with creating strong
dynamic characters. And writers who are new to
the Art of storytelling, who want a crash course
on character development? This course is not for seasoned writers who
already know how to develop strong characters or
for writers of nonfiction. In this course, we will cover character Roles and Archetypes. Developing characters with a
purpose, character traits, how to take care of
your characters, character Creation and
character Analysis. At the end of this course, I will also be
providing you with my free character
development resource to help you examine
your own characters, whether they're new or existing
2. Character Roles and Archetypes: If you're ready to learn about the different roles characters play in stories and archetypes that they
might fall under. Let's get into our
first lecture, character Roles and Archetypes. The role is the part the
character plays in the story. There are different
angles to examine roles. So all start with the
two main umbrellas, and those are main
and minor characters. Main characters of
the characters that are seen and heard
from the most, whether that's through
dialogue or thoughts. These characters control
the direction of the plot. Minor characters appear in
a story of varying lengths. Some minor characters have
more spotlight than others. Some make a singular appearance that may or may not
be super memorable, but their existence is
needed in that scene. As far as main characters go, your protagonist is the most important
character of them all. They are the star of the story and the action
centers around them. This is who your reader
is most invested in. Some books that merge perspectives may have more
than one protagonist, but even then the person
with the most Page time is considered the protagonist while the other is second in command. I like to use cars
as a metaphor for plot, stories or
character-driven. They are the driver
of your vehicle. Protagonists don't always
equal a good character. Sometimes your protagonist is a terribly flawed character. While this type
of protagonist is harder to sell to your readers, it is still a possibility, antagonist or another
main character. And they do exactly
what it sounds like. They'll do. They antagonize. Making life harder for your protagonist is
their primary focus, but their actions throughout
the story are not always exclusive to
creating problems. We often view the
relationship between protagonist and antagonist
as good and evil, but it doesn't always
have to be that way. Antagonists do play
an important role by creating tension
in the story, but their actions are not
always rooted in evil. The dude or agonist is another main character
that you see often, but probably didn't have
the terminology for them. Sometimes these characters are considered the best friend, the confidante or the sidekick. This character is very close to the protagonist and also
gets a lot of scene time. Sometimes they're
there to give advice, be the voice of reason, or to just simply help out. Don't be fooled though. Sometimes these characters
are frenemies in disguise. Readers identify the
doodler agonist because they are the second most important character
in the story. You've probably never
heard of a trite agonist, mostly because this term comes
from ancient Greek dramas. But it's worthy of mentioning
that this character is the third in line when it comes
to order of importance. This character could
also be your antagonist. Moving onto minor characters, I like to refer to
these characters as supporting characters. These are any characters that are needed to
advance the scene. Some supporting
characters provide more support to the main
characters and others. But support just means
that without them, something cannot
happen in that scene. Support characters are much
like extras in a film. They may not speak, but their presence is
noted in some way. Sometimes these characters are called tertiary characters. They may also
appear a few times. Sometimes they are
super memorable, but other times they're just in the background helping to
glue the scene together. Like the barista
in a coffee shop who makes the protagonist order. Next, I'd like to discuss
character qualities, not to be confused
with character traits. Understanding these
qualities can help you to analyze
your characters better. First off, let's discuss
dynamic characters. These are characters who
undergo an internal change. All protagonist
should be dynamic. If your other main
or major characters are also dynamic
than that supplies. By the end of the story, a dynamic characters should not leave as the same
person they came into the story as just like our experience
has changed us, the same thing should happen
to your dynamic characters. The people they interact with, the choices they make, the things that
happen as a result, and the things that occur around them gives them new information. And therefore, a different
perspective on life. Being dynamic doesn't
require a dramatic change, but authentic characters
grow over time. Some characters are
static characters, meaning they stay the same. All characters can be static, but I strongly discourage you creating a static protagonist. Yes, sometimes your
protagonist will not change. But I consider, I
challenged you to consider, why aren't they changing
through their experiences? And what smaller ways can they
see the world differently? Static doesn't always have
to be a bad thing either. Sometimes characters
are just stubborn. They don't play a big role in the story for the reader
to notice the change. Or maybe it's fitting that the Character remains the same. Just make sure that
there is a valid reason for the main character
to remain static. Flat characters are
simple characters. They're given that
