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Hi Anna, sure thing. This is still a conversation and we can look at the principles taught in the class.  Doing it digital gives you lots of options. But that means a lot more to learn in that field. A couple tips for drawing digitally would be to try to keep the line-widths consistent. (unless you are using a brush that has line variation.) When you draw in pencil, you will notice that your lines for the bubbles, panels and characters are pretty much the same, because it's the same pencil. Try to simulate that when doing it digitally. And decide if you are going for a refined tight style or a loose hand-drawn style. Computers are really good at making things look perfect - like you have perfectly straight panel lines. But when combined with stray lines and coloring that is out of the lines, it isn't clear whether it's supposed to be neat or loose. And that can make the art look unfinished or untidy instead of loose. If you are going for a neat style, consider keeping everything more neat and perfect. If loose, keep everything more hand-drawn (including the panels). One or the other. For the panelling, see it as rows. 1st row, 2nd row, 3rd row. So try to keep the heights the same. It helps the reader read according to natural eye flow. What I like is how you ordered the speech bubbles. They flow really well and I read them in the right order. The order I see your characters and the action also works well. Good work on that! The man's features can be more consistent. But his spiky hair makes it easy to tell it's the same person. Practice drawing characters from different angles more (like in the first class). The "Time machine" label is ok. But it can feel a little clunky having a sign popping up suddenly. Explore other creative ways to help identify the machine. Like, have the ghost guy introduce the machine as a "Time machine". That eliminates the need for a sign which can be distracting for the reader and slow down the pacing of the story a little. (Time travel elements are always fun!) Well done on doing a series with a topic you enjoy. That's a great way to keep drawing comics and practice persistence! Keep it up!

Wow!! Thank you so much for the help!! I really appriecate it!! :D 

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/5e156e63bf41612b443a1fa1dedaee9c/e1d12c92.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/5e156e63bf41612b443a1fa1dedaee9c/e1d12c92.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/5e156e63bf41612b443a1fa1dedaee9c/e1d12c92.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Mercy Hill Horror Comic Episode 4 - image 1 - student project">
<img width="534" height="400" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/953b1316.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/953b1316.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/953b1316.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Mercy Hill Horror Comic Episode 4 - image 2 - student project">
 
Here is Episode 4 of my Horror Comic that I am doing for my youtube Channel (Anna's Drawing Channel) and my Instagram, @Emailanna08. If you want the past episodes, go to to my Instagram. I hope it's okay to post this.

Mercy Hill Horror Comic Episode 4

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