Mike Barnes

GarageBand (Mac) für Anfänger: Schreibe einen Song

Hey Juhaidi! Hope you’re doing well mate. Thank you so much for the kind words about the course, so glad you enjoyed it and it helped you out.  Dude, I love this track. I'm constantly listening to lofi when I'm working so this is right up my street. That piano chord progression is beautiful, love that ambient noise that runs throughout the song, the mood of the track is spot on, really like the different layers of sound going on and how the drums come in and out. AMAZING job mate. Is this the first song you’ve produced?In terms of mixing you’ve also done such a good job. I’ve made a couple of notes on what I’d personally change but keep in mind everyone is different and at the end of the day it’s all about your vision and what you like the sound of.- I’d turn down the Ambient noise just a tad. - I’d add some more low end to the bass guitar part to make the track a little wider and warmer. - If you wanted to add some extra percussion in I think that would be really nice. Even just some extra high hats or taps would be cool. Apple loops are great for throwing in bits like that! - Love the keyboard sound you’ve used that comes in at 1:06, but I reckon you could change a couple of the notes used and it would sound even sweeter!  Seriously though, amazing job on this. Please keep it up and feel free to send over any edits/new songs you come up with. (Also really like the animation you’ve used on the video, so cool!)Have a great day!

Hey Mr Mike, I am doing good and hope you're doing great as well. Thank you so much for the feedback. I did some changes to the mix based on your recommendations and Yes I absolutely agree with you in regards adding the low end for the bass guitar. It made the track a wider than before. 

To be honest, this isn't my first song. I've produced two previous songs before with the help of youtube. After producing those two songs, I wanted to get to know more about producing and my DAW so I came to Skillshare because the youtube tutorials were just toooo long and it was boring. 

With that being said, This is my third song and I am very happy how it turned out right after attending your classes. I think because now I know how to engage with garageband better than before. 

Yes hats off to my neighbour who lives down the street because he is in animation school and we collaborated. lastly, I will definitely continue to produce more songs and share it with you for more feedback. Cheers :) all the way from Malaysia. 

P.S: My real name is suhail as I am currently using my cousin's account. I am really sorry for not clarifying this earlier.

Hey Suhail! Thanks so much for the kind response. So glad to know the feedback was useful. Ah man for your third song you're doing amazing, it took me so long to get to the level you're at now, great job! Have a great week.

Hello Mr Mike, I've really enjoyed your Garageband classes and thank you so much for simplifying on how to operate the software. Anyways I've produced a track of my own and I would like to get some feedback of the song, especially the mixing. Thank you.&nbsp;
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link to the song:&nbsp;https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpOP-2KnTLs&nbsp;

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