term because they don't have any
dimension to them. One, maybe two adjectives
may define them. They are intentionally over, underdeveloped and they
don't need to undergo change or exhibit
complex emotions because that change isn't
necessary for their character. They don't have much
depth or layer and the reader isn't looking
for that from them either. Now round characters are very similar to dynamic characters. It's easy to identify this
difference because they change more often than a
dynamic character does. For us to recognize
these changes, this character must be
well-developed and present enough for their storylines be relevant and worth following. Up. Protagonists can also
be around character. The key with creating
around character is to create one that is
realistic but complex. For example, we all know
someone in our lives who is always changing
their mind about something. Maybe this is an
impulsive need to change hobbies or move on to
the next relationship, which is a sign of a
deeper internal conflict. Maybe they're all always reflecting on life and
looking for meaning. There are signs. These are signs that
they're around character. It doesn't take much
for them to learn, grow, change, or adapt
to their environment. Next, we're talking about
character archetypes. These are reoccurring
types of characters that can be seen between
different literary texts. And because they are universal, they can also be seen
throughout different genres. Some archetypes are more
common than others, and there is a long list, but I will only be covering what I consider to be the most common and sharing a little bit about
their characteristics. First stop is the
symbolic character who represents something
bigger than themselves, hence, the root word symbol. There purpose is usually tied to a message for the protagonist
or for the reader. Sometimes it's
symbolic character is actually a group of people. Their presence
doesn't have to be heavily felt for
it to be symbolic. As long as it can be understood that that is
there archetype by the end. Often the nature of who they
are and how they navigate the story speaks volumes and
connection to this theme. Jonas in the giver is a perfect example of
a symbolic character, as he is a
representation of hope. The romantic interests character isn't exclusive to
the romantic genres, so we'll talk about them next. They are the romantic interests that can be admired from afar. They could be a key player
in the protagonist's life, whether they're obtainable or unobtainable to the protagonist. And they can also know that
they're being admired or be completely oblivious that they are the ABL of
another characters I, this characters presence creates a romantic energy or attention, whether they know that
they're doing it or not. The protagonist might
be working towards expressing their
feelings or they might keep their iteration secret for part of or the entire
length of the story. And interests does not
have to be mutual either. Next, we'll talk about
Competent, Competent characters. They often show up as the
protagonists, good friend. What maybe that's
a best friend or a love interest or
sometimes as a mentor. This character often knows the protagonist's
inner thoughts and feelings that they don't share with everyone
else necessarily. Sometimes the
confidant character changes over the course
of the story are, for example, friends
turning into lovers. The confidant is
who the protagonist chooses to confide in. Next, I'd like to talk about
the caregiver archetype. They are closely connected
to the protagonist as well. They support their
journey and they can show up as numerous roles
such as parents, teachers, mentors, neighbors, or maybe
even religious leaders. They are carrying
like their name says, as they push the protagonist
along their journey. The caregiver can also be the
confidant and vice versa. Moving on to the foil
or villain character, they often clash with
the protagonist, but that doesn't always have
to be your antagonists. They are often fundamentally
opposite of the protagonist. Sometimes the foil becomes
the protagonist friend, and they develop a
different type of relationship with
the protagonist. The foil is usually a very
self-serving character that is often
unlikeable at first, but that can change over time. Draco Malfoy, for example,
from Harry Potter, is always the first character that comes to mind
when I hear villain. If you've read the series, then you see their
relationship changes over time and you see how
different they are as well. Next, let's talk about
the hero character. This is typically
your protagonist They embody everything that we consider heroic in
the real-world. They are an ordinary character navigating extraordinary
circumstances. There are different types of
hero archetypes depending on the genre or the type of here was in that
they're displaying. You should do your research
independently about this one. That way you can have
a better understanding of the different
types of examples. There are so many different
types of heroes that you can explore if you'd like to incorporate that type of
archetypes and your story. This character
also keep in mind, goes beyond fantasy or comics. This leads me to the anti-hero, which is an atypical hero
that is heavily flawed. And they challenge
the norms of what a hero looks and acts like. This character is
unconventional and they may challenge morality in the
process of their journey. The anti-hero is usually your doodle agonist rather
than your protagonist. So Robin Hood is my favorite literary example
of an anti-hero. Next up, let's talk
about the jester. This character also provides comedic relief to your story. They are likable
characters who often have a close relationship
