Carrie McKenzie

THE OLD RED BOAT

Hi Florence, what a great painting. I love the colour and texture on the boat, and you've done well with the contrasting marshland. My only suggestion would be to add a touch more blue in the water at bottom right to reflect the stronger blue in the sky at top right, for balance. It's one to be proud of. Thank you also for your lovely review, it really does mean a lot to me. best wishes, Carrie

Hi Carrie, very helpful feedback! (Yes, more blue is needed!) However, I wanted to be sure it was intended for me-it was written under my name but was addressed to Christine. 

Hi Florence - oooops, a thousand apologies, I'm so sorry, you have a comment below from a student called Christine which I read and thought was a lovely comment, so her name must have stuck in my mind! I've edited it now.

Hi Florence... nothing wrong with your reflection:) your painting is beautifully done

I loved doing the layers and marshland!&nbsp;

The old red boat

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