with the protagonist. They are easy to
identify because they are typically people
who bring joy, laughter, and light the
protagonist's life. They created a touch
of humor to the story, and sometimes they do
that unintentionally. The gesture doesn't
always have to show up as the class
Cloud, for example. Sometimes they are the character that doesn't take
social cues well, or they're just so blunt that their observations
and personality, It's just naturally comedic. Let's also talk about
the magician characters. They can show up as
a protagonist and antagonist or another
supporting character. They aren't always
literal magicians or even have actual magic. They are, however, very
powerful, intelligent, skilled, or strong
characters who are seeking more power
than they already have. This character might be a
leader who has power hungry or a villain who just makes life very hard for the protagonist. Or maybe they even are a magical creature
who can cast spells. The rebel is a courageous, resourceful leader who is
also a flawed character. They see that something
in society is broken and they rebel
against the status quo. They are unapologetic
about being themselves and they want change. So a huge part of their journey
is creating that change. You see the protagonist take on the rebel archetype a
lot in dystopian novels. Next, I'd like to touch
on the mentor character. Sometimes we refer to that
character as the sage. And their purpose is to teach
the protagonist something. This archetype is not exclusive
to characters who are in teacher or mentor
coaching Roles. Many characters outside of the protagonist and antagonist
can hold this archetype. But this is a great character to reinforce the theme
of your story with. They are wise, they provide
insight and perspective on life that your protagonist's otherwise might not
have considered. Now, keep in mind that not all characters
are human either. This is not an archetype. I just wanted to
remind you of this. Some writers personify animals and objects in certain genres. When this happens, the writer
is challenged with not only developing a
well-rounded character, but also thinking like
a non-human subject. So what would a dog, a
chair or a cloud thing? How can they communicate? What do they have to say? What is their motivation? There are plenty of stories out there with rich
non-human protagonists, such as in water shipped down, Animal Farm Beauty
and the Beast. Animals and objects can be
brought to life and take on any of the roles are archetypes that I've mentioned
in this section. While there are many
Archetypes out there, I wanted to mention
some of the most common that I've
seen in Literature. If you have a character
archetype that you love and you want to share your knowledge about in the discussion section. Please feel free to. Now that we've covered
some Roles and Archetypes, I'd like to give
you some insight on creating characters
with a purpose. All characters should
serve a purpose. Some purposes are bigger and more important to the
story ark than others. But unlike in film, when you might have several
extras and a bar that don't speak or interact
with the main characters. In Fiction and less
the Character acts, reacts or is noticed by the main characters
in that scene. They are not
considered characters and won't be mentioned at all. I've used the following
example in many of my courses. So this may sound familiar if
you're a returning student. It's the perfect way to explain characters and their purpose. Your plot is like the car. I'm not talking about
autonomous vehicles here. So the car requires
a driver to move it. Your protagonist is
your driver majority of the time and less. Of course, your book changes perspectives and then your
car has multiple drivers, or multiple cars with drivers. The point here is that a plot is driven
by the characters. Without characters,
you have no plot. Therefore, it's important
to know your characters. So you know how they
would drive the car. Will they make good or smart
decisions behind the wheel? Or are they inexperienced
or irrational drivers? Are they aware of
their surroundings? Are still learning how to
navigate the world around them? Are they quick thinkers? Are problem-solvers? Do they need support
behind the wheel? Do they care about the
choices they make? Are they even capable
of driving at all? If the answer to that
last question is no, then you're character
needs to be workshopped. If you don't know enough about your character to
know their next move. This character is not developed enough to drive a storyline. Like I mentioned before, all character should
serve a purpose. Your main characters
are doing most, if not all of the
decision-making with your protagonist
at the wheel. These characters are reacting
to your protagonist moves. Minor characters should also serve a purpose to
help advance a scene, even though they aren't doing any real big decision-making. For example, the waiter
in the diner that has an attitude because
the protagonist can't decide on what
they want to eat, is revealing many things
about themselves and the protagonist without
having a backstory, a ton of dialogue, or any connection to the protagonist
outside of the scene. The waiters purpose is to
build the scene and to reveal that the protagonist is possibly finicky or distracted, or just likes to take their time when making minor decisions. As you develop characters, you should always
be asking yourself, what purpose does
this character serve? If you can't answer
this question, it's important to put
this character on the backburner until that
question can be answered. Asking yourself, is this
character required for this scene is a guiding question to help you revise
your existing work.
3. Taking Care of Characters: Now that you understand the importance of
purposeful characters, we can discuss how to
take care of them. And the next section, taking Care of Characters. The characters we
create our hours. We gave them life. When we do so, it's
important to treat them like the real and build them
with authenticity. So who they are translates
clearly to the reader. I grew up during a time
when there weren't a lot of books in my public library
with black protagonist. Therefore, most of
the books I read usually had one identified
black character. And one thing I noticed was that authors bought into many of the stereotypes that
the people living in my town also bought into. These white characters
weren't very developed. And when they were,
their family life and backstories
were very similar, was filled with struggle, maybe an absent parent. Or often they faced racial disparities as the
root of their storyline. All this is to say while
libraries and authors, if young adult fiction of come a long way with diversifying how people that look like me are represented in
mainstream Literature. There's still a risk
we run when we create characters that come from a different background
than our own. This is not to discourage
you from developing characters who aren't
like you in any way. It's just to remind you
to avoid stereotypes and bias as much as possible unless it's necessary
to the plot. When I first started writing, my main characters
were never black. Part of this is because I wrote stories that I like to read. I also wasn't very comfortable in my own
identity at the time and prefer to
escaping into a world of privilege that I
didn't grow up in. My mother and sister
who are also writers, asked me why none of my
main characters were black. And I took some time to
analyze why I was so afraid to write for my own perspective
and tap into what I know. I don't feel that
those characters I created were inauthentic
necessarily. But there are things
about them that I could never understand. Due to my age, race, gender. Had I tapped into things
I know and had lived. The story is, I wrote,
as a younger writer, may have been more powerful. Stereotypes are deeply
ingrained in our culture. This general belief
about a group of people is not only harmful, but in Writing simplifies to this character will become
by the end of the story. If you want to character to be perceived as dynamic and unique, you can't give them
to stereotypes. There are ways to
limit your characters based on gender and
gender identity, religion, nationality,
social status, age, or physical appearance. If you're not sure
if you're character is falling into the trap of a stereotype than it's your
job to do the research. The easiest way to
figure this out is to define the things I just listed. Then type in stereotypes
for that group. Ignorance is not a defense. If you create a character
who is stereotypical, readers might find
it distasteful. In the same way, choosing to lean into these stereotypes for whatever reason you justify
it is, is you're right. I also want to mention
literary bias here. We know that bias is when facts are replaced
with opinions. Because all stories have a theme or lesson to
be learned by the end, it's easy for our natural
bias to get in the way. It's okay to teach your
beliefs throughout a story. But it's important
to ensure that the information your
characters present, especially if
you're dealing with history, real people, laws, or anything that
can be proven as a fact is presented accurately. If, for example, your character
is ignorant to a fact, It's important that
you as the author, clear up that fact in
some way so that readers are not being fed inaccurate
information is truth. Our youth is extremely
impressionable and they learn a lot of what they
know about life and the world around
them through Literature. Creating an authentic experience for your readers is important. My best advice for
creating characters who come from a background
different from your own, who don't share the same
culture or customs as you do, maybe older than you, or have lived through
experience you haven't, is to do your research off
the Internet to get to know more about the things that
you don't know personally. In the same way you research a setting to ensure accuracy. You can ask questions, observe cultural
norms and traditions, even asked to participate. It's important to immerse
yourself so you can best to pick the things that have
shaped who they are. Being culturally sensitive and accurate as part of being
a responsible writer. Don't just assume because
of what you've read in a book or one interaction that
you've had that you know, all there is to know. Yes, there may be
plenty of people that fit the Character
you're creating, but it's important to know that what you are presenting
is not only accurate, but it's a fair representation. The older I get,
the more I realized how different norms are from
one household to another. There are some things
that are supernormal in your household that some people might not even consider
to be necessary. Sometimes these norms
come from the region of the world you live in,
such as colloquialisms. And it's a good idea to do your research on those as well. Moving on to the subject
of colloquialisms, my husband jokes
with me all the time about how New Yorkers taught and the colloquialisms he
uses are extremely dated. Like his main reference
is how people in New York talked from
'90s music videos. Of course, he's kidding in
the comfort of our home. But this is a real
problem for some writers. If you're creating
characters who are born and raised in a place
you've never visited. It's important to
do your research on the slang sayings and speech
of people from that region, as well as from that time
period that your writing in to ensure accuracy of
language and dialogue, readers will quickly realize if you haven't done your research. And this is also something
that goes beyond the Internet. Take a trip, talk to
people from that area. Listen well and take notes. Accuracy is the key
to authenticity. My next point is about choosing appropriate language
and actions. Now when I say
appropriate, I mean, would this character
really say or do that in order to know that you need to
know your character. In middle-school my class read the pin balls by Betsy buyers. The main character, Carly
is rightfully hostile and skeptical due to
her history of abuse. I remember this book
so vividly because Carly hat off foul Now, do I want my kids
talking like Carley? No. But was this language
appropriate for the type of character Carly was
despite her age? Absolutely. Buyers knew what her
character would sound like based on lived experiences. You must know what things you're character would and would not say in order to create the most accurate and
authentic dialogue for them. The same way you must know
what their boundaries are, what things will
or won't they do, except are given to readers sense when I character is
not acting like themselves. And the only way
they'll know this is through how you present
them in the opening scenes. And as they change over time. The final point I want
to make about caring for our characters is The
Art of killing them off. While murder is not an Art, removing characters
permanently from your Writing is not all books will have a character pass away
or be phased out. But the, in the event that
you choose to do this, it's important that
you do so with Care. Yes, death can happen suddenly, but it's important
to know your genre, your audience, and the weight
that this character holds. In terms of genre,
you have to know the physical limits of
your world as well. Is this death realistic in this world you've
built for the genre? When I mentioned audience, death for juvenile
Fiction should be handled much differently than
death for an adult novel. Juvenile Fiction isn't
going to include Gore in detailed
descriptions of death. Making mention of death or
loss is not inappropriate. This is a natural part
of the life cycle. But how do you introduce
depth to this audience? It, or how you do
it, I should say, is part of taking care
of your characters. But more importantly,
taking care of the mind of young readers. Young adult fiction
geared towards teens might include more
detailed descriptions, but it won't be anything like what you'd find in adult lit. Knowing your audience is
a big part of knowing how you can approach death
or loss in your writing. When we talk about the
weight the Character holds, I'll use the example of
the Harry Potter series. So spoiler alert if this is
on your to be read list. When Dumbledore dies,
his death holds a lot of weight to the
characters and to the readers. This is because JK Rowling did a great job developing
this character, connecting him to
the protagonist and also to the rest of the
characters in the story. Dumbledore played a huge role in his death was felt by
readers around the world. Losing Dumbledore didn't
destroy what remained of the series because she
did this with Care. His death was justifiable despite being sad because
it was authentic. It's important
that your readers, that you give them time to mourn and a reason to
also keep reading. Also be sure that depth is productive to the plot so that readers
understand your why. Hopefully this
section is help you understand ways to care for the characters
that you create by making them as
authentic as possible
4. Character Creation: Now that you
understand some things to consider about
character building, Let's get into
character Creation. This section is going
to cover some things to consider rather than take you through creating
character step-by-step. The earlier lectures have
taught you how to classify your characters and
things to be aware of. The Character
Development Resource provided at the end
of this course, should help fill in any
of the blanks that you're still unsure about by
the end this lecture. To begin, if you
have story ideas, you naturally have
character ideas. The problem you're likely
running into is how to take flat static characters and
make them round and dynamic. Let's start with putting a
name to your characters. Shakespeare once asked
what's in a name. Some people believed
that name shape our identity and our destiny. Others believed that names
don't mean much at all. I am one of those people who believed that names
are important. And as parents, we should take great consideration
into the meaning of the names that we choose. When it comes to
creating characters, almost all main characters
will have a name. Half the time when I'm
creating my characters, they're named just
simply comes to me. And the other half, the
name is well-researched. I look at the origin and what it means in
different languages. Sometimes I start with
conducting my research. For example, I'll look up
names that mean bravery. I don't believe
that people always embody the meaning
of their given name, but I do think it's
FUN when readers investigate a unique
name that I've assigned to a
character and realized that it fits their
characteristics. Another thing to consider when naming characters is how easily readers will be
able to distinguish between other characters. Have you ever read a book
where the two main characters have super similar names, like Carlene kami For example. In the beginning it was probably hard to
remember who ASU, especially if the
characters weren't much different personality
or appearance wise. If your characters
are siblings and they have names with the
same first letter, well then that's an exception to consider when naming characters. There are no rules, but I would ask yourself, Well, my readers be able to easily differentiate them
between other characters. And does the name field like
the right fit for them? Now, onto my favorite part
of character Creation, which is establishing backstory. Backstory is the
defining information about a Characters past, their history, the things about their life before
the story started. That's important
to understanding who they are in present day. Not all stories require a character's backstory
to be presented, but that doesn't mean that you shouldn't explore
it as the writer. All of your main
characters should have a well-established backstory
during the planning process. This information
helps you to guide your decision-making and to determine the changes
that they'll undergo. Sometimes backstory will never
be revealed to the reader, but it can be explored in
many ways through flashbacks, dialogue, or internal thoughts. For most characters, you can consider their backstory
at a surface level, much like a resume. What are the key
pivotal moments that define this character's
personality? For your protagonist
and your antagonist. However, you might want
to dive a bit deeper. Think about their
family history, tap into their trauma. What are their strengths
and weaknesses? What do they want out of life? Knowing the answers to
these questions is like being an unlicensed
behavioral therapist. How can I better understand why this character thinks
and feels this way? By looking into their past and understanding the
patterns and thought processes that are shaping their decision-making
and beliefs. For your minor characters, you might not want to
explore any backstory and instead jot down a few
defining Adjectives. Next up is creating
variety and uniqueness. It's easier to tell characters
apart by their traits. Think about your
family for a moment. Does everyone have the same
personality? Likely not. Your beliefs might
be the same due to your environment and
your primary teachers, such as parents or leaders. You might have different
passions and interests. Even if some things
are the same. It's important that when
building characters that you do give them differences
that set them apart. Just like we are all unique, your characters should also have things that set them apart. Well-developed characters
or like a layered cake. I challenge you to choose your favorite literary character and examine their layers. Who are they on the outside? Or how are they perceived by the people in
their storyworld? How do they view themselves? How do I want to be perceived? Because sometimes that's
different from what others see. How do you view them based on what you know about
them from your reading? What interests and desires do they hold that the
world knows about? What do they secretly like
or want for themselves? How do their internal and
external motivations differ? Once you examine all the layers, it's easy to see who
they are as a character. Your main characters
should be layered as well. There more than what meets the
eye and first impressions. You are in the driver's seat
when you create characters. This is the time to flex
your creative wings and give life to someone the
world has never seen before. If you believe in the power of your character and you get
to know them inside and out is a good chance that your readers will be
invested in their journey. That's the mission of
creating characters to give the reader someone or
something to be invested in. Sometimes the people
around us become the foundation for the
characters we create. We leave a little
bit of ourselves in the characters that we
give our attention to. Don't be afraid to
get feedback on your characters before
you start writing, either
5. Character Analysis: Now that we've covered
character Creation, I'd like to touch on
character Analysis. When we analyze characters, we're taking a deep
look into their role in the story there traits
and personality. But also what they're
going through. This section is all
about helping you create characters that
are worth analyzing. We've covered all the things a well-developed character will be from dynamic two, unique. And who you say character is, is different from
who will character sometimes reveals themselves
to be in your story. A characters who
they think they are, who they say they are, and who they reveal
themselves to be. What I mean by this is
their internal thoughts and external responses are
all the reader has to rely on as they get to
know your characters. Dialogue reveals a lot. What they say, how they say it, their vocabulary, and their presentation of
ideas is very telling. Some characters don't
always say what's on their mind or tell the truth, which lets us know
that they might be shy or even dishonest. But it could also be a
reflection of their lack of comfortability or
that they want to protect the feelings of the
person they're speaking to. A character might
be condescending in their language or
be very diplomatic. These things don't
need descriptions. I'm going to take
this to a personal place for just a second. An old roommate of mine
used to always say, your words mean something
when I get flustered and say, I don't know how to explain it. This would encourage me to stop, think and find the right words to explore what I was feeling. This exchange tells you
a lot about us both. My roommate was a
straight shooter patient and sought understanding. Me at that time, I struggled with
expressing emotions and prefer the easy way
out of conversations. But in the same way, I was emotionally intelligent
when challenged. Someone might argue that this is a very deep analysis based
on very little information. But this is what character
Analysis is all about. Some readers love to analyze
characters and are able to infer and conclude things with very
little information. When you read a
scene, a good way to ensure that your characters
are becoming who you want them to be to your
reader is to analyze how they interact with other
characters within a scene. What is their dialogue
saying about them? Is this what you want
readers to get from that? How we react under pressure
in times of desperation, when we're in an emotional state or when we're trying to please. Other also tells us a lot about the type
of people we are. These are just some examples, but it's important to
note that readers are observing your main
characters every move. If the answer is ever know, this is not what
I want my readers to think about this character. When you're done
reading a scene, it is now your job to figure
out what you need to do to make the dialogue match your
characters characteristics. In the same way if you're
writing in first-person, it's important that internal
thoughts match up as well. Hello character thinks and speaks may not
always be the same. For example, maybe
you're character is very buttoned up
and strategic in how they speak to others
due to where they live and work and the people they surround
themselves with. But maybe internally their
thoughts are chaotic and shrewd and all around
different from how they act. This is where those observations and descriptions
will come into play. External responses or how a character reacts to
a certain situation. Your characters are making
choices around every corner. Will or won't die is always
looming over their head. If a character has shown themselves to be a
rational thinker the entire length of
the book and then suddenly makes a very
irrational choice. The reader is going to want to understand why this
came out of the blue. To some extent, characters
should be predictable, but predictable
doesn't equal boring here, it equals sensible. If a character is XYZ, then they will react in
this particular way. Yes, characters can
get out of character, but there might be a
catalyst that sets them off. Sure, sometimes characters do
things that are unexpected, but that response must make
sense to who they are, what they're capable of, and who they are becoming. External responses are very telling and part of
dictating those responses. And knowing the Character
well enough is knowing the Character well enough
to be there puppeteer. It's important to reflect
on who your characters are, just like you reflect
on your Writing. Holistically. Readers
can be tough critics. They will always
mentioned if there's something inauthentic
about a character, because it's hard
to connect with characters that either aren't realistic or so far from people we've interacted
with in the past. This interaction could
be in real life or within other books or other
storytelling devices. I'm sure most of us don't personally know a serial killer, but we know what to
expect because we have exposure to this type of
character through storytelling. Just like in the
criminal justice system, behavioral analysts can create profiles on who their
suspect might be. Readers are your books
behavioral analyst. They are using their
background knowledge to make connections to your
characters as they read. In this section, we talked
about ways to analyze your own characters to test their authenticity before they hit center stage in
your next Writing, peace, knowing the ins and outs of your character
and understanding them on a personal level is important to ensuring they are well-represented
throughout your story
6. Conclusion: We've come to the
end of this course on character development. We cover character
Roles and Archetypes. Creating characters
with a purpose, character traits, caring
for our characters, as well as creating
and analyzing them. If you haven't
already downloaded it from the project
section of this course, there is a Character
Development resource that I created for you
to use that will aid in developing
well-rounded characters that your readers will
fall in love with. Please upload a
copy or an image of your completed resource to share your classmates how helpful this resource has been for you. As always, if you'd like
feedback on your document, please feel free
to solicit that. It has been a
pleasure walking you through Character
Development for Beginners. Again, my name is Nia Hogan. And if you found
this course helpful, please leave a positive
review so that other writers can benefit from the information in this course. If you have private
questions or concerns, feel free to e-mail me at novel Writing For
beginners@gmail.com, have been creating or developing your
existing characters. And I will see you in the
next course until next time.